Date: 03/16/08 05:34 am Title: Centration:
Ugh...So frustrating... +10
Date: 03/16/08 05:21 am Title: Centration:
wow, it's just perfect!
Date: 03/16/08 04:28 am Title: Centration:
guh *drops head*
they are so STUPID (well not really they're only kids)
cliffhanger *grumples* you better continue soon
*pouts* love this story
Date: 03/16/08 04:28 am Title: Centration:
oh the twins ._.
i hope they continue being each other's only. it's only right.
Date: 03/16/08 04:23 am Title: Centration:
Aww poor Bill! I bet that really hurt! I can't wait for the next chapter...I'm eager to read what'll happen next!
Date: 03/16/08 04:06 am Title: Centration:
I liked it. Poor Bill, he took Tom for granted and Tomi did not like that. I know they'll talk and work this out.
Andreas is adorable. He just wants to fit in with the twins.
Date: 03/15/08 11:24 pm Title: Illusion:
oh geez, this is getting sooo good!
you're SUCH an amazing writer, no joke.
please post more soon.
♥♥
Date: 03/15/08 06:09 pm Title: Illusion:
Oh god, can't wait for the twins to get older so we get some real action between the sheets ^^
Great chapter, and a grat story totally! :D Can't wait for the next chapter! :O Keep up the amazing work! ;D
Date: 03/15/08 06:04 pm Title: Illusion:
yay. it was worth the wait, I really enjoyed this chapter. OH THE DRAMA.
Date: 03/15/08 04:50 pm Title: Illusion:
Aww! I love the conflicts
Date: 03/15/08 04:45 pm Title: Id:
T.T I love this story. Absolutely love it. I think its my favourite of all of them. God. For serious. This fic rocks. Homg. I cant even offer any criticism. Wow. Just that. Awesome. I adore it. ^--^
Date: 03/15/08 03:37 pm Title: Illusion:
aw that was a cute chapter!
Date: 03/15/08 02:23 pm Title: Illusion:
oh no I mean yes no wait I...
don't know what to say
too much
oh god
dear lord
*dies*
Date: 03/15/08 12:59 pm Title: Illusion:
Wow! It's SO great! I love it !
Date: 03/15/08 11:33 am Title: Illusion:
:o... tom kissed another girl! poor bill!
love this story!
more soon please!
Date: 03/15/08 10:00 am Title: Illusion:
Growing apart doesn't mean falling apart from each other, I hope they keep that in mind - that they can still feel all that about each other even though they don't live symbiotically anymore :) I, again, was amazed by this fic: the twins actually fighting has me in such an emotional uproar, happy they made it up - and oh! arent's they sneaky!
Author's Response: That's what this journey is all about. It takes time for them to figure out such an important lesson.
Date: 03/15/08 09:32 am Title: Illusion:
I think this story is amazing! I love everything with it, the long chapters, your writing skills, everything.
You seem to know a LOT about children's psychology and it's really interesting to read.
Everything the twins feel and think seems so realistic, it's like you know exactly how kids think, what they understand. It's really awsome!
I can't wait for the next chapter! I need to know :O
Author's Response: Thank you. I guess my education hasn't completely gone to waste. I'm actually studying to be a child psychologist. To be honest, the twins in this story are not completely realistic. I am writing them a bit more cognitively advanced than they should be at their age because it makes for a better story. I'm trying to keep it in the realm of what is believable though.
Date: 03/15/08 05:37 am Title: Illusion:
That was such a sad chapter. But i loved it. How old are they??
Author's Response: They are 9 in chapter seven. I'm going up one year for each chapter except in a few cases where something takes more than one chapter to deal with.