Date: 04/03/08 04:47 pm Title: Maturation:
wow incredible chapter! I love your shrink! ;)
Date: 04/03/08 04:22 pm Title: Maturation:
great, as always.
dying for more.
Date: 04/03/08 02:15 pm Title: Maturation:
Aww poor twins, such a confusing time for them. I always feel sad when they're upset or fighting! Hope they're happy soon.
More please? :D
Date: 04/03/08 10:40 am Title: Maturation:
I AM A MAJOR FAN OF DR. ENGLE
**nods**
Date: 04/03/08 09:18 am Title: Maturation:
gahh! poor tom!
left out with a boner xD
Date: 04/03/08 08:52 am Title: Maturation:
Wow! :D I love this so much! This story is amazing! I love the whole idea and it seems so real, like this really has happened ........... Geez. I'm gonna add this as a favorite now ^^ Usually I forget to pick out my favorites, but this is so good! :D Great work hun!
Date: 04/03/08 07:38 am Title: Maturation:
AWESOME update. I was beginnging to think i liked Recessional better, but now, this makes up for it. ^^ I was just going through Analyzed withdrawl. XDD. Unlike last time, the porn definately fits. XDD. GREAT. Although, i have to wonder, is it always Bill sucking Tom? Does Tom ever do the same?
Date: 04/03/08 07:36 am Title: Maturation:
Aww, I love being one of the devils on your shoulder. Oh, circle jerks.
The whole "I need those fingers!" thing was hilarious. I was only thinking guitar-playing until Tom said something and then I giggled profusely.
Even if the sexy scene was unsatisfying, it was still hot. More satisfying ones will be coming anyway. ;)
Tom better no leave forever...
Date: 04/03/08 07:28 am Title: Maturation:
loved that chapter... it was good... and they are growing up!!! unbelievable!!!
Bill is being egocentric!!! yay!
Poor Tomi - love him so much!
Date: 04/03/08 06:56 am Title: Maturation:
I love this so much, all the little details make it so fun and interesting. I love it, love it, love it, thank you. Somehow, it's making me question things about my life, which I find weird since we're taking about a fanfic, no matter how great it is. It always leaves me feeling shaken and having lots of doubts about my behavior towards others. I don't know whether that's bad or not. Anyways, I love it and I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Self-reflection is almost always a good thing.
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 04/03/08 06:54 am Title: Maturation:
It's unraveling because they refuse to talk to each other. I hate that so much!
Hott almost buttsecks. Seriously.
I hope that Bill takes Doctor Engle's words to heart. He was totally selfish, and what made it worse was that he'd already been taken care of! Tom was left high and dry and I don't really blame him for walking out. I would've.
Great job, dahling!
Author's Response:
I'm responding to reviews this time. I don't know why.
I hate when the twins don't talk to each other, but that's what this chapter was about. Tom had to learn the importance of talking and Bill had to learn the importance of listening. Hopefully they will actually learn from their mistakes, but you know my characters always have a mind of their own.
Fourteen year olds can be very egocentric and selfish creatures. Let's hope it doesn't take Bill too long to get over that.
Date: 04/03/08 06:40 am Title: Maturation:
aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww
*cries*
why do you make this so hard? *looks at you through tears*
they lie and cheat and act stupid and ar soooooooo hot in bed good lord that was some moment...no wait that was not what I was talking about
poor tomi and poor bill and screw andreas he's not important ;) you have to help them !!! dr Engle HAS to help them, they have to fix this and be right together
you make me smile and cry and I don't know what to feel anymore, you make me so confused *sniffs*
please continue, but please PLEASE don't breake their hearts...cus if you do I go down with them !
love
Lucy
Author's Response: Hang on to your hat. It's going to get rough here soon. Consider the title of this chapter though. It's about maturation. Tom is learning to talk and Bill is learning to listen. They've leared these lessons now. By the next chapter we'll have moved on to a new challenge.
Date: 04/03/08 06:18 am Title: Maturation:
Oh no!
The anticipation for what is next to come!
Date: 04/02/08 03:11 pm Title: Disorientation:
Oh my god, this just gets better and better by each chapter! I can't wait for another one to come up! :D
Keep up the amazing work, cause I'm looking forward to some more exiting reading^^
Date: 04/01/08 02:35 pm Title: Disorientation:
wow it's going really fast, they're already 13. I was in...7th grade
Date: 03/31/08 10:57 pm Title: Disorientation:
YAY NEW CHAPTER! Plz don't change the neediness the twins have for each other :(
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Date: 03/31/08 05:34 pm Title: Disorientation:
Amazing. Worth the wait.
As for changes.
Will there be dark moments
And if so... I gotta know if there is a light at the end of the tunnel
Date: 03/31/08 04:44 pm Title: Disorientation:
Yaaaay! Love this epic fic. ^^ Star Serch!Bill is so absoluely adorable, but I'm a little disappointed you didnt write more about it, granted it was only a small part of Bill's life...him singing "Its Raining Men" gets me every freaking time. XDD.
Date: 03/31/08 02:59 pm Title: Disorientation:
Aww, cute :3 I like confrontation scenes just as much, though, so I can't wait for when and if tom is told. Keep writing, this chapter was great!