Date: 08/14/16 06:16 pm Title: Swallow!
Ohh cornrows are so hard to wash the smell out of.... Evil Georg is my favorite Georg (:
Date: 02/15/12 03:45 pm Title: Stay?
*happy sigh* :)
I really admire of how you have the courage to write such triggering topics and you do it so well, bring out the very cord of it, which is not sick, twisted or abusive, but a form of löove, care and tenderness. It shouldn't be unclear to anyo0nme after this. So much love, so much.
Very lovely chapter. And the fic! I really enjoyed this and could have read this forever... Damn for making me want more and more and more of this fic. :D. Oh well, all the rest in an email, so... :)
And sweet, lovely Tom... *sigh* :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you say so and I'm so glad it came out that way, because to me, that is exactly what this is, a love story, a story about caring and going that extra mile for someone you love, both for Tom to ask for the things he wants and needs (even if he doesn't to it with words) and for Georg to give that to him, it takes a lot of trust frombothof them. rn
rnI'm glad you liked it, and so happy you read this, a TOrg as it is. And well, there will be more...;-)rn
Date: 02/12/12 10:07 pm Title: Stay?
Wow. As shocking and hardcore as this story was, it was equally sweet. Nice job on the psychological elements.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you think so! I was worried before I tested it on some friends, about how it was going to be viewed (even if I don't think this is extreme in any way, I guess it can come across like that on a site like this.) Guess some don't really want to comment a story like this (consider that each part had had more view than the one before but so few say anything at all) so that some does means even more to me, so thank you so much for both reading and reviewing!
Date: 02/11/12 01:32 pm Title: Stay?
Amazing chapter. I have really enjoyed this story, it was hot/kinky but slightly sad and tender at the same time. You could tell Georg had so much love for Tom, and Tom trusted Georg explicitly. Lovely, lovely, lovely. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it and even happier you tells me! I'm glad it came out that way, I didn't want to write just smut (and thinking of this being a bit heavier kinks, I was afraid it would be too "hard" and "cold" with only sex.) but to have some feelings, if not a plot so at least some relation between the men. rnThank you so much for your review!
Date: 02/04/12 07:09 pm Title: Breathe!
I'm not surprised that this chapter might not be for faint hearted people. You really seem to dive deep into so controversial, taboo-ish topics that I thinlk few people dare to anything about. Other one is (often misunderstood) daddy play/certain infatatalism or complete regression and opther one is breath play.
I must say that breath play scares the shit out of me. I know it is not as dangerous when done right, but it is very dangerous thing in wrong hands. It scares me, so it was a bit uncomfortable to read. Same goes with violence, which was funny, since I apparently have moods either for it or against it. Right now it seems to be a turn off to me.
I love the way you handle regression in here. It's closing to so complete surrender, letting go of everything that it's very interesting.
I'll be writing you an email soon, so I talk about these more in private, but I just wanted to say that I love the way you keep writing these triggering things.l Still very much in my fav's. :)
Author's Response: No, I guess it isn't (the fact that you are the only one commenting it hear says a lot, this part has over 200 views and not a word LoL )And I guess I do, and will do, I know it gorss some peopel out, scares others, but it's interesting to write, to explore for my own sake, and I'm glad as long as anyone reads. Hm, maybe I should se that as something postive, that I manage to make it...a bit to much? even for you ;-) (oh, it will come nicer things in other parts of this serie, I promise that!) And it is scary, I guess that is the whole point with it, and Georg are crule here, as it is mostly Tom that would have enjoyed it if Georg had let him, but I guess that is also a part of the dom side? I'm looking forward to that and thanks, I'm glad to here. I have now finished the last chapter of this, will send it to my beta tonight. And realized that I just written, as this fic really is only one, long sceene, a 12200 word long sex sceene. That must be some kind of record here, musten it?
Date: 01/17/12 04:56 pm Title: Swallow!
This... What?.... I.... I don't know what to say, woman!
I feel like I am both incredibly embarassed top even read this and findinmg this do incredibly hot that I can't take it. It's like blowing my mind. So twisted (not wrong, because there's no wrong in what two adults do consensually), sop easily judged, but yet the certain BEAUTY of it so visible. So incredible intimacy, trust and openness. Something that is so hard to reach until we are pushed to our limits.
