Date: 05/25/09 03:24 pm Title: Modeling:
wowww that was my second time readind this and its even more amazing than before.. this story is just SOOO well plan and written, it's amazing... must have took a lot of work and effort but the result is perfect, congratz and keep writting, you definitely got talent !!
Date: 05/15/09 01:49 pm Title: Modeling:
Oh that ending made me tear up all over again. That was gorgeous and beautiful and every other word I could think of if I was coherent.
Date: 05/13/09 03:08 am Title: Modeling:
I loved it,amazing how in depth you went with the consoling,definitely one of the best stories I've ever read,including both fanfiction and real books. Bravo!
Date: 05/09/09 04:49 pm Title: Modeling:
I LOVE THIS EFFING STORY!
:)
Love you too Froggy.
Date: 05/03/09 09:13 pm Title: Modeling:
I've just finished to read a translation of your story on a french forum, but now I'm here because I absolutely want to tell you how much I loved it.
I'm really interested in psychology, and your story was totally fascinating, it was marvellous to read a story which speaks so much and so well about psychology.
The relationship between the twins was really affecting, it could make me feel happy or sad, I almost could feel myself the feelings of the Kaulitz.
By the way, I think the childhood of the twins was my favorite part, because we could see the beginning of their unconditionnal love and how much they needed each other. It was so cute and adorable when Bill spoke for Tom, or when one of them said "we" instead of "I". Sometimes they were so sweet that I was smiling like an idiot in front of my screen.
Really, your story was marvellous, you're a very very very good writer, congratulation, and thanks for have written this fiction and permit us to read a so beautiful story.
Date: 04/30/09 08:14 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
I thought that was really sweet. It didn't have much action but that wasn't the point, was it? I still loved it!!
Date: 04/29/09 10:38 pm Title: Modeling:
Such an amazing story, i loved it!!!
Date: 04/27/09 02:46 am Title: Modeling:
Holy shit. I LOVE this story so much. The in-depth characters, the thought processes, EVERYTHING.
The twins grew up perfectly. Perfect aging, and perfect mind processes.
Therapy sessions were perfect. You did a stunning job with everything about them.
Amazing job with the psychology of the entire thing. Tom's dissociation, Bill's habit to not think about others, and how they changed and grew together. Wonderful.
Every single character was in-depth. They were all 3d, with their flaws and good qualities.
Great rate. The story took just enough time with EVERY event that happened. Didn't linger too long and didn't rush.
The plot was stunningly amazing. From a simple idea to this masterpiece.. It astounds me.
I can't even begin to describe how great this story is, and I'm almost ashamed to submit this review because it does nothing to show how much this story astounds and amazes me.
Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us.
Date: 04/25/09 03:25 pm Title: Modeling:
*wipes tears* I love this story. :) I really did. It bored me a little at the beginning, I'll admit, but I knew it would progress and that those chapters must mean something. SO wonderful, really. Now that I've read all of it I realize that I even loved those younger chapters. :)
Date: 04/08/09 11:52 am Title: Modeling:
omg, that story was the best! your a brilliant writer, the plot was amazing and you had such heartwrenching moments. god, i loved this story.
Date: 04/07/09 03:31 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ!
Date: 04/01/09 11:06 am Title: Modeling:
this is really good. ur an amazing writer. i luv this story.
Date: 03/23/09 12:05 pm Title: Modeling:
Advice? Never read this story in the middle of class. You'll make a fool of yourself when you sob like a baby in the last three chapters.
Date: 03/22/09 11:10 pm Title: Humiliation:
OOOOOHHHHHH NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03/22/09 09:29 pm Title: Derealization
Oh, this is why I hate this chapter!! But I love it, too! I don't understand me!!!
Date: 03/21/09 11:35 pm Title: Introspection:
Doctor Engle is my favorite original character of all time! I'm going through this story for the third time, so I've gotten very fond of him!
Date: 03/21/09 09:44 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
Aww. I like the way the baddest word they know is butt-head. That's so childlike and adorable!
Date: 03/19/09 11:21 pm Title: Modeling:
Is that it!?!? Is the story over!!!???? It was truely amazing!!! if you got hat published, you would be the greatest writer that ever lived! It was one of the best stories I've read on this site. I kept on reading to try to finish it....to try to see what happened next. It took me over a week to read and every minute I spent on it was worth it because your writing had such an impact on my emotions!!! Plaese Write More!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03/16/09 12:43 pm Title: Modeling:
Loved the story. Is there a sequel? Just wondering