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Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/12 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 2

Em, you got the sex perfectly! I loved this story and I'm so happy that they felt the same way. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I never feel comfortable with writing sex, it just never works out but I'm happy you liked it :):)

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/12 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

Awww, how cute! =)

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/12 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

sweet jesus. So damn fuckin sexy it made my belly tingling O_O Update please

Author's Response: Ohh, that's good to hear (n_n) part 2 is up now!

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/12 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hi.

I'd love to celebrate new year dancing, however, family goes first so it is dining and playing with relatives.

Who wouldn't have it bad for Tom? He's sexy and that accent.... I can understand Bill's crush perfectly.

Does Tom feel something more than a sexual thing for Bill? I guess I'll have to wait to know.

Hugs!

Author's Response: Oh but that sounds lovely, too :):) Haha I think we can all understand his crush. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: strssna Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/12 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was very sensual, and I hope we get to read the second part soon - I'm hooked! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope part two is up to scratch! :):)

Reviewer: Nupmetal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/12 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Emi, this is fantastic!!. I love how you wrote everything; it feels like I’m there. It is so well narrated and ugh, so sexy. The sexual tension between Bill and Tom is so hot but it also has a touch of drama that makes it brilliant. I can’t wait for more, girl. I’m in love with this universe; this is so going to my favorites!. Gaw, I love your fics, and I’m enjoying this one a lot. Thank you! :D

Happy New Year, darling

Author's Response: Ohhhh bbycakes, thank you so much! It means the world that you liked it <3 You always say the sweetest damn things! I hope part 2 is alright, too :):)

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/12 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this new story. I put it in my faves already & I can't wait for more!


Happy new year! I hope 2012 is an incredible year for you xxx

Author's Response: Ohh thank you, dear! I hope 2012 is a fab one for you, too!

Reviewer: Fighter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/12 06:08 am Title: Chapter 1

aaw cute! Can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Mariesen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/12 03:54 am Title: Chapter 1

I think my brain just melted *______*
OMG! This is unbelievably sexy and nnnngh!

Author's Response: Ohhh thank you! Sorry for brain melting though O__O

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/12 12:59 am Title: Chapter 1

this is so addictive. even though it's only one chapter. i can't wait for the next part, i love this universe possibly as much as you do.

Author's Response: Aw, that's such a lovely thing to say, thank you :):)

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm looking forward to seeing more of this! What a sexy-hexy start.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Happy new year to you too! So happy to see a new story from you! What an excellent first chapter! They are so damn sexy together! Love the plot and characters already and i cant wait to read the rest =D

Author's Response: Thank you and thank you, sweetpea :):)

Reviewer: zeph317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is so amazing! I love it! *______*

Your writing is so vivid. The way you detail things makes me feel like I'm right there watching them grind (oh why can't I be there watching them grind! :D) I love the sexual tension between the two of them. You made them so hot and sensuous and I'm just flailing because it's so sexy.

And now I'm rooting for Tom to realize that he has true feelings for Bill and for Bill to realize that he does too and they'll have sex and live happily ever after! And I'm also going to take a cold shower! ;)

This is just an incredible Christmas gift. THANK YOU SO MUCH, YOU GORGEOUS, SWEET THING YOU!!

Author's Response: What a lovely review! I'm so so happy you enjoyed (n_n) I wish we could be right there watching them grind, oh the joys that would give us fangirls. Haha hope your cold shower wasn't too horrible, sorry darlingest xD rnrnYou're more than welcome! Hope the next part is okay too :):):)

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Kept me reading with no break, not even when the phone rang! :) Great first chapter sweetie. Bill really does have it bad and I hope for his sake that Tom does too. I guess I'll have to wait for a future chapter to find out. Love it. :)

Author's Response: Ohh, that's cool to know! Thank you so much! :):)

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

*swoons* Imma stay right here until you update again, k? Unless I have another Supermodel Fashion Hour I need to get to, but otherwise. Right. Here.

Author's Response: I updateddd! Sorry for making you stay there for so long :O thank you, love!

Reviewer: Holleh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ahhh! You stole all my readers by uploading just after me, cause your writing is 10x better xD I'm only joking (Well, apart from the part about your writing being 10x better)! I love it so far! :-)

Author's Response: Ack, sorry for the stealing! I was unaware of my actions :O And psh, it's never 10X better. Thanks, my love!

Reviewer: Liss92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow this is amazing so far :)

Author's Response: thank you! :D

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

oooooooooooh, sexy X.X can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wohoooo! :D This is good!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a steamy relationship these two have! I get the feeling though that they both want more than just a weekly get together.

I loved the mood you set in that club. It was this feverish excitement that I even felt. How fun!

Author's Response: Ohh, I think you may be on the right track... Thank you Melly my love <3

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