Date: 01/04/12 06:46 pm Title: Within His Mind
Am loving this. I would love to see Gustav as a patient of some sort and as for Bill, a freak out on Tom's shift and maybe a little violence. This story is so well and beautifully written!! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you're loving it :3 And wow that is such a lovely compliment I'm really glad you think so. Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/04/12 02:57 pm Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
Write more! This story is so beautiful already! I'm tracking it! :)
Author's Response: Oh wow, that it such a lovely compliment :3 Thank you so much ♥
Date: 01/04/12 02:40 pm Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
Heya,
Two realy, nicely written chapters. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!
Keep up the good work :)
X
Author's Response: I'm so happy you thought they were nicely written, that's such a compliment :3 Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/04/12 12:34 pm Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
Awesome chapter! I'm starting to really like Bill and his freakiness/cuteness. Hm, I think Gustav could be...working in the kitchens? I dunno why, I can just see him as a chef XD And for the next chapter, I don't mind but I would love some more of Bill's freakiness. And yay, cookies! *takes cookies gratefully and eats them* can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking Bill's character tehe :3 I could also see him as a wee chef, he'd be really adorable working as one. Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/04/12 10:22 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
I think would like it if Gustav is either another patient, or Georg's bf working another floor.^_^
I would like to see funny things with messing things up, and...it might be time for some vience, if you can wangle them both
I believe you can do them both well, because you meshed everything so amazingly well in this chapter. I loved it.
Bill was just so...god, I don't even know. You write crazy pretty well, in my opinion. I'm wondering if he was abused as a kid. I kinda hope Yin is a figment of his imagination and not a mental manisfestation of a real abuser.
Georg really didn't know shizz though. I was a bit disappointed in that, and that the psychiatrists didn't take his drawins seriously...but I am sure more will be explained with time.
Poor Tom, not knowing how to deal with Bill. Ignoring didn't work, interacting doesn't seem to work too well either...it great though
Fantastic work! I can't wait to see more! *huggles*
Author's Response: I must say I absolutely love your reviews, they're so long and make me smile beyond belief. And he's going to be a patient tehe, but you never know he could be having an illegal affair with Georg *Smiles* And I'll definitely be including some childish scenes with Bill and violence is also going to be included in the next chapter, which I'm excited about, well freak out violence if I should say tehe :3 And you really think so? I'm so glad you think I write crazy well, I was so worried I wouldn't be able to. And Georg is a bit dumb, I'll let you in on an early secret though, Georg is a bit of a liar in ways. And yes, Tom is a bit confused at the moment, hopefully he learns how to deal with Bill :3 Thank you so much for this absolutely amazing review *Cuddles* ♥
Date: 01/04/12 06:50 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
i love reading this story! Bill is so mysterious, it keeps me want to read on :D
Author's Response: I'm so happy you love to read it :3 And I'm even more happier you want to read on. Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/04/12 06:22 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
Gustav should be both 4 and 6. and I wanna see 1, 2, 4, and 6.
Author's Response: I will surely see what I can do with those votes also, thank you again for your review :3 ♥
Date: 01/04/12 06:20 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
I loved this chapter. You're really good at building up a creepy atmosphere. Loved Bill's changes from childlike to weird. As for the voting, I think Gustav should be Georg's boyfriend, and in the next chapter I'm gonna be greedy and say how about Bill having a breakdown with Tom around which means he has a freakout but then reverts to more childish behaviour when its over...told you I was greedy so that includes 2,3 and 4. There could even be some violence if he has to be restrained while he's freaking out. Please update soon because I'm really getting into your story.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you loved this chapter. And you really think so? That's such a lovely compliment I never thought I'd be able to make a creepy atmosphere and for it to be noticed :3 And I have definitely included some of your votes and your idea in the next chapter so I hope it's exactly how you'd like it to be tehe. And I'm definitely going to try and make updates as regularly as possible. Thank you so much for your amazing review ♥
Date: 01/04/12 06:16 am Title: Within His Mind
I wanna see 6 happening as well as 5.
Author's Response: I will surely see what I can do with your votes :3 Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/04/12 04:53 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
you never fail to amuse me lol ^.^ I could totally just imagine Bill being all childish and dancing at the end, i adore this :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad it amused you tehe :3 I'm so glad you adore it. Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/04/12 04:46 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
another fantastic chapter xD
Author's Response: Thank you so much ♥
Date: 01/04/12 04:43 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
nd also this was a good update, i liked it plz update again soon
Author's Response: Awh thank you so much :3 ♥
Date: 01/04/12 04:43 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
defo have to go with number 6 and a wee bit of number 2 mixed in, and i vote gus to be a patient (:
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your votes and review ♥
Date: 01/04/12 04:40 am Title: Within His Mind
I got a bit to excited when I saw there was an update, I'm really enjoying this xD I vote for Gustav to be Georg's boyfriend and I'm a sucker for violence, so yeah violence. Update soon
Author's Response: I'm so excited that my updating makes you excited, that means a lot. And I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/04/12 04:39 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
please make gustav another patient, that would be so fun to see and I really would like to see some funny scenes, Bill is so cute when he's childlike ^^ this is so good
Author's Response: He most certainly is a patient tehe. And I will surely include some funny scenes, because I'm a major fan of little childlike things. Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/04/12 04:11 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
6. Geo's boyfriend and 5. Violence
Author's Response: Thank you so much for you review and vote ♥
Date: 01/04/12 04:03 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
I think it would be awesome if Gustav is a patient, but it'd be just as awesome if Gustav is Georg's boyfriend.
As for what I'd like to see next chapter, violence is always my personal preference, but that's just me =)
Great story so far, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I also have a thing for violence so I'll be sure to include it somewhere :) And I really would like to see some fluff between the G's but you never know he could be a patient who Georg illegally has an affair with tehe. I'm so honoured you think it's a great story, thank you so much ♥
Date: 01/04/12 03:52 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
I think Gustav should be another patient and bills friend. And I think bill should get tom to play hide and seek wit him and Gustav. :) good luck.
Author's Response: That sounds like such an adorable idea, I will surely include that somewhere along the line. Thank you so much for your vote and review ♥
Date: 01/04/12 02:01 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
And I forgot to say,this chapter was awesome :D
Author's Response: Awh thank you so much, that means a lot ♥
Date: 01/04/12 12:28 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
Well,for the introduction to Gustav I like number 1 and i think that as far as the next chapter,I think number 2. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and vote ♥