Date: 01/05/09 11:52 pm Title: Modeling:
Wow is all I can really say.. I fell in love with this story from the moment I started reading it. You have an amazing writing ability. It is sad that you had ended it. We will never know what Alan said to Dr. Amsel. But I can live with it. I am so happy for a happy ending.
Date: 01/05/09 11:50 pm Title: Modeling:
FROGGY!!!
I've missed you SO SO SO much! You should have seen how excited I was when I saw this!
I'm pretty sure I was here from the beginning or something pretty close too it b/c I remember the updating time growing longer and longer w/ each chapter.
Honestly I had pretty much given up when I saw this and I have to say it more or less made my life! Thank you so much!
You are an amazing author who is apparently incredably busy with your life and you don't have a lot of time for the site any more (from what I can see, at least writing wise) but you are probably one of the best writers on here. And I mean it.
I'm one of those people who actually enjoys seeing stories end simplt b/c I like the feeling of satisfaction I get (hopefully) and I love to see how the stories end.
I was really happy w/ this chapter. You did a great job setting their relationship on the right track again and keeping it realistic at the same time. I wish I could have seen what Alan said to Amsel b/c I'v been harboring death wishes for some time but I think the way you ended it was wonderful too.
Thank you so much for the amazing story and pleas write more soon!
Hekki
Also, since I'm pretty sure you'll see this I'm gonna beg you to update Alles Was Durch Meine Adern Fließt. It captured my attention when you first wrote it and it's been in my mind ever since. I know you must have readers begging for all you other fics too but this is just my pleading for what is possibly my favorite fic of all time to be updated (and maybe completed later on) at some point in the future.
Date: 01/05/09 11:48 pm Title: Modeling:
AMAZINGGGGGG WOOOT! My heart Stopped when i saw this was updating. Amazing story, amazing ending amazing job!
Date: 01/05/09 11:35 pm Title: Modeling:
oh you.
You have this way of writing, of giving life to emotions beyond 2D and allowing them room to air and breathe. Your knack for giving realistic reactions within such a clinical observation of a breakdown of a relationship is positively awe inspiring.
The last conversation that Tom and Bill had was truly cathartic; it rose and fell like real, honest to goodness fights do between people who love each other as much as they do. I felt like kindred spirits with Alan and Charlie, teetering on the edge of wanting to help them, and knowing they had to do it on their own.
The bits and pieces of realization as Tom and Bill understood at different turns that they were being manipulated really broke my heart. Forced into going to someone and having that trust shattered is so heinous. It's another horrible example of how so very important trust is.
I am so happy you ended this, and it ended exactly how it should've; a tentative rebirth after a fiery death. The old lies and fears had to go, were almost forcibly removed, so that love can bloom again.
Thank you for this, Lady Frog, I very much so appreciate this.
Date: 12/31/08 10:33 pm Title: Counter Transference:
Aughh! I just finished this whole story. This is amazing. i loved it. You are brilliant and an amazing writer. You gotta update when you can! I'm sure it'll be well worth the wait.
Date: 12/31/08 03:09 am Title: Illusion:
They didn't stop grumbling until they heard the door to their mother's studio close and they knew they were alone. The door closed behind them. Bags from the day's shopping trip were dropped on the floor and in an instant they were in each other’s arms, stumbling backwards until they tumbled onto Tom's bed. - *flutter claps* and *giggles* ha ha ha little scamps!!!
Kiss me all better,” he demanded playfully. – he he he
The adults were content with the knowledge that their plan was successful, the twins were content with the knowledge that their plan was successful, and all parties involved were blind to the fact that they could not have been more wrong. – ha ha ha
Tomi is cheating on Billla!!! Oh my!
“But you kissed her. Why do you hate her?” Bill mumbled against Tom's lips, obviously confused.
“Because you're going to kiss her,” Tom answered *giggles*
Date: 12/31/08 02:43 am Title: Separation Anxiety:
The door wasn't even closed behind him before Bill was running to Tom. – awh!!!
Tears spilled and ran down Tom's cheeks in a torrent and he stared into the eyes that mirrored his own. “I didn't mean to hurt you,” he said in a small choked voice. – oh poor Tomi!!!
“As soon as Mom goes to bed you can come back to my room. We'll keep it a secret. We have to pretend, Bill. We have to make them think we don't need each other. We have to make them think we don't love each other like we do,” Tom concluded after thinking their situation over.
“Just pretend?” Bill asked nervously.
“Just pretend,” Tom assured him. - *smiles*
Simone and Gordon never heard the soft tiptoeing footsteps of Bill creeping into his brother's bed. - *grins* Naughty boys!
Date: 12/31/08 02:26 am Title: Id:
Lol he thinks they’re being “touched” by an adult ha ha ha
Oh now Tomi’s all freak out that he might be abusing his brother. Ha ha *cracks up*
Squirmy little Billa *grins* gets me all hot under the collar
Beneath the bushes were her precious innocent boys, stripped down to their underwear, and covered in dirt. Bill's eyes were closed, and Tom's hand was clamped tightly over the younger twins' mouth to silence him. Tom was on top of Bill, grinding against him, and quite obviously the aggressor in the situation. – oh my no wonder she blamed poor tom for everything
oh poor broken boys.
Date: 12/31/08 02:03 am Title: Coercive Power:
What Doctor Engle didn't understand was that Tom wasn't angry that his father had left. He was angry that he had not left sooner. Tom was angry at himself for not keeping his promise. – interesting!
