Date: 04/24/08 01:22 pm Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
yey!! they're back together! haha...not that they were really apart:p looking forward to the next chap:D
Date: 04/24/08 12:29 pm Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
Ooohh.. what a great chapter!
A lot of tension between the twins, you wrote it increadible!! I was really wondering how the fight would end, and you wrote it with so much passion, and sooo understandable: it was nice to see how bill realizes that he did something wrong too...
Update soon ;-) :D
Date: 04/24/08 10:19 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
I saw you talking about how bad you thought things had gone with this chapter in the schrei-box the other day, but you can breath now because this chapter was just as great as the others and not disappointing in any way. I am, on the contrary, very impressed with it, it's hard as hell to have to characters make up after a fight this big with out making it either cheesy or too easy. You managed to do neither. You've had our hearts aching for a while now and I think everybody's breathing a little bit easier after this chapter ;) Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you. I regret my Schrei-box whining now. I was just stuck and frustrated, and that makes me start hating my writing. I really am a hundred times harder on myself than anyone else. I think I'm finally satisfied with this chapter though. It seems to have pleased the readers at least.
Date: 04/24/08 09:55 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
At first when you wrote about that girl incident I thought - oh, that's such an old idea, thought you could do better than that. But now I totally changed my mind, the way you sorted out the situation - it's wonderful, I think you're a very talented author. Thanks for the update, a lot actually :)
Author's Response:
I was getting a lot of reviews saying "How are you going to deal with Tom and the groupies?". Originally, I planned to just have the twins plot and scam so that it seemed like Tom was with the groupies when he wasn't, but the more I thought about it, the more I realized that wasn't realistic for the twins in this story. I couldn't see Tom being able to handle that on top of the pressure he was already facing. I know that Tom cheating is a bit overdone, but I doubt anyone else has had Tom cheating because he's suffering from severe dissociative symptoms brought on by stress.
Anyway, enough rambling. Thanks so much for the review and the compliment.
Date: 04/24/08 09:42 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
TOKIO HOTEL IS ENDING AND BILL NEEDS WAFFLES!!!! Rofl. Homg, that is awesome.
I thought i would come into this chapter understanding what you meant by being unhappy with the chapter, but really, i dont get it. XDD. This was a really GOOD chapter. I actually thought it fit very well.
The whole thing with Tom reverting back to his non-talking days was awesome, and Bill couldnt talk for him becuase their connection was broken. Froggy, i dont know what you're on, this chapter rocked! ^^
Author's Response:
BILL ALWAYS NEEDS WAFFLES!!!!
I ended up being more satisfied with this chapter once I finally found the ending. I was stuck on that phone call with Alan for days. I just couldn't figure out how to put it all back together. The ending finally did come to me and I felt a little better about it. Ending with waffles is always good.
Date: 04/24/08 09:23 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
Alan is perfect. Every time we get a little insight into his home life my heart warms.
Author's Response: You are going to love one of the chapters I have planned then. I'm so excited to get to it.
Date: 04/24/08 08:27 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
What the hell was wrong with that?
It was perfect!
You honestly had nothing to worry about.
It just made me really sad thinking about them being so disconnected.
It was great.
Date: 04/24/08 08:23 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
great chapter cant wait for the next one
Date: 04/24/08 08:11 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
I read the whole thing in one night. The entire story...wow. I think I'm in love....Froggy, you amaze me.
Date: 04/24/08 07:28 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
-throws a party-
Woohoo
1) A new chapter
2) Their relationship is fixed
3) Yayyyyyyy!!
Author's Response: I wouldn't say fixed... It's better, but there's still a lot of kinks to work out.
Date: 04/24/08 05:53 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
Oh wow, that was a really deep chapter. It made me ache, the way you described the static between them; it made me feel so bad for both of them.
I loved Saki in this chapter, he obviously cares a lot for them and someone needed to get them in a room together.
Thank you for mending their broken hearts, (and mine,) although I have a feeling there's going to be many more problems ahead for them.
I really want to know who Alan was in bed with! Was it his twin... A girlfriend? I'm glad that he hasn't disappeared; his is a really nice side story.
Author's Response: I can't abandon Alan. Even if he isn't actually involved with the twins at the moment I have to keep giving little glimpses of him. It's too important to let everyone forget him. The questios about the mystery person in his bed will be answered eventually.
Date: 04/24/08 04:40 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
awwwwwwwwwwwww i love it. So cute ^_^
Date: 04/24/08 04:26 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
that was bittersweet!
I'm glad all is well, for now. Cause I know there will be hardships to face soon
Date: 04/24/08 04:15 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
Silent drowning in each other
Twins reach out for a brother
Forcing forgiveness not so much
Need for words need for touch
Stronger together, no more alone
Kiss and make up, forget the phone
Tainted clothes and muddy parts
Mending the pieces of their broken hearts
some authors just inspire me, you did :)
thank you so much for bringing them together again, althoug knowing you their next problem is right around the corner ;)
glad you let us breath once in a while though, I swear you just mended my broken heart too :)
love Luce
Author's Response:
Oh wow. That is so sweet. I like that a lot. :)
The next problem is right around the corner, but even I needed a chance to catch my breath.
Date: 04/24/08 03:38 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
Another great chapter - I almost cried reading through this and could almost sense the pain in this chapter! You're such a great writer and I love this story endlessly!
Date: 04/24/08 03:29 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
xD I love the card bits, with Alan and Bill's inability to listen. Pure awesomesauce, as always.
Date: 04/24/08 03:21 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
oh the angst! loved it :)
Date: 04/24/08 03:11 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
n__n
Date: 04/24/08 03:01 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
*bounces*
THEY MADE UP.
I'm so relieved. You handled this chapter very well. The dialogue was something that was needed. The twins couldn't avoid talking to each other any longer than they had. I'm so glad they're on the mend.
GO ALAN GO
Date: 04/24/08 02:49 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
for once i am so incredibly happy how Tom handled the talk with David... David is beign such a diva-manager!!! oblivious to evertything.. and Saki is just GREAT!!! )))