Date: 01/18/12 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
Well, I'd be very sad if you deleted this because this is the only good fic that I'm reading right now that updates quickly. And it's one of the few good ones about this particular subject. Those are rare. You write it really well, you have nothing to facepalm about.
Date: 01/18/12 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh my godddd D:::: Poor bill :((
Date: 01/18/12 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
IF U TAKE THIS STORY DOWN, I WILL FUCKING KILL YOU!
no, seriously, I love it,:D It is the only story at the moment, I have been reading sence first chapter.
Please, donīt dissapoint youīr fans.
Youīr oppinion doesnīt count anymore:D Okay, it does but the point is, you might not be happy with it, because youīr first vision of this story was different, but the way it finally came out, is really brilliant to me. I come back here every day only, to see if u have added any new chapters. Donīt please please donīt make me cry and die in sadness by taking story down. I need it !
Date: 01/18/12 03:24 am Title: Chapter 6
Please don't take this story down, or itf you do maybe just rewrite the bits you're not happy with and then repost. It's brilliant. I've said it before, you really know how to portray all the emotion from both sides. My herat bleeds for both Bill and Tom and I love how caring David is in this. Please carry on writing it. Love Helen X
Date: 01/18/12 12:39 am Title: Chapter 6
Dont delete this story!! Im actually really enjoying it. Ive been reading from the beginning even though this is my first time commenting. I hope you continue to update because i am looking forward to whats happening next. It sounds terrible but i do hope you put bill in the hospital.
Date: 01/16/12 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
WHY ARE WE WAITING, WE ARE SUFFOCATING. WHAT DO WE WANT? MORE CHAPTERS. WHEN DO WE WANT IT? NOW!
Date: 01/15/12 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was another really sad chapter. Good writing, though and very realistic. Sometimes when a person is in such a state that they can't see what their doing to themself, then an intervention from those around are necessary for their recovery. They should take him to the hospital. Can't wait for your next chapter.
Date: 01/15/12 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh shit..
I feel sorry for them O_o
but
this story is amazing
Date: 01/15/12 11:49 am Title: Chapter 5
My hands were shaking, when reading this. I had just ate a full bar of chocolate and I feel really sick now, what would Bill think of me?:) It is really scary chapter. I hope they take him to the hospital, Iīm scared about Bill. I feel for Tom also, he really is an amazing brother...
I canīt imagine real Bill doing this to himself, because Bill seems so happy and outgoing person. He is just so loveable.
I love ur story, hopefully it helps me too, because right now I feel huge. It makes reading this even more hurtful, but I must say, I am addicted to it. Keep going!
Date: 01/15/12 09:54 am Title: Chapter 5
I think this chapter is likely the most heartbreaking yet. When Tom is trying to get Bill to look at himself in the mirror and their eyes meet in the reflection its so, so sad. And to think that Bill feels like he's fatter than ever because he ate and apple...goddamn! I could just feel Tom and David's panic when they were trying to get into the bathroom and then to break down the door and find Bill like that.And that one word carved into Bill's flesh...my heart just about broke for Tom in that moment. So, so realistic. Update soon , please because they need to get Bill to a hospital for the cuts if nothing else, even if he doesn't want to go.
Date: 01/12/12 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
i really like reading your story:) and i feel so sad for all of them :(
Date: 01/12/12 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
My heart stopped beating for a second, when I saw, this story has a new chapter... this should say it all.
(L)
Date: 01/12/12 03:12 am Title: Chapter 4
What do you mean the chapter sucks? It was so good. Your detail is amazing in describing the symptoms of Bill's ED and his and Tom's emotions. I could feel both twins' pain, and I love David as a really caring person. Sorry if your life is difficult right now but glad writing helps you and that means you're going to update regularly. Hugs, Helen x
Author's Response: Thank you again for all your reviews :3 I'm glad I've got the details right, I honestly thought no one would even understand any of this.rnWriting this has actually been an amazing way to vent, as I find it impossible to actually talk to people. It's helping me figure out a lot of stuff going on in my own head, and to be honest I really love writing it.rnI'm so glad people are enjoying it :3rn*hugs back*
Date: 01/12/12 12:17 am Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for the next chapter of this. I check for it every time I get on here now and I track it, as painful as it is to read in some parts. I just wonder when Tom's going to find out about the cutting? God, it's like sometimes these things really go hand-in-hand, ya know?
