Date: 05/24/26 06:43 pm Title: Modeling:
I after all like this ending, BUT hear me out.. I think the twins would benefit hugely from having the G’s in the know and able to back them up and keep them safe in some situations like having a bit of an eye and ear out and such which is only realistic and would solve lots of situations and fears and it’s also what the G’s would do in most stories with how they are as persons and friends to the twins, and also ofc it’s great if the twins can communicate better and not let it get to them being too risky in their behaviour cause or for example jealousy and such when they communicate poorly, that’s why I also feel a bit angry over the fact that it ended without Tom ever getting to learn about Bills kiss with Andy.. yet it’s also the fact that they were very young and it was a one time mistake and it would maybe only worsen things and perhaps end Tom and Andy’s friendship and stuff so perhaps it’s a little secret that can be buried and clearly was but yeah.. regarding the twins acting carelessly in real life one time or at least a bit (they had guards outside making sure no one came near the door apparently) but on a party event around 2008 the twins went into a bathroom together to *look for a ring* for 25-30 minutes ;D clips and short interviews from their night show them quite tipsy and flirty and very touchy before that happened ahahah our passionate boys
Date: 05/24/26 05:08 pm Title: Conformity:
Yeah you say yourself that there’s way too much angst even hehe ^ good that you know it too :) but it makes a positive ending sweeter i guess you thought also, which is after all true, but it could have been a liiiill bit less angsty;) and the twins feels like they’re smarter than this; smart enough to know they should just lie and agree with the idiot Dr so they can quit seeing him and heal thereafter with the help or Alan, but they’ll do that now so :) (a)
Date: 05/24/26 04:54 pm Title: Persuasion:
Yeah, absolute weak minded Bill fr, he gets on my nervessss xD but yeah I ABSOLUTELY don’t see why they don’t call Alan to still get his help even if it’s on the side on calls, and they should be able to choose to switch to someone else also regarding the gross idiot “therapist”. But while they see him I don’t understand how they don’t come to the conclusion themselves that they should just fool him and say they want to quit and see other people so they can get out of there fast and just continue together but very much more discreet and while having phone talks with Alan also to help, but yeah yet again, then it wouldn’t be much of a long story if the focus is mental health and therapy mainly ;> I’m calm now… for a bit more again atleast ihihi! Atleast you’ll get honest thoughts and engagement in your story, which I still very much like btw (a)
Date: 05/24/26 04:47 pm Title: Persuasion:
So the half hour in the waiting room wasn’t enough time to talk with each other about not saying too much or taking the Doctors words to heart / lying to get out of there which they realistically absolutely could have done since they’ve lied and manipulated to keep their secret and other secrets their whole life being under people’s scrutiny..? And also I don’t really get why they just didn’t say that they wanted to speak to their regular therapist and lie and say that he didn’t know about them doing anything since there’s no way for anyone besides their parents to know if that’s the truth or not anyhow.. but David is obviously a piece of shit in this fic ^^, Imma stop now fr, I’ve already said I will stop whining but one just get frustrated sometimes heheh.. I as I’ve said have read it before and know it will end atleast sort of good but I just wish there had been a tiny bit less drama and more love and passion and strength between the twins like they show in real life more often (a) and also a bit more support from their surroundings atleast from SOME of their closest ones; which by the way if they have eyes and a brain would see the twins passionate love for each other like so many do in real life too.. and like the G’s for example are like they’re biggest supporters and ally’s in real life, but anyway, it’s for the plot I knows I knows (a)
Date: 05/24/26 01:59 pm Title: Humiliation:
They HAVE someone to guide them and could call him any night really, but they insist on being stupid, also bill continues being stupid regarding feeling so hurt and upset that a girl FORCED herself on Tom when he was in freeze mode while he still hasn’t come clean about the kiss.. I just wanted to say it, still haven’t read the full chapter yet, will do it now, saw the last line while scrolling down to comment ; great >_< here comes the super drama.. I don’t remember why they DO get to go to a therapist now and that they can’t go to Alan but I’m sure I’ll find out soon and that it’s a legitimate reason but still .. they CAN call him whenever but chooses not to Ughhhh haha
Date: 05/24/26 01:39 pm Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
So bill didn’t confess the kiss now either, got ir… ugh so disappointing, I feel bad for Tom, he got molested by some girl and as soon as Bill understood that HE should be the one sucking up and taking care of Tom now for a bit. And also confess. Okey I’m done raging now… (a) I’m glad they’re back to being good.. for like one chapter or whatever it is before the next final outdrawn shitstorm (a)
Date: 05/24/26 01:39 pm Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
So bill didn’t confess the kiss now either, got ir… ugh so disappointing, I feel bad for Tom, he got molested by some girl and as soon as Bill understood that HE should be the one sucking up and taking care of Tom now for a bit. And also confess. Okey I’m done raging now… (a) I’m glad they’re back to being good.. for like one chapter or whatever it is before the next final outdrawn shitstorm (a)
Date: 05/24/26 11:49 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
So bill didn’t confess the kiss now either, got ir… ugh so disappointing, I feel bad for Tom, he got molested by some girl and as soon as Bill understood that HE should be the one sucking up and taking care of Tom now for a bit. And also confess. Okey I’m done raging now… (a) I’m glad they’re back to being good.. for like one chapter or whatever it is before the next final outdrawn shitstorm (a)
Date: 05/24/26 06:59 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
So bill didn’t confess the kiss now either, got ir… ugh so disappointing, I feel bad for Tom, he got molested by some girl and as soon as Bill understood that HE should be the one sucking up and taking care of Tom now for a bit. And also confess. Okey I’m done raging now… (a) I’m glad they’re back to being good.. for like one chapter or whatever it is before the next final outdrawn shitstorm (a)
