Date: 01/01/12 10:10 am Title: Chapter One
Ugh, first chapter and my heart is already being torn up D:
I really love the plot of this story and you've made the characters so real and fleshed-out...I can't wait for more!
Date: 01/01/12 09:48 am Title: Chapter One
I know this is going to be good, so keep going!
Date: 01/01/12 06:00 am Title: Chapter One
this sounds like a good story!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 01/01/12 01:34 am Title: Chapter One
I cant stay golden, your eating me alive gah -pulls out hair-
Date: 01/01/12 01:18 am Title: Chapter One
Okay, this already made me want to cry. I didn't, but just the tone of Tom's thoughts, how he's obviously not over Bill, how he wished he'd stayed, but chose his career over true love and a family...It's already tragic!! I can't wait for next Sunday's chapter. Akimashite Omedeto Gozaimasu ^-^ (Happy New Year, in Japanese)
Author's Response: Awhh that's cute. Uhm... Happy new Year, in English! :) Only language I know. xD
Date: 01/01/12 12:39 am Title: Chapter One
I don't know why but since you said 'Tearjerker' I have a feeling either Bill or Colby died or something... Maybe I'm just negative *shrugs*. Overall it's a good story and your writing style is interesting. Can't wait for next Sunday!
Date: 01/01/12 12:11 am Title: Chapter One
This is going to be good! Can't wait for more!