Date: 02/03/11 05:43 am Title: Punishment:
Another amazing chapter! This is a great story so far =)
Date: 02/03/11 05:21 am Title: Subjective Reality:
This is such a cute first chapter! I can't believe I've never read this story before! I can't wait to keep reading it XD
Date: 11/18/10 07:41 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
holy crap!! bill and tom's kindergarten teacher wuz my kindergarten teacher!!!!creepyyyyyyyyy
Date: 10/27/10 01:52 pm Title: Modeling:
I adore this story. Their struggles, their fears, and their love for each other were all so potent. Definitely one of my favorites.
I was a little disappointed with the lack of an epilogue - you ended it very well, but there are loose strings that haven't been tied up. We don't know that Amsel is going to let them go, we don't know how David is going to react... An epilogue is called for here, I think, to really complete the story.
Regardless, though, it was really excellent, and that is the only complaint I have. Thank you!
Date: 10/05/10 05:50 pm Title: Conformity:
you are KILLING me, slowly but surely. LOL
Date: 10/03/10 12:48 am Title: Modeling:
...*is left staring at the screen in shock* that's the end??? No leading up to it or anything??? That's like...smacking someone upside the head with a dead fish!
Date: 10/02/10 11:48 pm Title: Conformity:
I started crying from the minute Bill said what the idiot quack wanted him to be.
Date: 10/02/10 11:39 pm Title: Persuasion:
Nooooo!! *feels world crumbling where I stand*
Date: 10/02/10 11:07 pm Title: Humiliation:
Reading from the point where the security guard went after them was just a long chorus of "ohfuckohshitohno" running through my head on repeat. *hurries on to next chapter*
Date: 10/02/10 01:21 am Title: Introspection:
I LOVE Dr. Engle!!! He rocks :) i'd give him a high five and a cupcake if he were real, just because he's protecting the twins C:
Date: 09/29/10 01:30 am Title: Modeling:
It was wonderful. I really like it. I loved all your Psychological looks on everything and I loved the ending as well.
You put a lot into this story and it came out very nicely. I really enjoyed it as did many others.
Date: 09/28/10 11:56 pm Title: Counter Transference:
Stupid quack of a Doctor. I'm so glad they both went to Alan. Also I'm glad they learned about the relationship the doctor had because I think that will be a source of inspiration for them.
Date: 09/28/10 11:34 pm Title: Transference:
This sounds so nice. Bill and Tom are going to meet at Alan's house! I'm excited.
Date: 09/28/10 11:17 pm Title: Conformity:
You're very good with the doctors. I do not like this doctor very much, he doesn't act very professional in my opinion. Even if the incest is wrong he can't just look at it the way he wants to, and that's what he's doing.
Like I said though, you do a very nice job.
Date: 09/28/10 10:52 pm Title: Suffering:
Isn't David worried what's-his-bucket Albert will blab to the world? We'll see I guess. Anyway, I'm anxious to see what happens.
Date: 09/28/10 09:51 pm Title: Humiliation:
Always remember to lock the door boys, seriously. I wonder what's going to happen now though.
Date: 09/27/10 11:14 pm Title: Sublimation:
Hopefully they will eventually understand that they have to communicate in order for things to get fixed.
Date: 09/27/10 05:38 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
I have to say this was the first chapter I was actually stunned by. When it got to the part of the twins bond and the static and Tom not being able to relay his messages through touch that was very upsetting. Anyway, I really liked what you did with it. Very nice chapter.
Date: 09/26/10 10:57 pm Title: Learned Helplessness:
How sad. The music was a very nice touch though, I really enjoyed it. Anyway, it will be interesting to see how the twins make up.
Date: 09/26/10 10:31 pm Title: Derealization
It's a very good way to continue the story. No matter how much it hurts your readers sometimes it's good to do. I rather enjoy the twist. OH and I am so very happy to see snippets of Alan and his patients.