Date: 01/08/09 01:58 am Title: Modeling:
Sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please (shy smile) This so far has been great and its so wierd to think that this is someones idea and its not what happened. When you read a good piece of fiction fanfiction or not you tend to get so in to it that you seem to think that this is real. Then it hits you that this is an idea. Someone thought this up. And your flabergasted (great word). It stuns me to think that this is someones imangination in full gear. I cant wrap my mind over how could anyone come up with something like this and turn it into something so great. The ideas are great and so original. Its not just the ideas. You can have a good plot with really bad writing and have nothin. The writing is crucial. You have hit the nail head on. This is wonderful and earned the awards it got.
Date: 01/08/09 12:53 am Title: Transference:
I had a feeling that he was with his twin. I knew it. And that is just like I know that Alans "surprise" is actually Bill.
Date: 01/08/09 12:43 am Title: Conformity:
God. Go get a second opinion. This is Bull and soo hard. How come Jost sent them to someone new. Did he not trust Alan or something. How come Bill and Tom didnt go to Jost and say he felt uncomfortable around him. Jost wouldnt be able to force them to go if they didnt feel comfortable. Stupid Jost.
Date: 01/08/09 12:28 am Title: Modeling:
Wait wait wait! The story summary says it's finished. It needs another chapter to finish it!
Author's Response: Sorry, that's the end. Happily ever after.
Date: 01/08/09 12:25 am Title: Modeling:
Reading this story, I feel like I've been on a journey with the twins. It's been amazing, and I can't wait to read the final chapter. Please continue to write wonderful stories like this one.
Date: 01/07/09 11:04 pm Title: Humiliation:
Please be Saki. He would atleast somewhat understand a bit more than anybody else. That or Alan decided for a drop in visit.
Date: 01/07/09 06:42 pm Title: Modeling:
Thank you for this chapter. It was a long wait but so worth it!
I know the fic is labelled as completed, but would you consider writing an epilogue?
I think eveyone would love to know what happened to the twins, how they delt their relationship and their carreer (David). And about Dr Engle and his twin too. What did he say to Amsel, what happened?
I just feel there are a lot of unanswered questions ^^
Thank you for this amazing story, you can be really proud of it!
Date: 01/07/09 01:10 pm Title: Modeling:
*-* You must know i absolutely flipped out when i went to my favourites section and Analyzed was at the top of the list. No joke. I was squealing at my friend Hanzy the whole time. I am quit literally "*-*"
I'm so happy you finally finished this. My most adored part had to have been when Bill said "We're going back to our roots" ya know, for obvious reasons. Wow. I could sit here and wish for MFCT to be finished with Bill and Tom, but i suppose I'll have to wait for the other characters instead eh? But no way, im gonna be "*-*" all day now because my favourite fic on this site has updated.
I would have loved it if they had kissed again, but i completely understand why they didnt. I know they cant get swept up again in the physical comforts, and im genuinly happy with the way it turned out. You didnt make up some unrealisticly happy ending, and i wish it wasnt the end. T^T.
Guh, im gonna go wash the stars outta my eyes, but thank you sooooo much for finishing this. Wow. *-*
Date: 01/07/09 05:18 am Title: Homeostasis:
Wow. When you look at the pic you think hey thier first comet awards. And when you think of the comet awards you think hey they were sixteen when that happened. But when you look at the picture you just cant wrap your mind around the fact that the twins are sixteen in that picture, they look about fourteen. The G's look right age but not the twins.
Author's Response: The twins were late bloomers. To be fair, they had just turned sixteen a month or so before the Comet awards.
Date: 01/07/09 04:28 am Title: Disorientation:
I am wondering. Is this actualy going to follow how history layed it self down or is it going to change. Is this going to show what really happened behind the curtins or is it going to be a whole new world. I guess I will have to wait and see what is going to happen and read the next couple chapters. The one thing I would like to see happen is the voice surgery. Sure it was a real scary time for Bill and the band and his family but I would like to see how that would affect the relationship that is starting to really blossom here.
Date: 01/07/09 01:48 am Title: Modeling:
*smile* You did it again. That was amazing. My favorite line:"We're gonna be okay?" Bill asked. "We're gonna be ok," Tom said. That was absolutely amazing. This was beautiful. *claps*
Date: 01/06/09 10:53 pm Title: Drive:
Bills favorit animal is a dog in real life.
I like this story
Date: 01/06/09 10:34 pm Title: Modeling:
First, I must admit that I literally squealed when I saw this had been updated! Second, I definitely think you found the right ending to this story. It would've been all too easy to have the twins simply hug and kiss and go back to everything being hunky-dory, and I'm glad you didn't. Their whole conversation was really believable and genuine, and with the knowledge that the Engel twins are solidly behind them, I know their future is promising. The reference to Bill's 'B' tattoo (or at least the meaning behind it) was a great little touch as well. You have a wonderful way of writing, and I'm so glad you were able to finish this!
(I hope we can expect updates in the future for other stories? Pretty please? :))
Date: 01/06/09 09:19 pm Title: Punishment:
If the boys were so unhappy about going to school why didnt Simone just take them to a new school. She just assumed that is was school itself that they didnt like but she has no grounds since they had only been to one school. Tom not talking to a person who he has known for several years isnt normal. Surly she would have noticed something like that going on.
Date: 01/06/09 08:04 pm Title: Modeling:
You've simply Outdone yourself on this. I loved it so much, i am so sad to see it go.
Date: 01/06/09 07:12 pm Title: Modeling:
DO A SEQUEL!!!! please!?!?!?! you cant let it go!!! come on now! my friend printed out the banner and i stole it and hung it on my wall lol!!! *i will throw it away if you ask!*
Author's Response:
I don't really have time to do a sequel. I've got other projects going on.
Go ahead and keep the banner. It's just a photo with some filters and color changes and the word "Analyzed" stuck on it.
Date: 01/06/09 06:48 pm Title: Modeling:
This story is amazing, really. It's one of the first stories I started reading on this site, and I think I've re-read it at least twice. I was really worried you wouldn't finish it at first, but I'm sooo glad you did! And I love the way you worked Bill's tattoo into the ending. It was pretty cool ;) And the ending was practically perfect.
Thanks, sweetheart! =]
Date: 01/06/09 06:48 pm Title: Modeling:
I'm speechless right now.. First of all, YAY - I almost died when I saw this was updated :'D and second, I can't believe it's over :( but believe me, you've done an AMAZING job with this fic, and it will always be one of my favorites (L) THANK YOU
Date: 01/06/09 06:09 pm Title: Modeling:
I wnna hear that conversation....you should write something in the future like a check up on Bill and Tom and see how their relationship is doing after reconnecting. I loved it and Im so happy your done with this even though I would totally have liked to hear that conversation lolz