Date: 04/18/08 04:46 am Title: Learned Helplessness:
Dude, I've been dead for, like, twenty minutes now. I love all the "Durch Den Monsun" and "In Die Nacht" allusions. They make me happy.
And you did a fine job of working in reasons of why each of the twins couldn't/wouldn't call Alan. And I loved that you didn't pick up right where the last chapter left off; this is a far more realistic way for them to react. Pays to be a Psych major. Maybe I should switch.
Author's Response:
"Durch Den Monsun" and "In Die Nacht" are so ingrained in my consciousness now that I'm not even aware of all the allusions I make to them. Sometimes I catch them later when I'm rereading and I realize what a horrible fangirl I am.
It does pay to be a psych major when it comes to writing about people's motivations and reactions to things. Unfortunately, being a psych major doesn't pay much when it comes to actual money. :P
Date: 04/17/08 06:56 pm Title: Derealization
*O*... im speechless! how could tom DO that? to poor bill? omg!
please update soon!
Date: 04/17/08 06:51 pm Title: Derealization
Oh no.. poor twins..
Well I feel most sorry for Bill, but I can understand that it is hard for Tom..
But I hope that Bill isn't going to forgive Tom right away, he dosen't deserves that..
love the angst, but I hope it dosen't last too long :P
great story, keep the chaperst comming please :D *10*
Date: 04/17/08 02:20 pm Title: Derealization
he is in truble! : o
Date: 04/17/08 01:15 am Title: Derealization
Well. Whoa. I am not going to scream or anything, as this was somewhat expected wasn't it? And I'm not off to bash Tomi, he is suffering too. I just wish for them to find a way to cope with it all, find a way to love each other well even without the Doc, so that they can just rely on each other and not on someone elses help.
Now excuse me, I must go pick up the pieces of my heart (might take a while, so no hurry updating:).
Author's Response: You should have time to pick up the pieces of your broken heart before my next update (which will just shatter it all over again).
Date: 04/14/08 05:45 am Title: Derealization
Tom is....an unbelievable jerk! no. wait. he isn't. he was actually sort of drunk and not that responsible for what he did. But I still think he's a jerk!!! oh well....amazing as usual! ^^ update soon hun!
Author's Response: It's a bit more complicated than Tom being drunk or Tom being a jerk. The chapter title and notes are a bit of a hint. Tom is cracking under the pressure. He's not quite aware of what he's doing, let alone responsible for it.
Date: 04/13/08 10:43 pm Title: Derealization
Ah. Great. Nice. I truly love angst. ^^ Awesome.
The last two lines are spectacular. But now i feel we need to have more interaction between the two...There's really not much dialogue in this chapter...^^ Especially about what happened, and how Bill REALLY feels about it, somehow, it seems Tom feels worse than Bill does.
Author's Response: Tom is having a harder time with things, or at least he was. Things may be a bit different now.
Date: 04/13/08 10:13 pm Title: Derealization
Whoa.....dude. x_x
Date: 04/13/08 07:43 pm Title: Derealization
Oh God, I know I should've expected this but it was quite shocking. The way you had represented their relationship made that impossible to happen, at least in my own mind. It's not that I didn't suspect it would I just kinda... hoped it wouldn't.
Author's Response: Honestly, the decision for this to happen came at the very last minute. I was not going to have it happen. Originally, they were just going to use the groupies as a cover, but the more I thought about it the more I realized that without any guidance and with all the other stress in their lives, Tom would not be able to cope with it. So Tom cracked. I feel awful about it, but it was the most logical conclusion.
Date: 04/13/08 02:56 pm Title: Derealization
oh god..poor billy!!
go on girl
i believe the situation ll be very dangerous
Date: 04/13/08 12:25 pm Title: Derealization
OMG! Poor Bill...Great work with this chapter, I really, really, really like this story! Update soon again! :)
Pretty please...? :>
Date: 04/13/08 12:00 pm Title: Derealization
omg, I cannot believe the ending of this chapter. whata bxtch. dumb skank -.-
nonetheless, really good chapter.
I liked the scene with the twelve year old girl and dr. Engle.
Date: 04/13/08 11:00 am Title: Derealization
*screaming at you* noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *gasps for air*
great chapter though
*whimpers* no
Date: 04/13/08 09:40 am Title: Derealization
*Cries* Oh no Tom! Oh no Bill! Pretty please make it all better soon?
Date: 04/13/08 07:54 am Title: Derealization
omg...omg...*sniff sniff*...gonan cry and i have to go to work soon!!! what the hell Tom get some CONTROL!!!! gawd!!! great update and hope to see another soon...maybe another In Mir update to ^^
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Date: 04/13/08 07:43 am Title: Derealization
Oh My God. Wow. It's so great.
Date: 04/13/08 05:32 am Title: Derealization
Aww, poor stressed twins. I really like the glimpses of Alan we got, and I hope we'll find out more of his story with his twin!
Author's Response: I plan on sharing more of Alan and Charlie's story eventually.
Date: 04/13/08 05:04 am Title: Subjective Reality:
*falls dead*