Date: 02/16/09 03:07 am Title: Humiliation:
:O :O :O :O :O :O HOLY SHIIIIIT!!!! i was practically hyperventilating!!!! damn aughnaejkghe at least i can read the next chapter haha but holy shit man!!! talk about an effing cliffhanger! hahha
Date: 02/16/09 02:57 am Title: Sublimation:
yeah i was kind of suprised but then amused XD
Date: 02/16/09 02:49 am Title: Fundamental Attribution Error:
umm ok i think this is my favorite chapter O.O it was angsty, heartbreaking, and all that mushy stuff...and i listened to rescue me while reading the REAL angsty stuff...;-; thats pretty much how i felt and i also cracked up at the end :)
Date: 02/16/09 02:32 am Title: Learned Helplessness:
hmm instead of the rain music (though it was pretty relaxing) i was listening to hilf mir fliegen >.> damn this chapter was super angsty... and gustav's sucky jokes were just...dumb XD even though they were funny hahaha
Date: 02/16/09 02:15 am Title: Derealization
well....it was bound to happen sooner or later...:/ not that it makes it ok >.>
Date: 02/16/09 02:01 am Title: Unconditional Positive Regard:
*sob* ;-; that wasnt cool man >.> does that mean the doctor isnt gonna be included now? well i guess i'll find out later
Date: 02/16/09 01:34 am Title: Homeostasis:
haha bill's eyes are HUGE :D must have been the excitement XD but wooo they finally "connected"
Date: 02/16/09 01:18 am Title: Maturation:
ok i gotta a question since i've been meaning to start on a fic, how do you usually start your chapters??
by the way, awesome chapter too :) bill is starting to mature a bit :D and tom too..well just a little haha
Date: 02/16/09 12:45 am Title: Maturation:
ok i gotta a question since i've been meaning to start on a fic, how do you usually start your chapters??
by the way, awesome chapter too :) bill is starting to mature a bit :D and tom too..well just a little haha
Author's Response: When I wrote Analyzed, I usually started with a vision of a specific scene in my head and a general idea of what I wanted to show in the chapter. For example, in one of the early chapters I began with a vision of Bill and Tom coloring in the counselor's office and the idea that I wanted to show how dependant the boys were on each other. I always start by sitting down for about 10 minutes and imagining how I want things to go. I don't write anything down, I just get a good picture of it in my mind. Then I just start writing and try to keep that image in my mind. When I really had a hard time starting a chapter I would begin with a bit of dialogue and then work around it.
Date: 02/16/09 12:28 am Title: Disorientation:
err i dont wear hats though :( lol jk anyways yeah they got signed :D
Date: 02/16/09 12:13 am Title: Jealousy:
ehh everytime i see the name sophia i keep saying in my head its s-o-F-i-a XD since my name is also sophia but with an F
but aww i feel really bad for the doc :( and also andreas sheesh
Date: 02/16/09 12:00 am Title: Cognitive Dissonance:
hahaha dun worry :) it wasnt that dirty XD
Date: 02/15/09 05:51 am Title: Introspection:
umm i actually do like the way its going, though i feel bad for the doctor heh
Date: 02/15/09 05:35 am Title: External Locus of Control:
ehh even simone's hand wringing is starting to get annoying lol
Date: 02/15/09 05:20 am Title: Centration:
aww well like you wrote they are growing apart right?
Date: 02/15/09 05:11 am Title: Illusion:
well i really like the way you write out your chapters :)
Date: 02/15/09 04:56 am Title: Separation Anxiety:
bahahahah these twins are hella smart :D
Date: 02/15/09 04:45 am Title: Id:
god now their mother pisses me off >.>
Date: 02/15/09 04:33 am Title: Coercive Power:
it was dark D: and not only because the lights were turned off when they were kissing -_- lol jp XD
Date: 02/15/09 04:22 am Title: Drive:
lol oh yes it amused me XD for some reason though i imagined him with his hair dyed black and spiked XD