Date: 01/03/12 05:18 am Title: Within His Mind
I like it
Author's Response: Thank you for your review and I'm so happy you like it ♥
Date: 01/03/12 05:14 am Title: Within His Mind
Nd as for voting i think I am going to go with number 5, i really like the sound of that one
Author's Response: Thank you for your vote ♥
Date: 01/03/12 05:13 am Title: Within His Mind
Very interesting start i really ejoyed hope to see another chapter up soon :P
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and the next chapter has been posted. Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/01/12 09:52 pm Title: Within His Mind
Oh and i forgot to say id really like to see some of number 1, 5 nd 6 if thats possible
Author's Response: Thank you for your vote and I'll definitely put them in ♥
Date: 01/01/12 09:51 pm Title: Within His Mind
I've never been a big fan of twincest but because they arent related in this one and im very interested in insane bill i decided to give it a shot and Im very glad I did, please update soon :)
Author's Response: Wow I'm so honoured that you decided to check this story out even despite not liking incest, that means a lot. Thank you so much ♥
Date: 01/01/12 09:45 pm Title: Within His Mind
Im glad you finally decided to do this one Nic xDxD send me the next chapter asap
Author's Response: Haha no problem Daina, and I've already posted the next chapter up. I'll start writing chapter three and let you proof read it though ♥
Date: 01/01/12 02:26 pm Title: Within His Mind
what a great start! very creepy, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Awh that's so kind of you, I'm glad you think it's a great start. Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/01/12 11:54 am Title: Within His Mind
id really like to see number 1 n maybe some of tom going to bills room, i like it
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it, thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/01/12 11:17 am Title: Within His Mind
number 1! :D I like Bill in this story!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like Bill tehe he's so fun to write :D Thank you for your review ♥
Date: 01/01/12 12:48 am Title: Within His Mind
Umm, well, okay. All of these options sound pretty awesome. I would definitely. Like to see geo explain some of Bills history, Tom get assigned to check on Bill nightly, and maybe some Bill acting insane.
This was a nive beginning. I look forward to seeing more! Keep up the awesome work anf have a happy new year!
Author's Response: I've included all of your votes into the next chapter so I hope I did it justice :) I'm so glad you're looking forward to more, and I hope you had a good new year too. Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 12/31/11 05:55 pm Title: Within His Mind
Great story. I love insane Bill and vote for more creepiness with maybe violence towards Bill from other inmates or the staff, and Tom gets to help him so they start to form a bond. Sorry, not trying to write your story for you or anything I just love when Bill is all vulnerable and Tom comes ot the rescue. Update soon. Please.
Author's Response: I absolutely love that idea! I really like the idea of Bill being treated like nothing from other patients, and maybe that's why he doesn't socialize with anyone. And Bill will definitely start to become more vulnerable, and I'm a sucker for Tom coming to the rescue aswell tehe :3 Thank you so much for this amazing review and idea ♥
Date: 12/31/11 12:14 pm Title: Within His Mind
very interesting concept it really does look promising as for the next chapter i think i would actually like to see some violence >.>
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and I will definitely try to include violence ♥
Date: 12/31/11 12:06 pm Title: Within His Mind
i vote for number 5 im definity trackin this, good job so far
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're tracking it that means a lot, thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 12/31/11 12:01 pm Title: Within His Mind
I'm so interested to see where you're taking this, it's fantastic so far. I want to see Bill become really crazy! As always I love your stories :)
Author's Response: You're so sweet honestly. I'm really glad you're interested as to where it's going to be taken, and that's such a sweet compliment, thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 12/31/11 12:01 pm Title: Within His Mind
I'm so interested to see where you're taking this, it's fantastic so far. I want to see Bill become really crazy! As always I love your stories :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review, it means alot ♥
Date: 12/31/11 10:36 am Title: Within His Mind
Aw bill is sooo cute I could just eat him up...a bit crazy though...I want him to get crazier in the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Hehe I want to just pick him up and cuddle him :) And he has definitely got a bit more crazy in the next chapter. Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 12/31/11 04:41 am Title: Within His Mind
I have never read twincest before and I thought I would give it a shot. Who'd a thought I'd track a story?! Please update soon! This is awsum!
Author's Response: I am so honoured that you decided to give it a shot, despite not having read twincest before. I'm so happy you decided to track it, I can't thank you enough for this lovely review ♥
Date: 12/31/11 02:40 am Title: Within His Mind
Damn,this is amazing! I love it! One thing-teeheehee,you said duties XD!!! Sorry,it's hyper-time :P.
Author's Response: Omg that is such a sweet comment, that made me smile. And no problem, I love hyperness. I'm so happy you love it :3 Thank you so much for your amazing review ♥
Date: 12/31/11 01:58 am Title: Within His Mind
I like it, i would choose number 5 n 6 ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and vote