Date: 03/26/08 07:11 am Title: Jealousy:
Wow, it's very very good!
Date: 03/26/08 05:09 am Title: Jealousy:
LOVE DOCTOR ENGLE!!!!!! he's my twincest hero!!! yay!!!! lol. thankx for the update ^^.
xoxoxoxooxox
Date: 03/26/08 04:31 am Title: Jealousy:
FIGHTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!! HELL YES!!!!
*punches the air*
Date: 03/26/08 03:33 am Title: Jealousy:
Oh god... this is getting reallr exiting! :O
Can't wait for more! :D
Date: 03/26/08 12:53 am Title: Jealousy:
Oi. Jealous Tomi is a dangerous thing indeed. I love how Doctor Engle draws the conclusions about the twins' behavior from them as opposed to giving them what he wants them to think. The true sign of a gifted professional.
I'm afraid I see dark times ahead for the boys, the whole situation is going to spiral out of control if Bill doesn't get that the world doesn't revolve around him and if Tom doesn't handle his jealousy better.
Poor Andreas, caught in the middle of something he couldn't possibly understand. I can already tell he won't be left unscathed.
Date: 03/26/08 12:35 am Title: Jealousy:
i really love how you portray alan and charlie's relationship! (more of the pleaassee :D)
and its so sweet how protective tom is of his brother
Date: 03/25/08 11:58 pm Title: Jealousy:
love it. can't wait for more n__n
Date: 03/25/08 11:38 pm Title: Jealousy:
Phew. In a way, it's heart warming and cute how protective Tomi is over Bill, but the poor boys are just suffocating each other at the moment. Their relationship is so intense to the point of it ending in a way that makes it impossible for them to even be together. Luckily Doc is there to help them, and the lovely twins are good people with whole lotta love for each other so I'm sure they'll end up just fine :) Poor Alan, I hope he'll have a chance to fix things with his Charlie.
Author's Response: I'm glad that the intensity of it is coming across. To me, it's frighteningly intense. It's unhealthy and it will eventually consume them if they do not reign it in, but that is what this story is all about.
Date: 03/25/08 11:22 pm Title: Jealousy:
GOSH!! AMAZING!
Date: 03/25/08 11:15 pm Title: Jealousy:
I love this story still. I cant get enough. My recovery from this stupid surgery is actually more fun with it. Keep it going hun. Please.
Date: 03/25/08 11:00 pm Title: Jealousy:
oh this is much love.. i so much dig tom's possessiveness over Bill. ahhahah
Date: 03/25/08 02:41 am Title: Subjective Reality:
Ah, the twins are so cute! And that Doctor What-Was-His-Name-Again seems like a nice person. But I hate those stupid butt-heads from school; they are so mean! *pets the chapter*
Date: 03/24/08 03:49 pm Title: Cognitive Dissonance:
That was a SEXY dirty chapter. This fandom makes me feel like a freak for perving on the young boys. D;
Author's Response: No kidding. I feel dirty for writing it.
Date: 03/24/08 12:49 pm Title: Cognitive Dissonance:
Dirty = soo gooood. mmm.
i hope the good ol´doc gets to fix things with his twin as well.
Date: 03/24/08 01:29 am Title: Cognitive Dissonance:
lol, yeah, it was a dirty chapter :p but that's how it gets its rating! Besides, it adds to the romance :3 +10
Date: 03/23/08 09:38 pm Title: Cognitive Dissonance:
Dirty. But good. :)
Date: 03/23/08 05:54 pm Title: Cognitive Dissonance:
i love this story so much!! please update soon, its amazing!
Date: 03/23/08 03:19 pm Title: Cognitive Dissonance:
I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! From the first moment you said Dr. Engle was a twin, i knew it. I was going to mention it in an earlier review, but i didnt want to spoil it. ^^' Awesome. (and now i wanna know more about Alan and Charlie...Maybe for help with the twins, Alan goes to Charlie to talk to him about their feelings from along ago? Aww, now I'm all fluffy toward them too!! DX)
Again, I adore this fic, its incredible. GREAT chapter, btw. But, as much as i love the smut, i feel it might be getting away from the ...point of the fic. Maybe thats not the right word, but the basic feelings and stuff...Eh. Its prolly just me! But, regardless, i love it. Cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It's not just you. The smut did not fit in with this chapter. I realized that when I posted it, but I did not want to separate the chapters because it would make two very short chapters. This whole chapter was awkward. I want to show everyone the developing intensity and intimacy in the relationship because that will be relevant later. It just feels so awkward right now.
Date: 03/23/08 02:24 pm Title: Subjective Reality:
i love it,update soon please!