Date: 04/07/08 08:03 pm Title: Homeostasis:
Dude! I can't wait till the next chapter!! Hey, if you're up for it, I would LOVE to write something with you!! ^.^ That would be SO awesome!!!I don't have much, but if you'd like to check out my writing, that would be great! IF you have the time, of course! Thanks much!
TokioHotelForever
Date: 04/07/08 04:23 pm Title: Homeostasis:
T.T LOVE. THIS. FIC. ^-^ When i was younger, even younger than the twins are in this chapter, I was always aware of sex, and the idea of being a virgin, and i know they are both male, but i wonder if they even thought about that when they did this. I dont know if im even saying it right, but...After this, i am really going to hate it when Tom starts having sex with the groupies.
I love how in the pic, you can see a sliver of Bill's belly. XDD. Great chapter! ^^
Date: 04/07/08 02:31 pm Title: Homeostasis:
aww amn what an awesome chapter, i loved it. I was confused at the end, but i just forgot Alan was Dr. Engle?? right??? But i thought his name was CHarles? Or is that his twin???
Man i feel like a bad reader when i forget the story :(
Author's Response: Alan Engles is the doctor the boys see. Charles is his twin. It's okay that you forgot. I expected that a few people would when there are big gaps between chapters.
Date: 04/07/08 11:31 am Title: Homeostasis:
Whoaaa... Nothing left o say to this, I'd love to come across all analyzing and smart, but fuck it: this was so sexy and intense and beautiful and really, orgasmic. And the picture just went for the kill. Those two are just about to getlaid, aren't they cheery. And somehow it warms me that they hadn't done it yet, like horny teenager shmex wasn't what they wanted, but really making love.
And omg, did that last chapter show us that Alan and Charles DID get over the odds and are now
Date: 04/07/08 11:25 am Title: Homeostasis:
Bill looks crazy in that picture.
HOW CAN YOU SAY YOU CAN'T DO SERIOUS? God, that was such an emotionally charged sex scene. You are crazy if you think it was anything but wonderful.
And I was insanely happy when I realized Alan lives with his twin. Seriously. I clapped. Yeah.
Date: 04/07/08 08:47 am Title: Homeostasis:
god that was intense!
the details you put in their love making is just amazing!
i always love their firsts :)
Date: 04/07/08 08:24 am Title: Homeostasis:
bah *falls apart* hamahamhammmhm
that was...I'm shaking honey, that's what it was, it made me tremble!
Fuck that was good !!! great lord have mercey with me cus I don't think I will be able to go back to reality right now, not after this
you made them so conected and just mixed the feeling of fright, lust and love in such an amazing way. It was simply a perfect moment!
Good God I'm so glad you're continuing this cus it's one of the best fics I've ever read and in this chapter they were doing good YEY (I love it when an authour let them have their good moments throughout a difficult fic)
I loved that they've gotten past some of their problems cus it shows that they're maturing and the story is evolving, really good work
now, I'm th kinda girl who would ask you to keep the happiness coming, but it's your fic so do what you must ;) but please don't brake my heart along the way? cus I swear with a fic as marvelous as this you are fully capable of doing just that :)
oh and the thing with alan was a nice twist, although I didn't quite understand it. He got a letter to charles? and charles is obviously living in his apartment, haha I loved that you used much of the same moment with the two of them as you did with Tom and Bill, but why would he throw away the letter???
love
luce
Author's Response:
Yay! You are my 300th comment!
I'm afraid I'm going to have to break everyone's hearts along the way. If the twins were going to live happily ever after from here out I would just end the story here. I'm afraid this is just the calm before the storm. The Kaulitz universe is going to fall apart here very soon, but I promise I will pick up the pieces and put them all back together before the story is over.
The scene with Alan will make sense eventually. In the meantime I am getting a kick out of hearing everyone's theories. I'm not going to confirm things yet. So far I've had a few people think that the letter is TO Charlie and that it means Charlie is living there, but I've also had people think that the letter is FROM Charlie and that he's throwing it away with his junk mail. The person upstairs could be Charlie, or his wife, or just a roommate. Who knows. Maybe I don't even know yet. Sometimes I seriously have no idea what the heck I'm doing. Chapters write themselves and characters have minds of their own.
Date: 04/07/08 08:03 am Title: Homeostasis:
RAWR! I adore this story! Being the update monger I am, I'd been duing waiting for the next chapter! ^.^ Keep it up!
Date: 04/07/08 07:48 am Title: Homeostasis:
Aww wow! This is so good! I love it! I love your writing style and the chapter length is perfect ^_^ Eek! I'm so excited about everything that is to come ! :D Great work!
Date: 04/07/08 03:23 am Title: Subjective Reality:
Dr.Engle is awesome. And I have my suspicious about the ending(;
But oh my gosh, that was so freaking hot
I loved it beyond words(:
Date: 04/07/08 03:17 am Title: Homeostasis:
dun dun DUN. I really like Dr Engle. (Also, nice choice of name. I keep meaning to mention that). Fabulousity as always. ;)
Date: 04/07/08 03:10 am Title: Homeostasis:
that was awesome! But you wanna know the part that made me wanna scream and giggle at the same time? THE ENDING! Dr. Engle and his twin are back together?! Cause that's what it seemed like to me! OH I HOPE THAT'S WHAT IT WAS! Oh, and the twins wanting to feel completely connected to each other was perfect, I love the way you described everything. I loved it!
Date: 04/07/08 03:08 am Title: Homeostasis:
Damn.... that was just... *fans self*
Twistedly hot. Amazing as usual.
Date: 04/07/08 03:05 am Title: Homeostasis:
Aaaaahhhhhh you must write moooooore!!
Date: 04/06/08 09:39 pm Title: Maturation:
WOW!! I FREAKING LOVE this story!! How do you conme up with these things?! You are truly AMAZING!! I would have problems with writing this. I don't know how you do this!
Date: 04/06/08 03:55 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
I'm Addicted!!
Date: 04/05/08 05:18 am Title: Maturation:
Og my god! :O
You always write these amazing chapters, and you always stop whenever I want to know more! :O
But it's worth the waiting, cause this is some of the best work I've ever read.. and I can't wait for the next chapter to come up :D
Date: 04/04/08 02:59 pm Title: Maturation:
Raw, raw emotions - and rawwrr for the sweet smut in between :) Doc is so very clever, I love seeing how the twins are developing on actually having a good, loving relationship. But oh, poor Andi, would not want to be in his shoes while these two battle out their powers and try to calm down their love.
Date: 04/03/08 09:35 pm Title: Maturation:
mmm love... even though they are growing apart :( I hope they haven't gone ALL the way; that scene HAS to go in the story... I'de cry if it didn't ;(
Author's Response: That's coming up soon. Of course I'm going to include their first time together. Something that special can't be skipped.
Date: 04/03/08 05:36 pm Title: Maturation:
great chapter! i am completely hooked on this story, you are such a great writer.