Date: 02/17/12 09:49 pm Title: Leave Out All The Rest
Another awesome chapter :D dang it I hate cliffhangers! well...for the next chapter I think number 4 would be fun XD or perhaps number 2 :3 Can't wait for more!
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Date: 02/16/12 01:19 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
Very interesting.
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Date: 02/07/12 05:48 pm Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
more soon? ;D
Author's Response: There shall be :3 Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/14/12 12:19 am Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
Wow I like all of those options actually. I like 1--4--7--8. I really love this though.
Author's Response: I'm so honoured you're loving it so far, makes me all happy tehe. Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/07/12 07:11 pm Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
i vote for 1, 4, 5, 6, 7,and 8. mehr bitte
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Date: 01/07/12 03:17 pm Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
once again this was amazing, the end part was so creepy in such a simple way, I honestly think you have some type of channel into asylums or something lol I vote for 1, 3, 7 and 8 ^-^
Author's Response: Lol, I did have a strange obsession with them for a while and I was so happy to write Bill as a schizophrenic so that might be why tehe :L Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/07/12 03:15 pm Title: Within His Mind
I love where you're taking this story and I can already tell that this is going to be a promising story overall. I REALLY want to see some of Bill being even more childish and stuff, but I'll be happy whatever you do. Good job again, please update soon.
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Date: 01/07/12 03:13 pm Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
i am so excited plz update as soon as xD
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Date: 01/07/12 03:11 pm Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
another great chappie, update soon and i vote 1
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Date: 01/07/12 03:10 pm Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
this story is just beautiful, maybe some of 7 and I really want to see 8
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Date: 01/07/12 12:17 pm Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
I am so into this story I'm writing the next chapter in my head so I have to hold back or I'll be telling you how I want it to go. Anyway, I vote for 7 , Bill acting up by flooding toilets or something but he's doing it to attract Tom's attention because as a cleaner Tom has to clear up messes. Maybe then a little number 1 with Bill trying to seduce Tom. Followed by 5 with Tom allowing himself to be a little seduced. By the way, I think Gustav's gotta be an animal of some kind...a rat or cat maybe. So glad you're updating regularly.
Author's Response: Oh I really love your idea about Bill doing stuff to attract Tom's attention! I'll definitely try and include that in chapters :3 Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/07/12 09:37 am Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
1 4 5 6 and eight
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Date: 01/07/12 08:31 am Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
6
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Date: 01/07/12 07:52 am Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
Wow, this is amazing! Bill is so funny and at the same time very interesting and mystic.. You've created this character really well. The story gets more and more interesting, looking forward to read more of it! I'm so glad you update so often! I woke up today and saw that part 3 was up, haha made my day ;DD
Thanks for letting us vote and help you create the story, I haven't seen that in other fanfics so much..
Now I'm gonna vote and actually I'd like to vote on all of then cause it sound so exciting, but I'll chose Bill to bacome more seductive, Tom to become more attached and Tom to look after Bill. That'd be cool :D
And the dialogues and everything is much better now!
thanks again, you're awesome!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you think I've created him well, I was worried he bit come off a bit unrealistic at first. Awhh I'm so glad it made your day, your reviews really make mines :3 And I really do enjoy making you and all the other readers part off it so you can get a say in what you'd like to see happen, rather than me do something no one is very fond off lol. Thank you so much for your amazing review ♥
Date: 01/07/12 06:37 am Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
1. Bill all sexy and seductive, YES! :D and 8. would be great, too!
Author's Response: Hehe. I'm going to make Bill quite sexy at some point because it'd just be plain cute to see but at the moment I'll wait until he's a bit sane :L Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/07/12 01:02 am Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
Oh my god,this is amazing! I like all of the ideas,but I think 1,7 & 8 are the ones i want to see most :)
Author's Response: Oh wow! That is such a lovely complicated, I'm so glad you like it. Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/06/12 11:34 pm Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
3. Violence
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Date: 01/06/12 10:52 pm Title: Seeing Is Deceiving
Another awesome chapter! :D Bill really is a strange one, isn't he...
Oh wow, I don't know what to vote for! I pretty much want everything on that list (especially the first one lol) XD But yeah I think any of those things would be cool for the next chapter :3 Can't wait!
Author's Response: Bill really is a strange one :3 I'm sure he'll begin to become more sane eventually though tehe. I'm so happy your excited about the next chapter! Thank you so much for your review ♥
Date: 01/06/12 06:54 pm Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
I'm a new reader and I have to say that I really really love this story, you write beautifully and it's so exciting!! At first I didn't think I was gonna like the font, and I found it kinda hard to read at first, but now I kinda like it ;)) I have one more thing to say about the writing and that is that I think you use enter tu much.. It's confusing to read the dialogues when it's so many down steps. I hope you understand what I mean :)
And to the voting, I thing gustav should be an other patient, but a more normal one. Someone who's more sane haha ;D
And for the next question, I'd like more info about Bill, Bill to have a breakdown when Tom is there and more violence :D
As I said, I love this story and I can hardly wait for more!!
Author's Response: Oh wow that is such a lovely compliment, that really made me smile. And I'm so glad you've gotten used to the font as I'm a big fan of it for some reason. And I've tried my absolute hardest in the next chapter to make the dialogue less confusing, I've only used a small space down this time as I'm a bit weird when it comes to spacing paragraphs. Thank you so much for your lovely review and for your votes :3 ♥
Date: 01/05/12 12:20 am Title: Sincerely Misunderstood
i read one story where Gusti was a mutli personality person and his other personality was like a murderer and i loved that so mayb that? and id love to seee Bill break down while Toms there. Mayb tom could pick up the peices
Author's Response: Oh wow that sounds so interesting, I actually might make Gustav somewhat like this :3 Thank you so much for your review ♥