People might find my comment weird,. but I think this chapter had just strong intimacy and so fragilöe vulnerability, our most innest needs torn open that it couldn't be wrong in anyway,. Some comment this as abuse, but I disagree. Abuse is something you don't want, but people can want strange things. I know I do and sometimes it's hard to understand that someone's abuse is someone's love.
I'll email you tonight, because I have to. Gsus woman... And THANK YOU, you know why :)
Author's Response: Oh, don't be embarassed! And you are so right, there is nothing wrong in this, nobody who gets hurt in anyway, quite the oposite. And I'm so glad that you can see how I meant, read this as I hope I wrote it, it is something so... fragil and vulnerable about all of this, so much trust. I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 01/16/12 06:29 pm Title: Swallow!
Jeez. I know I'm a bad, bad girl for finding this incredibly sexy, but dom Georg and sub Tom are so hot. More please.
Author's Response: Nah, look at me then, who written it LoL Bad girls has more fun, don't you know? And mm, it's a nice combination, isn't it. There will be more soon!
Date: 01/16/12 05:12 pm Title: Swallow!
I liked it. :) You're describing a great kind of bond here, a very paradoxical, yet interesting and human one. G.'s care, mixed with the need for something more felt like a really important part. I'm not very fond of blood in general, but little is okay, I suppose. :3 Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad to hear that you liked it, and that the bond between the boys shines through, it's so much more than just sex in what they do, but I was afraid I wouldn't be able to put it down in words. Oh, there are a little blood in this, but not much more than it has already been (I think it is in the very begining of the next chapter...) And I will :) Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/16/12 01:39 pm Title: Talk?
Amazing. Can't wait for chapter 3.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it,I will update now!rnThanks for your review!
Date: 01/15/12 11:21 pm Title: Clean?
oh my god :D i cant handle this its so amazing!!!!! i hope you update soon
Author's Response: thanks, and I will, in just a few minutes!
Date: 01/15/12 04:41 pm Title: Clean?
OMG woman!!! That was just too hot! That was the fucking hottest thing I've read in a long time and I don'¨t try to deny it. yes, I am sexully twisted and all, but I don't care, but you put them (even if Torg is not my favorite paring) into posirions and pulled the string I can't possibly resist.
Holy shit... That's all I can say. Please, more soon?
Author's Response: And I'm SO happy you liked this! I was a little hesitant when I posted this unbetad to some friends before, I mean, it pretty much shows how deeply disturbed I am, right? But found out I'm far from the only one so yeah... no limits in this one, I promise you that. And I know it isn't, I didn't thought it was any point telling you about the story, as I didn't expect it was something you would like to read. I'm so glad I was wrong. And yes, more soon, tomorrow or so, have one more chater finised and another half written...
Date: 01/15/12 04:40 pm Title: Clean?
Oh, yes, this was pretty amazing. The only flaw was that it ended so soon. xD I'd really liked it if I could see the end of this, but I hope my wish will be granted soon, because I really love this story. :3 It's very nicely written, very smoothly and fluently. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I'm so glad you like it, I know I'm a little... disturbe for writting it, but hey, it's nice with a little heavier kinks from time to time, right? And thanks, I often feel a bit downhearted about my writing so I'm so glad then somebody comments on how it's written too. The next part isn't that far away, maybe tomorrow or the day after...
Date: 01/15/12 04:29 pm Title: Talk?
ASDFGVJKLÖJHGYTDUFghjjklöjöä!!!!
So good, so, so good... Boldly written submissive Tom. No limits. I love it.
I love you, you know that? *runs to the next chapter*
Author's Response: LOL And wow! I never thought you would read this one, but oh, I'm glad you do and even happier that you like it! Love you too, my sister in kinks ;)
Date: 01/15/12 06:59 am Title: Talk?
Sounds good so far, I just don´t know what to think about this?
Author's Response: It's just the first part, so well yeah, not easy to base an opinion on, right? The next part will be up later today or tonight. Thanks for your review :)
Date: 01/14/12 05:31 pm Title: Talk?
I actually really, really want to see where this is going. :3 It looks like an awesome story and your style's definitely something! Great first chapter, can't wait for more. ^^
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it and that my style works for you (I know it is a bit...odd.) The next chapter will probably be up tonight :)