Date: 05/29/08 01:51 am Title: Conformity:
%#%$#^%(*%&^*)*&*@$#@!#@
phew. anyways, Doctor Amsel is a douche. >.<
and seriously, awesome chapter. CAN NOTTTT wait for more. n___n< 3
Date: 05/29/08 01:46 am Title: Conformity:
DUDE, THAT BETTER BE ALAN. THEY NEED HELP.
I HATE DR. AMSEL. I WILL FIND A WAY TO DIGITALLY PUNCH HIM, I SWEAR.
And this? He liked to tell Doctor Amsel how much he loved Bill as often as possible. It seemed to make the man uncomfortable. HAHAHA, GO TOMI!
Date: 05/29/08 01:33 am Title: Conformity:
*stabs Amsel with a knife*
I hope he went to go get Alan, I hope he went to go get Alan... *whimpers and rocks back and forth*
*stabs Amsel with a knife, again*
Date: 05/29/08 01:12 am Title: Conformity:
Oh, why did you leave it there? I'm mildly surprised and happy that Tom made the first step to get that desperately needed help in the situation. You go, boy. *patiently waits for the next chapter*
Date: 05/28/08 01:32 pm Title: Cognitive Dissonance:
I still can“t belive they“re only 11. Sometimes it seems they“re older... however amazing and frightening at the same time :-)
Date: 05/28/08 12:59 pm Title: Introspection:
oh... I love this man. THe best decision of his life, I hope so.
I like this fic so much. It“s great, thanks. :-)
Date: 05/27/08 08:10 am Title: Persuasion:
!
amazing.
Date: 05/27/08 07:47 am Title: Persuasion:
NEIN! Why?!?! I wanna kill the stupid therapist now! He's, as Tom says, a quack! I hate him. He's mean!
Date: 05/26/08 01:10 pm Title: Persuasion:
ahhhh nein! Fukin asshole! you're tearing them apart!!! +sobs+ i want ALen back!!!!
got and the things he writes down arggh!
Date: 05/26/08 09:29 am Title: Persuasion:
I think I forgot to say they should probably call Alan! Have sessions through phone calls or what, I don't care! Alan understood them, he treated them well. They should have by no means gone to a new therapist or whatever that guy is supposed to be. And, even if they now understand that the "nobody else matters" thing couldn't solve the problem, this doesn't mean they sould let others make decisions for them. Ok, I'm done now xD
Date: 05/26/08 09:23 am Title: Persuasion:
God, can't you make it a little happier?? I mean...I love this story, I love the way the personalities of the twins, their actions, their thoughts...everything is analyzed but they can't NOT realise THAT many things! What they do about the problems they face in their relationship isn't even close to what they should! they handle everything in the worst way. Every line I read seems so...wrong, so...I don't know how to describe it...! I still like this fanfic, the plot it greeeeeaaaaat. But, in my oppinion, that constant fighting about everything, that 'not-being-able-to-comunicate' period should be over by now. Just my oppinion. Still, you write really well and I'll definitely keep reading this fic.
Author's Response: I agree that the angst has probably carried on too long. I hope it hasn't gotten to the point where the twin's reactions aren't believeable at all. That is my biggest worry. I can't just end the angst abruptly though. I'm building to something, and it's going to take one more chapter to get there, but I think chapter 25 is going to please a lot of people.
Date: 05/26/08 05:33 am Title: Persuasion:
dear lord!i want to punch this amsel guy in the face so hard that even his mother wouldn't be able to recognise him č_é"
but i admit that he's clever. things won't be easy for the twins with that guy, he may be an asshole , but an intelligent one.
I'm glad they protect alan too. He's the best, yeah!
My fear is that, in those separate cessions, the twins might say contracdictions. the "Dr.Amsel" will manipulate them and lead them to where he wants them to be. I mean, he's sort of evil,even if he's simply doing his job.
shit, i don't know anymore what i'm trying to say lol. I'd better forget about it and wait chapter 24 to show up!
thank you very much and see you!
Date: 05/26/08 05:05 am Title: Suffering:
*trembling*
what a chapter! i lost my words
Date: 05/26/08 04:46 am Title: Humiliation:
shit shit shit shit!!
>_
Date: 05/26/08 12:18 am Title: Persuasion:
Oh No! I don't like the new doctor I want to smack him in the face,Please keep the twins together!!
Date: 05/25/08 07:21 pm Title: Persuasion:
I'm a new reader...I've been reading this for like 2 whole days! It's so long. But I love it! Your writing is wonderful :)
As for this chapter, I hate the new therapist, he's a total ass. And I'm sad that Bill and Tom are gonna go through all the angst again and Tom's mind is going all hazy again :(
Date: 05/25/08 05:42 pm Title: Persuasion:
ARGH! I'm gonna rip that new shrink's throat out! T_T I feel so horrible for them... please update soon! ...
Date: 05/25/08 03:45 pm Title: Persuasion:
Oh dear God, this is gonna hurt ...
I really wonder where you'll be going with this... (I sure hope it's not into drug abuse, though >_>'')
Author's Response: *scratches head* Hmmm... I didn't think I gave any indications of it going into drug abuse. Honestly, I don't have time to deal with a drug abuse story line. The story is almost finished.
Date: 05/25/08 03:12 pm Title: Persuasion:
*is completely speachless*
you rock, seriously.
update soon!
~ golden_leafs
