Date: 01/29/12 09:34 pm Title: Chapter Five
awww i hope they'll have another baby together
Great story
Date: 01/29/12 09:10 pm Title: Chapter Five
They need a baby again!!!
Date: 01/26/12 01:46 pm Title: Chapter Four
To be honest, i did sort of expect this (as I've been following this story, yet I haven't been reviewing very.. well) *hits herself over the head*
I sort of expected it from the moment the cheques were send back and Tom had explained the whole Bill-kid-leaving-situation and I sort of confirmed it in my head when bill said 'I never needed it and I definitely don't need it now' and in the phone conversation.
But whether or not I expected it or not, I must say I'm very, extremely said poor Colby is dead, because I was very much hoping my angsty-brain was running away with me and I was wrong. Then again, things never go well at first, otherwise there would be no story, would there?
I love your style so much, as a side note, it's a bit heavy, which is good for a story like this and I absolutely adore how realistic this story is, even if it's Mpreg. Yay for faux-realism.
Even the way you've written Bill and Tom's meeting was very well written. If they had, in any other way, simply accepted and forgiven each other like that, I would've hated it, but you really described it as if they were two old puzzle pieces fitting together again, after one had got lost. Plus, the kid dying probably made Bill a lot softer towards Tom and less tending to hate him, while he needs his support now more then ever.
All the little details of their relationship make me nostalgic, even if it's only the fourth chapter and it's like I've known them forever. It's awesome, yet also very painful because I swear I felt my insides squirm at the last sentence.
I do hope this'll get updated soon, because I've fallen completely in luf with it.
love,
Dawn
Author's Response: I'm a dick for taking so long to reply to this, but thank you so much for this review. Going back and reading these makes me really want to start writing again and this definitely helps me out. :)
Date: 01/25/12 06:04 pm Title: Chapter Four
AHA! I KNEW IT! VICTORY IS MINE!
.........................*cough*
I'm very sorry for your loss, boys.
I am thoroughly enjoying your story.
Date: 01/24/12 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Four
Woah! Not what I was expecting at all! I thought Bill was going to say that Tom wasn't the father, but this!? Ohmygosh poor Bill. And Tom trying to do his best while being totally clueless. I am in shock right now. Woah this chapter. You need to update again before the suspense kills me. For now I'm just gonna go sit down and process what I just read.
Date: 01/24/12 05:54 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh my, no, that's just horrible....
You got to put up all the right warnings, woman! It's just wrong to let me read that, god. I'm so...sad and angry :( There should have been a Minor Character Death-warning there, seriously.
I love the story; don't get me wrong. I just can't read stuff like that without knowing it will come.
Author's Response: I purposely left it out, because then right away my entire story would have been so predictable. Adding in a Tearjerker warning instead was for those who do have some issues with really sad events, and that warning was clear, right in front of everything. It wouldn't have the same affect if everyone knew right from the beginning that their son died, so I did have reason for leaving it out.
Date: 01/24/12 12:14 pm Title: Chapter Four
I really was expecting this since the last chapter, now im crying like a baby anyway. Poor Colby. But I feel bad for Bill, being alone... when their child died... just so sad.
Date: 01/24/12 09:25 am Title: Chapter Four
I expected it as I read this chapter. How Colby wasn't around when they talked, how Bill didn't need the money, how pained he was when Tom got so joyus over Colby, how he said it was all too late, and how he said meeting Colby was a bad idea. Oh, and how the kid wasn't what Tom first saw as he got out. Did I list down all the clues you used?
Date: 01/24/12 09:19 am Title: Chapter Four
Omg! What happen to Colby?! And aawww. Thanks for writing this lovely but at the monment sad story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 01/24/12 03:46 am Title: Chapter Four
Oh, God, that's so sad :( I can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 01/24/12 02:48 am Title: Chapter Four
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Date: 01/24/12 01:55 am Title: Chapter Four
I couldn't even breathe!!! I am so sad. :'( I expected Bill to have gave him up for adoption and they spend their time trying to find him. Now, I'm sad Tom will never meet his son. Actually depressed me for the night. lol
Date: 01/23/12 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Four
I had a feeling (a bad one) among these angsty lines, but I refused to believe it. It's indeed too late for Tom, and the sad thing here is that there's no way to fix it.
I'm so heartbroken for Bill, I just can't-
Date: 01/23/12 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Four
D: too impressed to write...
Date: 01/23/12 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh my gosh! As I kept reading I just had this feeling Colby had died. I'm so sad for Tom! I really can't wait to read the next chapter and I love this story.
Date: 01/23/12 09:04 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh god... I wasn't expecting that and everyone new it and im all like AWWHAHAHAHAHA *bawling and sobbing* but really I feel so sad and upset not, like I can't explain it! I really wanna read more cause its a great story but now I'm all sad and teary-eyed. Just wondering, did you ever cry or get upset writing this? :'(
Author's Response: A bit, yeah. I don't wanna say I'm totally heartless, but it does actually take a lot for me to literally start crying over a story, but I was definitely heartbroken over writing this one. Especially the last chapter, it took me quite a while to get out.
Date: 01/23/12 06:36 pm Title: Chapter Four
I was about halfway through this chapter then I realized that's what happened. I feel bad for Tom :(
Date: 01/23/12 06:21 pm Title: Chapter Four
Yeah it was what I was expecting ever since I read the summary. Teeeaaaars!
But that's alright because I like the way it huuurts. Um. Yeah. Anyway. I love angst like this. This story is perfect, I love it. Can't wait to see what happens ;_;
Date: 01/23/12 05:22 pm Title: Chapter Four
This is completely what I was expecting. I can't wait to see where it goes from here though.
Date: 01/23/12 04:47 pm Title: Chapter Four
this is exactly what i suspected, but i'm still trying to hold back the tears....i could not be Bill right then. how he lives like that, i dont know....