Date: 07/20/10 04:03 pm Title: Illusion:
Wow this was an intense little chapter. Bill is funny and right. Even and their on the same footing. But it doesn't always work out best that way.
Date: 07/20/10 12:44 am Title: Separation Anxiety:
Yes the room shift was too soon, if they had done it later on it wouldn't have been so traumatic. And maybe the boys would be so deceptive.
Date: 07/20/10 12:16 am Title: Id:
Well it was bound to happen.
Date: 07/19/10 06:37 pm Title: Coercive Power:
Oh jorg is an ass hat holy mole
Date: 07/19/10 12:14 pm Title: Drive:
Awes Poor sad babies I just want to.snuggle them up and make it better.
Date: 07/19/10 12:15 am Title: Punishment:
Wow their teacher is very young, very stupid and a fucking bitch. Kids picking on.each other solves a whole fuck load of nothing. That's crazy logic. I hope she has a very unfulling personal life.
Date: 07/18/10 11:58 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
Awe two little babies against the world. It's tough being different at any age. But elementary school is especially tough because you don't have the confidence or the thick skin.
Date: 07/10/10 02:37 pm Title: Coercive Power:
This is so fucking amazing.
Date: 07/09/10 04:24 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
The great chocolate milk drought of '93. Haha nice.
Date: 07/08/10 07:15 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
Oh my god! The most amazing story I have read since being on here and it is SO realistic and believable. This was the most beautiful story that made me laugh,cry and even FEEL Tom and Bill as well as the other characters feelings; truly amazing. I cannot wait to see what else you have in store.
Date: 07/03/10 11:43 pm Title: Modeling:
I am absolutely amazed by this story! What a wonderful read! I loved your original characters, they were so real to me. And I loved the dynamics between both sets of twins. I SO wanna be a fly on the wall during that conversation between Alan and Amsel! I can't wait to go and discover what other magnificent things you've written! Thank you so much for the terrific read!
Date: 06/25/10 10:45 am Title: Modeling:
what a beautiful story! amazing job
Date: 04/11/10 05:44 pm Title: Modeling:
WOW...congratz at writing such an amazing and beautiful story..I absolutely love it!!
It was wonderfully written and such an amzing idea....I loved how you explored their relationship from when they were aged 5 upto 17...i also loved the journey..
Im in awe!!
Thank you for sharing this work of art with us x
Date: 04/09/10 07:47 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
Okay. This is the first review I've ever done O_o I just had to tell you how amazing this was. I was hooked from the first chapter and read the whole thing in one go.
Love the portrayal of Tom, especially :) and I love love loved how there are so many different emotions.
Thank you for writing this masterpiece :)
Date: 03/09/10 04:31 pm Title: Modeling:
This was the most amazing fanfic I've ever read. Seriously, it's perfect! It seriously made me cry and there are not much stories I cry over. Your writing is just brilliant and I love how you weave facts into the fiction. Well done!
Date: 02/23/10 07:47 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
I just want to say to you how much I like the history, its very unique and the plot really surprised me!
(Sorry for my bad english 8DU)
Date: 02/22/10 12:22 am Title: Subjective Reality:
mmm..ok so this is the first review ive had the guts to make (so im kinda freakin out) but i wouldnt be happy if i didnt told you how deep this story has gotten into me¡!¡!¡!ive learned so much with all this amazing chapters youve helped me to understand that i cant just walk away from my emotional problems (like Alan would say) i have to talk about them and just face them i cant keep walking away from them anymore soo thank you very much...
btw im not that emotional all the time its just that im crying(quite uncontrolably) right now...jeje
pd by emotional problems i mean this guy that ive had a crush on for a while...a very long while (smile)
Date: 02/19/10 11:06 am Title: Modeling:
Wow!!! That was soo awesome! Also, you single-handedly consumed around 6 hours of my computer time (I'm not a slow reader, just had to stop and squeal or scream or cry every now and then)and giving me a headache for staring at the monitor for such a long time. I read every chapter but I only reviewed on the ending because I was kinda rushing to read the next one...hehe *sheepish smile*. So,I'm very sorry about that but please write more. And consider writing a sequel for this one. I really want to see Amsel's ass kicked and a twincestous happy ending
Date: 02/14/10 12:41 pm Title: Cognitive Dissonance:
hahaha....dirty..hahaha
Date: 02/01/10 10:09 am Title: Derealization
When the doctor started talking to the girl... the first thing he said my I Pod went onto Hilf Mir Fliegen and when I finished reading the song ended... it made me cry... it was so overwhelming.