Date: 03/04/08 02:54 pm Title: Punishment:
Okay, so I tried to review the first chapter last night but my laptop spazzed out when I hit submit.
Anyway, another good story. I feel so bad for the twins and I want to hit their teacher. -makes fist-
So, a part of the first chapter reminded me of your "Kissing Kaulitz Drabble". Are you following that or was that part just unintentionaly similar?
Author's Response: The Kissing Kaulitz Drabble was the inspiration for this story. I am not following it to the letter, but I am including parts of it. I liked it so much I decided to adapt parts of it and turn it into a full story. Some of the ages will be changed, but most the scenes will be included.
Date: 03/04/08 02:29 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
Excellent. I was on the verge of punching out the teacher myself when I read this. Its awesome. Please continue.
Date: 03/04/08 02:27 pm Title: Punishment:
*huggles twins* Those utter butt-heads! Luckily they've showed them IRL. Even this part made me feel angsty for the sake of the little darlings, all the fluff in hte end just made my heart fly away all the way under covers to spy on them
Date: 03/04/08 02:22 pm Title: Punishment:
Aww I love this, it's so cute and adorable!! I love the baby twins ♥
That teacher is obviously a bitch though, she doesn't even try to understand their bond >:[
Can't wait for more. This is going in my favourites :DD
Date: 03/04/08 02:18 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!
Date: 03/04/08 02:16 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
Yay! I can't wait to read more of this, I am already spelled by the insights on the twins' universe since childhood. Can't wait for the more adult years as well :) Mistakes? Didn't spot, as I was too excited about reading it.
Date: 03/04/08 01:53 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
Eep. I fell in love. So cute. Can't wait for more. :D
Date: 03/04/08 01:26 pm Title: Punishment:
perfect. oh mannn, this is gonna get really sexxxi.
Date: 03/04/08 10:19 am Title: Subjective Reality:
awww the adorableness ^-^
Date: 03/04/08 02:05 am Title: Subjective Reality:
*dies of cutenesss*
Can't wait for more! =)
Date: 03/04/08 01:53 am Title: Subjective Reality:
oh my *sniffs* so adorable and *cries a ittle* poor them they're so innocent and cute in this and...and...*cries harder* awww they're perfect
*falls to floor and cry eyes out*
please update *wipes at tears*
much love firelucy
Date: 03/03/08 08:32 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
Awwww i luuuuv it! It doesnt seem like you have writers block cuz that was amazing, and you didnt have any mistakes that i could see anyway =D I luv your writing style
Please Update soon! =)
Danke
Date: 03/03/08 07:35 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
Hehe
That is a really good start to your story!
Your use of colloquial diction is great!
Date: 03/03/08 07:24 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
that teacher is a bitch -_- my poor baby Kaulitzs D:
Date: 03/03/08 07:15 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
this is amaaaazzzing. LOVE it. and if you want me to work with you on it, I'd love to. :):)
Date: 03/03/08 07:09 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
AHHH I can just TELL this fic is going to be amazing!!! It seems like it will ease gradually into twincest - Can't wait!
Date: 03/03/08 06:53 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
Man! That teacher is so messed up letting that happen to the poor boys >:(
If only she understood their bond she probably wouldst be such and a-hole
This was the biggest crisis they'd seen since the great chocolate milk drought of '93
A day that will forever live in infamy XD
Date: 03/03/08 06:44 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
Love this.
Date: 03/03/08 06:42 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
Awwwww you wrote them so well!! They are uber cute!
Date: 03/03/08 06:28 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwfufufufufuffu
i love this ♥
please update soon xD