I'm glad Tom's being so patient, though and giving Bill what little control he can, but the cutting man, it's got me worried. So yeah, I know life gets busy, but update this asap, please. One of the best fics on here about eating disorders and what it's like being taken, literally, through one!!
Date: 01/08/12 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is one of the (much) better stories about eating disorders on here. Keep up the good work! I love all the angst, it's wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you so much <3
Date: 01/08/12 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
God, I'd almost forgotten about the cutting. My daughter used anything she could lay her hands on to cut herself when she was really ill, but hasn't done it for over a year now. She was also living away from home at university and was a perfectionist like Bill. You have so got this down, the emotions so accurate and the self-loathing. My daughter used laxatives instead of vomiting so I'm not so up on the effects of making yourself sick but I believe it can rot your teeth amongst other things. I really am loving your story even though its so very sad and upsetting. Tom is amazing with Bill, so patient and he understands how hard it is for his brother far more than his parents do. But it must be hard for them too, wondering why Bill can't just eat and get better. I hope Tom asks for help too, because he needs support as much as Bill so he can stay strong during Bill's recovery. And Bill needs some serious therapy which is what helped my daughter more than anything. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you're liking this story :) I'm so sorry if this is upsetting for you, I can't imagine how tough actually going through this must have been. I just have to say that I think a year without cutting is amazing. I know it's difficult to fight the urges to harm yourself and even though it sounds creepy, I'm proud of her. I hope that she can get to a point where she no longer has issues with food and she realises that she is perfect the way she is.rnWhen people make themselves sick it brings up stomach acid which damages their teeth and throat. And I will bring their parents back into this story, I just find it difficult to write family members points of view about this kind of thing, if you know what I mean. It's easier to write Tom's side because I have a twin, and it's exactly how I would be if it was her.rnrn
Date: 01/08/12 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg are you serious? I doesnīt suck!
I would cry when reading this but my mom and dad are in the other room and they would think Iīm insane:D
I totally feel the pain that Bill feels, and Tom also... Tom is such a good brother, gosh.
I feel sorry for them. If I was there and could help Bill, I would give him only gabbages, watermelons and cucumber to start. Cuz itīs just water and maybe if I would pursue Bill itīs just water, maybe he would eat that. Pasta and pizza is too much, I think.
It was a good story, really good, because it made me think about, what if... and what would I do.
I hope you are going to be officially writer someday.
Author's Response: Thank you :3 I'm sorry that it's made you want to cry D: *HUGS* rnThat's a good idea, one I think I'll put into this if you don't mind :3rnrnI hope I will be too :)
Date: 01/08/12 12:12 am Title: Chapter 3
It sorta worrys me that you know all this stuff, but I really love it cuz you get into Bills head and sees his point of things. So don't worry cuz its really great!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. I honestly thought no one would even read this. If I'm honest a lot of the things going on in Bill's head in this fic is what is happening in my own, but tehre's nothing to worry about :)
Date: 01/07/12 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
No, it doesn't suck. Actually, you're hitting the nail on the head also with Simone and Gordon. It's like they're in denial that Bill can just eat and be okay with it. I feel so horrible for Tom, but I'm glad he's there for Bill, and I can't wait for the next chapter to see if Bill starts eating or if Tom has to enlist outside help, which is highly likely. Sorry, not trying to write it for you. I just really love this. I like how gentle Tom's being about the whole thing and patient, as well. I get Bill's anger through out this, though, and the battle in his head. Keep going with this. I do hope you start getting more reviews because you deserve them!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :3 Yeah, Simone and Gordon just don't know how to help, it's hard to accept something like this, I know. But I promise they will be nicer in later chapters, I just find it hard to write from a parents point of view because of the reaction I've got to this kind of thing. rnThank you, again :3