Date: 05/09/08 09:04 am Title: Homeostasis:
PERFECT
i liked this chap
Date: 05/09/08 01:19 am Title: Humiliation:
Totally made me stop breathing! You left enough clues as to who walked in, down to two people. That doesn't change the fact they fucking got caught. Damn, stupid, pissed off, horny boys! So much looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 05/09/08 12:48 am Title: Humiliation:
No. No! NO! That is the most evil cliff hanger on the face on the earth of, like, ever. I am have a physical need for the next chapter now, you MUST post it soon.
On a side note, I am in love with your OCs as well and can't wait to find more out about Alan and his twin.
Great writing, keep it up!
Date: 05/08/08 03:39 pm Title: Humiliation:
OMGODDNESS.
I was expecting something liket his to happen. The signs there all pointing in that direction. But now that it actaully did, I'm so worried for them.
Goodness, I have never been worried so much reading a fan fiction before! lol.
Can't wait for the next chapter to see how this all turns out.
Date: 05/08/08 12:45 pm Title: Humiliation:
aaaghh...!! OMG, are they caught!??
can't wait to find out! :o
Date: 05/08/08 01:19 am Title: Humiliation:
oh god, i. can't. believe. you left us hanging like this!
awesome story i really like alan, as a character. btw have you noticed there are almost no fics where bill is the dominate one? personally i think that he would be, with such a strong persoinality, but hey, tom fits it too... yeah sorry for that anyway love the story, great writing style, i wonder if alan's 'lover' is his twin?
Date: 05/08/08 12:41 am Title: Humiliation:
O GOD NO, plz tell me that who ever sees them mistakes Bill for a girl!
the fight seen was awesome, you made them seem like they were having one of their twin moments with finishing sentences and all... so cute
Author's Response: That cover has been done before. I'm not going to copy anyone's plot. I'm afraid that whoever is behind that door knows exactly who is who and what they are doing to each other.
Date: 05/07/08 11:21 pm Title: Humiliation:
oh fuck oh fuck.
SOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOD
Date: 05/07/08 09:30 pm Title: Humiliation:
Gaaaaaaaaah! the suspense will kill me!
Date: 05/07/08 08:40 pm Title: Humiliation:
Oh shit! Now I'm freaking out!
Date: 05/07/08 08:14 pm Title: Humiliation:
o.....my......GOD!!!!!! WHAT IN THE HELL ARE YOU DOING TO US!!!!!?!?!?!?!?!? JUST......what in the hell!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?! im pretty much hyperventilating right now!!!! holy shit!!!!! please tell me you are updating soon...like sooner rather than later!!!!!
ps:i love you
Date: 05/07/08 07:42 pm Title: Humiliation:
OMG IT WAS JOST WASN'T IT?!?!?! I REALLY DON'T LIKE HIM IN THIS STORY, THIS COULD BE VERY VERY BAD! I AM SO SCARED FOR THE TWINS!!!... okay, now that the scary freaking out is over with I gotta tell you, I'm so in love with Alan. Him and his 'person' (TWIN!!) are so incredibly adorable, and I completely love them. Now...HURRY UP AND GET THE NEXT PART OUT SO I DON'T GO INSANE WAITING TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!...please?
Date: 05/07/08 07:09 pm Title: Humiliation:
*gasp* NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! I HAD A FEELING THEY WERE GONNA GET CAUGHT WHEN THAT SECURITY GAURD ASKED FOR THEM, BUT I WAS STILL SHOCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!! I'm almost afraid to read the next chapter ^_^
Date: 05/07/08 06:32 pm Title: Humiliation:
OH MY GOD! O_O; *is speechless*
Date: 05/07/08 04:46 pm Title: Humiliation:
OMFG!!!!!!
How can you stop at THIS point0_o!!!!
I"ll give you cookies if you continue soon! (a)
Date: 05/07/08 02:56 pm Title: Humiliation:
OH my god, this is so exiting! :O
I need to know more now, cause this is absolutely amazing! :O :DD
Date: 05/07/08 02:49 pm Title: Humiliation:
Right when Tom kissed Bill, i thought about the door.
Dont get me wrong, this is bad for them, but i thought it was going to be much worse. Like two chapters ago bad.
Ooh, i wonder who caught them? Hmm....
I knew it would happen eventually, so now i cant wait to find out what happens next! ^^
Date: 05/07/08 12:25 pm Title: Humiliation:
nonononononono.
my heart stopped. it's finally all going balls up. i just wish that they'd learn to talk things through and have trust, not just resort to body language when facing crisis. i really hope all this journey they've gone together since the womb will honestly make them act a little more lovingly and have a sane relationship.
and such a big yay! for alan and his twin
Date: 05/07/08 11:59 am Title: Humiliation:
Oh god, wow! They were caught! I seriously felt Tom's fear at being caught! AMAZING!!! Can't wait for more! LOVED :D