Date: 05/29/08 03:23 am Title: Conformity:
awuuuhh!!
I hope it goes somewhere good! This makes me so sad!
Date: 05/29/08 03:02 am Title: Unconditional Positive Regard:
I am so sad... oh, I canīt expain how I feel. It frightens me. Great story, really ! :-)
Date: 05/29/08 02:57 am Title: Conformity:
*hyperventilates!* O_O Wow, that Doctor Amsel was so believable! I was like...maybe he's right but at the same time I was like "NO! It can't be true!" You *wags finger at* You are really REALLY good. Amazing really! =] Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I'm glad he was believable. I worried about that, but as I was writing I found all this "evidence" to support his arguments. Strangely, I hadn't actually planned the story for that evidence to be there. It just fell into place. My subconscious knows what it's doing, apparently.
Date: 05/29/08 02:12 am Title: Conformity:
wow. It's so great.
Date: 05/29/08 01:51 am Title: Conformity:
%#%$#^%(*%&^*)*&*@$#@!#@
phew. anyways, Doctor Amsel is a douche. >.<
and seriously, awesome chapter. CAN NOTTTT wait for more. n___n< 3
Date: 05/29/08 01:46 am Title: Conformity:
DUDE, THAT BETTER BE ALAN. THEY NEED HELP.
I HATE DR. AMSEL. I WILL FIND A WAY TO DIGITALLY PUNCH HIM, I SWEAR.
And this? He liked to tell Doctor Amsel how much he loved Bill as often as possible. It seemed to make the man uncomfortable. HAHAHA, GO TOMI!
Date: 05/29/08 01:33 am Title: Conformity:
*stabs Amsel with a knife*
I hope he went to go get Alan, I hope he went to go get Alan... *whimpers and rocks back and forth*
*stabs Amsel with a knife, again*
Date: 05/29/08 01:12 am Title: Conformity:
Oh, why did you leave it there? I'm mildly surprised and happy that Tom made the first step to get that desperately needed help in the situation. You go, boy. *patiently waits for the next chapter*
Date: 05/28/08 01:32 pm Title: Cognitive Dissonance:
I still canīt belive theyīre only 11. Sometimes it seems theyīre older... however amazing and frightening at the same time :-)
Date: 05/28/08 12:59 pm Title: Introspection:
oh... I love this man. THe best decision of his life, I hope so.
I like this fic so much. Itīs great, thanks. :-)
Date: 05/27/08 08:10 am Title: Persuasion:
!
amazing.
Date: 05/27/08 07:47 am Title: Persuasion:
NEIN! Why?!?! I wanna kill the stupid therapist now! He's, as Tom says, a quack! I hate him. He's mean!
Date: 05/26/08 01:10 pm Title: Persuasion:
ahhhh nein! Fukin asshole! you're tearing them apart!!! +sobs+ i want ALen back!!!!
got and the things he writes down arggh!
Date: 05/26/08 09:29 am Title: Persuasion:
I think I forgot to say they should probably call Alan! Have sessions through phone calls or what, I don't care! Alan understood them, he treated them well. They should have by no means gone to a new therapist or whatever that guy is supposed to be. And, even if they now understand that the "nobody else matters" thing couldn't solve the problem, this doesn't mean they sould let others make decisions for them. Ok, I'm done now xD
Date: 05/26/08 09:23 am Title: Persuasion:
God, can't you make it a little happier?? I mean...I love this story, I love the way the personalities of the twins, their actions, their thoughts...everything is analyzed but they can't NOT realise THAT many things! What they do about the problems they face in their relationship isn't even close to what they should! they handle everything in the worst way. Every line I read seems so...wrong, so...I don't know how to describe it...! I still like this fanfic, the plot it greeeeeaaaaat. But, in my oppinion, that constant fighting about everything, that 'not-being-able-to-comunicate' period should be over by now. Just my oppinion. Still, you write really well and I'll definitely keep reading this fic.
Author's Response: I agree that the angst has probably carried on too long. I hope it hasn't gotten to the point where the twin's reactions aren't believeable at all. That is my biggest worry. I can't just end the angst abruptly though. I'm building to something, and it's going to take one more chapter to get there, but I think chapter 25 is going to please a lot of people.
Date: 05/26/08 05:33 am Title: Persuasion:
dear lord!i want to punch this amsel guy in the face so hard that even his mother wouldn't be able to recognise him č_é"
but i admit that he's clever. things won't be easy for the twins with that guy, he may be an asshole , but an intelligent one.
I'm glad they protect alan too. He's the best, yeah!
My fear is that, in those separate cessions, the twins might say contracdictions. the "Dr.Amsel" will manipulate them and lead them to where he wants them to be. I mean, he's sort of evil,even if he's simply doing his job.
shit, i don't know anymore what i'm trying to say lol. I'd better forget about it and wait chapter 24 to show up!
thank you very much and see you!
Date: 05/26/08 05:05 am Title: Suffering:
*trembling*
what a chapter! i lost my words
Date: 05/26/08 04:46 am Title: Humiliation:
shit shit shit shit!!
>_
Date: 05/26/08 12:18 am Title: Persuasion:
Oh No! I don't like the new doctor I want to smack him in the face,Please keep the twins together!!