Date: 01/21/12 04:57 am Title: To much?
õõ, I also came home late last night and mom yelled at me:S but I wasn´t drunk at least.
Good story, some parts were boring, but I still continue reading defenetly.
Date: 01/20/12 04:18 pm Title: And You Are?
You need a beta very badly. But it was okay.
Date: 01/20/12 03:30 am Title: What was i thinking?
Yay Vampire Bill!!! Nom...it's really good, a couple mistakes but nothing a bit of beta-ing couldn't sort ;) x but very good, I like x just email me if you're still wanting my help xxx
Author's Response:
Yes yes i would love you to beqat for me. but i must say im pusshy though :(. just tell me if your not swaped with all the other wrighing all send you thing i need fixed * hugs you tighlt* thank you so much.
Date: 01/20/12 01:32 am Title: And You Are?
Okay, click on my pen name. It'll take you to my profile page, and then you click PM. It should send correctly...try it again =)
Date: 01/20/12 01:12 am Title: And You Are?
If you go to my profile page and PM me from there, I'll get it in email format. Then I'll send you a reply and you can send me the document ^-^
Author's Response:
i think i sent it wrong :/
Date: 01/20/12 01:08 am Title: And You Are?
It's perfectly fine to have mistakes in PMs ^-^ I have an account on FanFiction.net, and trust me, people over there write WAAAAAAAYYYY worse than any of your stuff (trust me. It's SCARY how bad some of the stuff over there is...). Also, don't worry about not being fluent =) Also...not quite sure what you meant in that last sentence. It was missing a verb...or, at least, the first part of the last sentence was missing a verb...
Author's Response:
how do i send you the story for you to fix it ?
Date: 01/20/12 12:45 am Title: And You Are?
Um... I'm gonna correct your PMs too, if that's okay...I've found it helps just as much, if not more, than beta-ing fics. That way you'll be able to ask me questions about why something was wrong if you don't understand, and you'll see the changes directly...So, here's how this SHOULD have been written ^-^:
"I'm good at editing. I'm restarting." is the first one and
"Okay, read it now. Only to chapter" (I'm not sure what number you meant) "though. :)"
I hope it's okay for me to edit your PMs...if it's not, just tell me and I won't do it again ^-^ Anyway, I'll read it =)
Author's Response:
Hangs her self. I wish i spoke english!! ok soooo im going to at evything kinow and just read the hole thing agian
Date: 01/12/12 09:49 am Title: What was i thinking?
:O Billy!!! >.< I hope he is ok :( I am really into this one :) please continue if you will ^.^
Date: 01/11/12 09:10 pm Title: What was i thinking?
O.o poor billa needs his tomi's blood
Author's Response:
yep yep. i added a twist to the other storry chapert 3. im just saying so u dont miss out. THANK YOU for reviweing and also look out for my one shot snowed in it should be up when they apervo it
Date: 01/11/12 02:37 pm Title: What was i thinking?
haa! Bill is a vampire:D This ending part was so weird, blood in microwave:D
Good story , update soon please!
Author's Response:
well Bill can't drink the blood cold it gross that way ^.^. and for the ending you'll seee (Rubs-hands evilly) Any ways glade you like it made my day.
Date: 01/11/12 10:52 am Title: What was i thinking?
Don't really go for vampire fics but I decided to give this a try and I LOVE it so far :) can't wait for more
Author's Response: Liss92 you just made my heart explod with JOY!! ^.^
Date: 01/08/12 10:30 pm Title: And You Are?
this sounds like a really god story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 01/08/12 02:02 pm Title: And You Are?
good start! i'll be looking out for this! :D
Author's Response:
im glade you like it ^.^
Date: 01/07/12 09:44 pm Title: And You Are?
O.o hey no dying it not aloud, you gotta finish your stories - uses the zapy heart thing on you and makes alive again-
Author's Response:
Lol ya good idea *comes back as zombie alex* im ALIVE evil laugh
Date: 01/07/12 08:49 pm Title: And You Are?
not a problem hun, your off to a great start on both your stories ( yea i read them both and waiting for both updates). *huggles* what can i say you made a fan hehe^^
Author's Response:
Dies from happiness
Date: 01/07/12 08:04 pm Title: And You Are?
so cute ^^. cant wait till you update
Author's Response:
SOO HAPPY U LIKE IT sorry i screamed just omg writing is such a big part of my life that when people read my storys it make me feel butterflys. *HUges you*