Date: 02/21/12 10:17 am Title: Chapter 11
What a lovely chapter. The puppy was an amazing idea. I hope that it works out like Tom planned and Bill will start taking care of himself as well as the pup.
Date: 02/20/12 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
haha:D Tom is a genius:D!!!!!!
This was a good chapter. But I still want Bill to talk with his parents... I guess, they dont understand him
Date: 02/20/12 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
GENIUS IDEA! I hope it works. That's so sweet and cute XD awww PUPPY! I love puppies. ^_^!
Date: 02/07/12 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
This is so intense that I can't really review, but I want you to know that this is a powerful story and I'm glad you've written it. I couldn't just read it and not say anything because I want you to know that I really connect with this story.
Date: 02/07/12 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Tom is so nice:D Poor Bill, I totally understand him.
I wonder, have you been reseaching about this and is this really, like that, I mean recovery? No special diet? Just eats whatever they give him? That part was unbelievable. And other question: this is weird, that Bill has starving for years and he still CAN eat, extreme anorexics are sometimes put on tube-eating, because they simply can´t eat anymore. Just my thoughts about the story. Btw, I love it and can hardly wait another chapter!
Author's Response: I researched a bit :') I actually found this through someone who's being treated for an eating disorder. I didn't really want to go into his diet, as at this point he can't know the calorie content of what he's given, he just has to eat it :)rn And thank you, I'm glad you like it :3
Date: 02/07/12 09:56 am Title: Chapter 10
My heart is breaking for Tom in all this. Don't get me wrong, I feel for Bill too, but Tom is so loyal and loving and must feel utterly helpless. He must also feel guilty that he didn't notice what was happening sooner and he wants to do what is best for Bill but what might be best might also hurt Bill and that's the last thing he wants.Also he doesn't want to alienate his twin, deosn't want Bill to hate him. In this chapter I think they're all realising just how serious Bill's condition is, that he really could die and how long and hard its going to be for Bill to work towards getting better. The end paragraph is really hopeful; Bill is ready to rely on Tom's help in getting through the hard months to come. David is also amazing and supportive and I hope that Bill also learns to trust and open up to his therapist. Another excellent chapter and you are right to be proud of it.
Date: 02/07/12 05:44 am Title: Chapter 10
I hope Bill will feel better from now on but.. probably not, right?
but this chapter is amazing as always :)
Date: 02/07/12 05:31 am Title: Chapter 9
I totally forgot to review this, always when I read chapters from my phone, I forget to review. But what I say is the same as always, I love this chapter!
Date: 02/06/12 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 10
I really enjoyed this chapter. It made me tear up at many points. I really loved the emotion you created. Great job- Im lloking forward to more :)
Date: 02/04/12 08:56 am Title: Chapter 9
YESS! I´m so glad and I hope Bill is soon gonna act like he did before this horrible iillenss.
Also, it scares me, that you can wright about it so well, but I guess you have an awsome fantasy.
Date: 02/02/12 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
Another incredibly powerful chapter. I loved the ending, that Bill is finally starting to believe what everyone is telling him, that they love him and care whether he lives or dies. I hope that this is a real turning point for him, even though it will be incredibly hard and the future will have its ups and downs, hopefully he will realise now that he is worth something to those who love and care for him. Please update soon.
Date: 01/31/12 11:57 am Title: Chapter 8
I feel so bad, you have no idea.
Is this where the story ends? Or there is something more coming?
I feel like someone has really died...
It must be that either I´m a sycho or your story is just that good.
Date: 01/30/12 12:41 am Title: Chapter 8
i liked this chapter. it was well written and very emotional and i definitely felt attached to the characters. Keep up the good work- i'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Date: 01/29/12 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
i just can't...i have no words...just screams...
Date: 01/29/12 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG. My heart is breaking reading this, both for Tom and Bill. Bill really believes that the world, and especially his twin, will be happier without him. And Tom is shattered that Bill would do this to himself, and that Bill is dying and he'll be left all alone. Your writing is amazing as always, so clearly showing the emotions of all concerned. Please, please update soon.
Date: 01/24/12 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 7
I would love to have Tom as my brother:)
I wonder, is that why Bill grew a beard, because they took razorblades away:D
Really liked the chapter, keep going!
Date: 01/21/12 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
:( I just want to cry for him. I can really feel his pain, probably because of how you've written it but also because I can relate.
Date: 01/21/12 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
I have to write this before I read the next chapter because I read the chapter notes and PLEASE don't take this story down. There's nothing wrong with it at all and I really relate to it, so please keep going? You at least have one person here who believes in this story. Keep going! You can do it!
Date: 01/21/12 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 7
I don't think it sucks at all. I still think its very true to life. If Bill has been cutting for 4 years and starving himelf for ages too he couldn't just give it up especially if he feels its the only thing he has control over in his life. I also think the non-co-operation at the therapist's is very real too. Ans how angry he gets at Tom and David for making decisions for him and taking away his control over his life. Please carry on writing, I love reading this, its the best Eating Disorder TH fanfic I've read. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Date: 01/21/12 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
You are not writing rubbish and this is heartbreaking :(. I think it's great that you seem to be taking your time with this. It really shows how painful this is for Bill and maybe for others with eating disorders. I appreciate you writing this.