Date: 04/29/08 08:23 am Title: Sublimation:
Ah, loves.
I'm glad you mentioned the fact that Tom hardly ever blows Bill XD.
Nice smut, pretty awesome. Though you did fool me in the beginning, I thought it was Bill and Tom ~ But that was prolly your intention, eh? XDD.
Date: 04/29/08 08:10 am Title: Sublimation:
Oh wow, you had me at the beginning! I thought it was the twins talking to Alan!
Lovely sexy smut! A nice break from the angst, but I can't help but think that the last couple of paragraphs are setting us up for some more... With them falling back into old habits. I see problems ahead.
Date: 04/29/08 07:38 am Title: Sublimation:
lovely smut! thanks so much.. ))
Date: 04/29/08 06:28 am Title: Sublimation:
Smut all the way!!!! ^_^ well that chapter was interesting, lol. Can't wait for more
Date: 04/29/08 05:41 am Title: Sublimation:
^^
You can give us short little smutty chapters whenever you feel like it ;)
Date: 04/29/08 05:37 am Title: Sublimation:
This is a great story, I love it !
Date: 04/29/08 05:18 am Title: Sublimation:
ok fist off, I seriously believed Alan was listening to Tom and Bill and it scared the shit out of me until you mentioned their names, bad froggy !!!
secound, hooooooooooooooooooooooooot sexy wanton twincest, fuck you're too good at this. Tom was being very naughty and it was GREAT
third, and I'm quoting you here I needed a break from the heavy angst. that was what you said right after you had written : soothing away the bad feelings did nothing to mend what had actually caused them.
baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad froggy !!! but veeeeeeeeeeeeeery good chapter :) *grins like a maniac* I could live of this and be imortal I think !
love luce
Date: 04/29/08 05:06 am Title: Sublimation:
...GUH.
That was...there are just no words. Hottest thing I've read in quite a while.
Way to end it on a sour note, even if I know it's true. *pouts*
Date: 04/29/08 04:58 am Title: Sublimation:
the first scene had me upset and worried, and then it was a different set of twins. LOL evil.
Then the secks. Oh goodnes, the buttsecks. It was amazing.
Finally, at the end we can see Tom start to mature. He knows that secks won't solve everything. I think that's a major step that they'll have to learn before things get out of hand and neither is willing to let the other touch them. How will things get solved then? *nods* Another awesome chapter, Froggy.
Date: 04/27/08 05:24 pm Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
oh I think this was my favorite chappie:)
Bill finally calling for help and Tom speaking again. Then both being weak for once. Was just beautiful:)
*still listening to rain^^, its so peaceful*
Man I really wished they'd see Alen again. The pressure is really too much:(
But if Bill says he can handle it I just hope he's right;)
Date: 04/27/08 05:03 pm Title: Learned Helplessness:
oh man this was such a sad chapter:(
But I'm glad Tom went and found Bill.
That bodyguard really ain't doing his job well:S
*smacks guy*
Date: 04/27/08 04:51 pm Title: Derealization
In his opinion, it should have been illegal to waste what Bill had.
Nice sentence^^
OMGGGGGGGGGGGG
fukin hell0_o
damn why did Bill have to walk in???
Now he'll think Tom's been doing this all along instead of telling the girl to leave:O
fuckkk!
Date: 04/27/08 04:33 pm Title: Unconditional Positive Regard:
“The only thing you lost is your virginity and you're not going to find that under the bed,” Tom said with a cocky grin.
XD whahahaahah got tom XDwhaHAHAHA
Oh man you really made me sad:(
DAMN I wanna cry now:(:(:(
Stupid Jost:@:@:@
asshole:(
Please don't let them not see Alen anymore:( bitte?
Got I really loved him, just for being there and helping them through, looking out for them and helping them keep up their relationship!
Fuck so sad:(
Well goodbye then
*prays he'll be back in the picture one day*
Date: 04/27/08 04:04 pm Title: Homeostasis:
hehe, I thought They were 16 too^^
seems I guessed right^^
Oelalaaaaa they took it to the next levelXD
I like the ending of this chappie^^
NOw I'm wondering if it was Alen's bro he was talking too, that they came back together when he came back from boarding school. That they're still madly in love^^
I really hope they are:)
Date: 04/27/08 03:19 pm Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
I'm afraid this calm phase is just before it all expoldes again, yet I hope that this was the final straw before they truly get fixed and form a loving realtionship that is not this desperate. Gosh woman, I don't know where you get all this emotion and hurt and love from, but I'm a sucker for it. Amazingly written. I feel wrenched.
And yay, Alan and his twin *knows*.
Date: 04/27/08 02:35 pm Title: Learned Helplessness:
PHEW. I was so scared to read this as I was afraid all the promised angst. I feared this might kill me with all the hurt they go through, rip my heart in half, but luckily I pretty much died on the first line and us deads don't have any emotions so I'm fine.
(I just want to hold and pet them both. Poor boys.)
Date: 04/27/08 02:18 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
YAY :D NICE NICE NICE
Date: 04/25/08 11:36 pm Title: Homeostasis:
Holy Fucking SHIT that was one fucking good chapter! Damn that was so hot even if it is twincest!
Date: 04/25/08 07:03 pm Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
Woo wooo wooo
They're cool again.
Keep on going girl.
This is awesome.