Date: 01/23/12 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Four
OMG :'( I never expected that! poor Colby.................
Date: 01/23/12 04:13 pm Title: Chapter Four
oh dear lord!!
I didn't expect that
OMG It explains a lot now
Date: 01/23/12 03:57 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh God this can only be a sick joke!
Date: 01/23/12 03:16 pm Title: Chapter One
This broke my heart! As I was reading this i was like yah tom finally gets his chance to do things right and then bam.... It crashed in his face. :'(
Date: 01/23/12 02:03 pm Title: Chapter Four
I have to say something: I don't like Mpreg, but there's another thing I have to say: this caught my attention with the cheques being sent back, so I had to know what was happening.
And omg, I was almost crying reading this chapter, so yeah... :(
I had a feeling something happened with the kid, but I didn't want to think he had died...
Date: 01/23/12 01:26 pm Title: Chapter Four
one thing - i'm gonna cry..
Date: 01/23/12 12:12 pm Title: Chapter Four
how could he not tell tom that their son died???
Date: 01/23/12 11:16 am Title: Chapter Four
omg..... almost cried
Date: 01/23/12 11:15 am Title: Chapter One
It is sad....I guess the boy is passed away but I refused to believe it....
Date: 01/23/12 11:07 am Title: Chapter Four
Awe, I had a feeling that the little guy had passed =[ It makes sense why Bill would have been sending the cheques back and why he said he didn't need them.
I can just see Tom beating himself up even more now =/
Date: 01/23/12 09:36 am Title: Chapter Four
Yes, I expected the Child's already dead. I was suspecting an illness, or an accident. The lesser angsty one was Bill already has a husband, or he put the kid up for adoption(-earlier speculation lol). It's still saaaaaaaad Colby died:( And Tom was even excited to see him. Oh, geezus!:(
I'm surprised Bill wasn't yelling like a bitch at Tom for leaving and everything. He managed to at least be civil, or something. He's got a lot of making up to do, and it may take a while for that. *le sigh* My heart..D: *breaking sound*
Date: 01/23/12 09:13 am Title: Chapter Four
I knew right when you said:
"...seen Bills hand fly up to his mouth, holding back a pained expression as he turned to take a deep breath"
thats also when I shed a few tears.
The very last paragraph made me cry like a baby. I dont usually read stories that arent complete because I hate the waiting game, but I couldnt pass this one up. I really hope you update again very soon!
Date: 01/23/12 09:03 am Title: Chapter Four
I had a feeling he wasn't around anymore . How sad :(
Date: 01/23/12 08:59 am Title: Chapter Four
nice chapter!
an also so sad!
what happend to colby?
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 01/23/12 07:44 am Title: Chapter Four
Ho my god, it's deeply moving story.
I'm sur, Tom will be in angry with Bill... poor Bill
Date: 01/23/12 07:28 am Title: Chapter Four
:O! No, He's dead? aw snap! Now I'll go cry for a week until the next chapter. :)
Date: 01/23/12 05:22 am Title: Chapter Four
OHH NO! Tom was so excited to meet his son and he came too late, damn :(
Can't wait to find out what happened *sniff*
Date: 01/23/12 03:13 am Title: Chapter Four
oh my! I didn't expect that... =(
Date: 01/23/12 03:10 am Title: Chapter Four
I had a bad feeling this was gonna happen :( I was so hoping I was wrong.
Date: 01/23/12 02:32 am Title: Chapter Four
Didnt see that coming!