Date: 01/07/12 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
It's not rubbish!!! This chapter made me really feel for Tom because of how it really must be affecting him through this. This happens in real life every day and those loved ones who have to stand by and watch feel just as helpless. I'll review each chapter if you keep this story up. Lovin' it!!
Date: 01/07/12 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am giving you a review for each chapter because this story is very well-written and is a near perfect description of what it's like to have an eating disorder. I don't understand why this isn't getting more reviews, but you absolutely hit the mark on the anger one feels when they have an eating disorder. I loved the first chapter and that you've made Tom so protective. It was a great beginning to what will be a real journey of what someone suffers with this. Props to you for writing it and please continue!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. :3I will continue, if I'm honest I don't see this fan-fiction ending, I love writing it too much :')rnI'm surprised people are actually reading this, let alone reviewing. I'm so glad that you liked it :)
Date: 01/06/12 05:23 am Title: Chapter 2
This is heartbreaking. I have a daughter with an eating disorder so know how emotional it is to watch someone hurting themselves like this and feeling powerless to do anything. She's much improved now due to therapy but I know she'll always have issues around food and body image. So what I'm trying to say in a long-winded way is that you've captured the issues and the emotions perfectly. I feel so sad for both the boys and its lovely to see David so caring. Please update soon.
Date: 01/05/12 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
I feel sorry for them :(
but i love the story, can't wait for more . :)
Date: 01/04/12 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!! I mean...Please update soon. :)