Date: 05/24/26 06:46 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
Yet again I had forgotten how Bill just gets worse in this chapter. Ew egocentric delux! No TOM gets to be just as hurt cause YOU cheated worse than him you SOB and have hidden it and he saw Tom trying to call Alan and still let Tom hurt for longer before he finally decides to call lol, i had forgotten how horrible you made Bill out to be in many parts of this fic, and there’s even more drama ahead.. but i think I remember a good ending but yeah I hope Bill crawls on his knees after this NOT Tom (a) and that he drops the narcissism down LOADS, i don’t remember if he does but I think he will… eventually hehe
Date: 05/24/26 06:10 am Title: Learned Helplessness:
I’ve only read the top part but yet again Bill is being a selfish little idiot, the only reason is Tom changing his mind? When he cried and BEGGED not to go out that night yeaaahhh sure thing. Also Tom just sat there frozen which he would’ve seen if he thought on it or probably did see but is too victimized to reflect on, also the fact that he’s sure about Tom but yet he went and kissed someone himwelF by Own choice while sober and then has hid it since then, I get really angry I don’t know why ahah xD I guess the more time goes the more the twins: real and fictional as muses.. they mean SO much to me and I can get real emotional regarding them I guess:) I know things are gonna get solved though, and I hope Tom learns about Bills kiss too.. I don’t remember if he does, but Tom shouldn’t feel guilty for his “cheating” though since he was in literal freeze mode and got forced upon while drunk and possibly drugged
Date: 05/24/26 04:06 am Title: Derealization
I must have somewhere subconsciously remembered about this chapter because I did say a few chapters back I almost wish Tom would get a BJ from some girl because of how Bill cheated while sober and then has hid it since and has often acted quite selfishly.. but this still felt wrong because the girl is forcing it on Tom and either Tom got drugged or he has just checked out / having a sideways drunkness making him tweek out a bit, either way he said no and isn’t even moving at all.. one thing that I know also is for the sake of the drama and plot is the fact that they have a hard time communicating sometimes or rather BILL has a hard time listening to Tom fr like when he said he couldn’t go out and do his persona anymore right now, but also like; why would Tom even go then? He could just claim to be sick or whatever or just that he needs to sleep or there’s lots of reasons and esp since there’s not even been a full year but it’s written like Tom has gone out and acted out his playboy persona more then just one time, so then he can absolutely stay in more / when he feels like it without it being suspicious.. anyhow I know and remember that there will be lots or drama and it will only be solved finally towards the very end and that is beyond frustrating that they don’t call Eagle right now / earlier on when they do HAVE his number and all.. anyway iiiiimma continue x) to watch
Date: 05/24/26 03:06 am Title: Unconditional Positive Regard:
I know it’s for the sake of the plot and the drama but in real life it would absolutely not be such a big deal for celebs to go to therapists and if there were some worry but still need for it there could be a more private setting and schedule or place and / or over the phone, this part is so frustrating esp when we who have read it already remember and know about that they will still end up having to go to another absolute manipulator PSYCHOatrist instead >_< I wish they were smart enough to understand they could continue in private or secret with Eagle over the phone and also I still morn the fact that there still haven’t been a blowjob yet ^^, I thought I remembered there being more smut in this story and def a BJ scene written out esp when it was a first for them but anyway.. there’s so much else this story is about and it’s very good in many ways:)
Date: 05/23/26 08:37 pm Title: Maturation:
Omg Bills selfishness in this chapter makes ME fume, he also thought in his head he wasn’t gonna tease Tom before going for it but yet did it and then didn’t even hang up the phone to call later when it wasn’t anything urgent, and then he also didn’t even realize what he did wrong REALLY?! And yet another moment where the blowjob isn’t written out :,( I almost wish Tom goes to a party and gets a blowjob from a girl before making up with Bill esp since Bill has kissed Andy and not even told him about it also, I’m pretty sure that isn’t what’s gonna happen though but I can’t remember really.. hahah anyways Imma continue now (a)
Date: 05/23/26 01:12 am Title: Disorientation:
Did you really skip over the first blowjob moment / staple ?! Imma be soooo mad if that’s the case :,< with how detailed everything has been and is in this story it would be very disappointing if it were left out but maybe it will be written still or will be seen in a flashback or something, this isn’t the first time reading this story for me but I just can’t remember right now.. and it also drives me crazy that Bill cheated and didn’t confess immediately either.. but I guess it’s sort of fitting for their character arcs / growths / the drama / their ages and maturity and it’s realistic to make mistakes like that sometimes in life even if you’re in love with and together with your 1000 % soulmate / soulflame and sure as one can be about that love and relationship..
Date: 05/22/26 08:07 pm Title: External Locus of Control:
Ahahah the boys are SO adorable when they get jealous and grumpy :,) and in their innocent naive thinking sometimes and sometimes not so innocent, love how you write them in this story
Date: 03/23/26 03:52 pm Title: Modeling:
we. love. you. Not for the "fanfic" you created, but for the absolute masterpiece and alternate reality you've built for us to live in. You have talent, you have passion, and you have made us live the most intense emotions,leaving the most of us sobbing when it was finished. Altough it's over, you are an extraordinary writer and we can't thank you enough for giving us this. Keep on writing, because you are great at what you're doing,. This little book, this little story made me feel like this was the REALITY, and thats hard to achieve. Congratulations.
Date: 03/23/26 02:11 pm Title: Suffering:
we getchu and u will be the best for making this story.burnout sucks.
Date: 03/23/26 09:39 am Title: Learned Helplessness:
this fucking broke my heart
Date: 03/23/26 09:39 am Title: Learned Helplessness:
this fucking broke my heart