When they played their secret games in the dark it was different noises that Tom tried to silence; noises he didn't even know the name for. – mmmhhh nice
Jorg stood in front of the fort, listening to the odd sounds coming from within. He could not wrap his mind around what he was hearing. It sounded like... No, his boys were only seven. He was imagining things. He was absolutely sure he was just imagining things, right up until he heard the words “Oh Tomi” being moaned softly by his youngest son. – O.O *bites nails*
It would be another year before Simone would see what Jorg saw. – dun-dun-daaaaaa
Yes thank you Darcy for being a beta and supporting a favorite writer of mine!!!
Date: 12/31/08 01:20 am Title: Drive:
Yeah a new school away from that BITCH!
This was why he was considered one of the best child psychiatrists in the city. He adapted his methods to fit each child, often making things up as he went along. – very clever doctor!!!
No hitting Bill in this story!!! It’s not an InNu story so NO! I say NO!
Just when the world was starting to seem okay again something else would change, leaving the twins constantly feeling as if they were on unsteady ground. The only security in their lives was their mother, and each other, and right now they were both fairly sure that their mother was as angry at them as their father was. – oh poor little boys
“Will you kiss me all better?” - *flutter claps* yes *nods* kiss him all better!
Date: 12/31/08 01:00 am Title: Punishment:
Yeah *nods head* Miss Hahn is a FUCKING BITCH! Whore dirty, fucking whore! OMG! *slaps her for being such a snobby bitch*
“I'm sorry Tom, did you and Bill get your clothes mixed up this morning because I'm pretty sure that shirt you’re wearing says ‘Bill’ on it,” Miss Hahn interrupted with a sarcastic tone that was not at all appropriate for a kindergarten teacher. The children in the class giggled and Tom glared furiously at the teacher. – yeah see? BITCH!
“ 'Cause Mommy will hear and maybe we wont get breakfast,” Bill admitted – oh poor baby bill
kisses made things better. – yes they do!!!
“I wanna taste you more. Then I don't think about how hungry my tummy is,” Bill suggested. - *eye roll* yes kissing makes things better everything! *grins*
Naughty, Naughty boys!!!
“Of course. Whatever it takes to help my boys. I just want them to be happy,” Simone said as she dabbed at her weepy eyes again. – Simone’s a good Mommy
Date: 12/31/08 12:05 am Title: Subjective Reality:
Miss Hahn threw up her hands in resignation. It was hopeless, particularly when the twins' parents refused to admit there was anything wrong with the way their spoiled and isolated boys behaved. In her eyes, they were spoiled little brats who didn't want to play with the other children because they thought themselves better than everyone else. She didn't understand them. – Miss Haha is a capitol BITCH!
“I don't like school,” Tom complained – Me either!
This was the biggest crisis they'd seen since the great chocolate milk drought of '93. – ha ha ha ha *cracks up some more*
“Boys! Get in the class right now or I'm sending another note home with your mother,” the insensitive teacher barked. The tearful twins reluctantly returned to the classroom, and for once they were not holding hands. – Miss Hahn is a fucking whore she broke them!
Yes stupid buttheads!!!!
Date: 12/29/08 12:40 pm Title: Counter Transference:
Whew!
I just finished that last chapter after reading the whole thing in like, 5 days.
I have to say, i LOVE this! I know what moving is like, so take all the time you need!
Date: 12/23/08 05:15 am Title: Counter Transference:
Please continue, this is one of my favorite stories, its amazing :]
Date: 12/14/08 07:40 pm Title: Counter Transference:
AHHH WAHT!?!?!?!
GHEY!
Here I was, happily reading this all day only taking breaks to have sushi with the boyfriend...
And then... THEN... THIS! THIS IS OUTRAGEOUS! You don't understand... When I get home from school tomorrow I MUST have another chapter of this to read.
But, I suppose I should give you something for keeping my attention this long. I can't even keep my attention this long!!!
This is what Bill's face would look like if he read your story.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry for the delay. Since the last chapter of Analyzed, I've moved twice and started a job that consumes most of my free time.
The last chapter of Analyzed is written. It needs a bit of polish and a more solid ending. It won't take long to finish. Unfortunately, I work retail now and Christmas time is the worst time to be working retail. There's a good chance that I won't have time or energy to put those finishing touches on Analyzed until after Christmas.
Date: 12/12/08 01:22 am Title: Counter Transference:
Ahh! More chapters! Hurry!
Date: 12/10/08 03:07 am Title: Counter Transference:
It took me a week to find time to read this whole story, but it was worth it! This was so so so good. And I'm happy that I read it. *smile*
Date: 12/09/08 06:42 pm Title: Counter Transference:
well, it's def one of the best ff I've ever read. The only one that I equally admire is Body Language by Firelucy.
Your perspective of the twins' relationship and your writing skills are fabulous! I love the emotions and the detailed description and of course the hot stuff ;)
I was a bit upset when I read last chapters but now I see your point.I mean a happy ending, rite? :)
I love you, you're the best. Can't wait to the new chapters. Good luck with yr writing and stuff. Fingers crossed, lots of hugs :*
Date: 12/08/08 08:55 pm Title: Jealousy:
I think you must have a background in psychology. I'm a psych major in college and you just seem to have a very good knowledge base.
Date: 12/08/08 04:21 pm Title: Coercive Power:
I really like this story. You write so well, and know how to write the twins at each age. You're really good at narrating from a child's perspective. I've read fics before that were ridiculous because the author had five year olds talking like twelve year olds.