Date: 03/31/08 02:32 pm Title: Disorientation:
ooh i cant wait until you update... i sense something very interesting is coming up!
more soon please!
Date: 03/31/08 01:50 pm Title: Disorientation:
i'm worried about when Tom finds out =O
Date: 03/31/08 09:32 am Title: Subjective Reality:
Oh, and forgot to say that I'm dreading for the stupid kiss to be revealed to Tomi - I'm certain it will happen. Maybe that's what pushes him into groupies, if the groupie-thing is to actually happen in this.
Date: 03/31/08 09:29 am Title: Disorientation:
Phew. First off, have to say that the twins definetely were not able to hide their secret from the world :) Then, since the start I've been so eager to see how you'll cope with the part when they come famous. It has been so realistic until now, I definetely am not jealous of you having to put the pieces of their lives we know and do not know about - but I'm ever so thankful you're taking the risk and spoiling us with this. I really hope the twins will get their selves sorted out, in order to have an amazing relationship with each other. Right now, with Tom's raging jealousy and Bill's clinging it's not based on healthy love. I'm not saying twincest is healthy, but it could be more tender and accepting and not this desperate. I am also worried of how Bill was so able to so quickly go to Andreas instead of Tomi, like he just needs someone and not necessary his soulmate. Also, though being almost scary, Tomi warmed my heart with his request to see Doc with Bill - like he´s not completely trying to save/keep Bill from the rest of the world, but he also is willing to humble himself in order for them to work out beautifully. Like no matter how bad things seem now, they have a good chance of coming out of all of this in one piece, together and ever stronger.
Hmm. Make sense, much? At all? :)
Date: 03/31/08 09:21 am Title: Disorientation:
2 words: love it.
Date: 03/31/08 08:01 am Title: Disorientation:
Ok, I have my hat secured, bring it on! ;)
Great chapter! I guess that that kiss will eventually resurface...
Date: 03/31/08 06:46 am Title: Disorientation:
Wow, it's great! I absolutely LOVE this story! :D You're amazing !!
Date: 03/31/08 05:29 am Title: Disorientation:
I don't ever want this to end :(
Date: 03/31/08 05:04 am Title: Disorientation:
im scared about the groupies thingy... they grow so fast..
LOOOOOOOOL!
Date: 03/31/08 04:26 am Title: Disorientation:
OHHH I hope they are still super close and the whole "RAWR I'M TOM AND I SLEEP WITH A BUNCH OF GIRLS" Thing doesn't happen. Whichever way I freakin LOVE your writing ^.^ Keep that bit of fluff, I love it.
Date: 03/31/08 03:35 am Title: Disorientation:
He held his brother with a grip that said “I need you,” stroked him with tenderness that said “I forgive you,” and kissed him with passion that said “I love you”.
I loved that.
And I love how you handled Star Search and how Andi is becoming a threat. I figured he would.
We've got to fic!dump more often. ;)
Date: 03/31/08 02:00 am Title: Disorientation:
Every time you post I'm reminded of how amazing a story this is and how great an author you are. The banter between the boys, the discomfort of Doctor Engle, Andreas unease... it's all painted with such broad strokes of emotion; fitting because at that age that's what your life is. Nothing is really subtle, and you've managed to depict that wonderfully.
Brava amica mia.
Date: 03/31/08 01:37 am Title: Disorientation:
Yay! Awesome! And write faster xD Or you know, whenever you can... but faster... >.> or... Or something. Guh. -prods- I'm so not good at reviews. Mmm, I do wonder what Andreas did after the kiss though, since that's skipped over quite a bit.... p:
Date: 03/29/08 03:07 pm Title: Jealousy:
Yay, another chapter! I've been following this story for a while and I'm really enjoying it, it's quite unique. I loved the bb twins (Tom not talking and Bill with the toy microphone!) but it's interesting to see how they're growing up.
Date: 03/28/08 03:03 am Title: Subjective Reality:
awwwe this is so cute i love it!
Date: 03/26/08 06:37 pm Title: Jealousy:
whoa good chapter! really impressive it made the story really really interesting.
Date: 03/26/08 04:18 pm Title: Jealousy:
Awesome addition. ^^ And now that i think about it, its funny, because there's this show i watch sometmes, and the two brothers are named Alan and Charlie. XDD
Date: 03/26/08 04:13 pm Title: Jealousy:
This is such a great story...i love that they have Dr. Engle...and he does seem like an Alan..as soon i first heard it i liked it...lol
Can't wait for the update
Date: 03/26/08 02:16 pm Title: Jealousy:
aww so sad, i hope Doctor Engle and Charlie have a happy ending along with Bill and Tom of course
Date: 03/26/08 09:29 am Title: Jealousy:
oh no...oh no, oh no, oh no
this is not good is it...
Tom protecting his brother that's good, but Tom getting jelous and agressive not so good
oh my god I'm so nervous about this
and Andy, I don't know if I should feel sorry for the dude or tell him to stay the hell out of the twin's business
I need you to continue this soon...my life depends on it !!!
“Yep. Just gotta find my... my...” Bill trailed off
“Science book. Under the couch,” Tom supplied
this was just pure love honey...made me smile so bad :)
they are just too cute to be true
this chapter kinda gave me the creeps, you know like I feel something bad coming, but I'm insistent on waiting and keep on reading just because it's too good to miss out on
God girls, you got me hooked !!!
love and kisses lucy