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Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/12 12:47 pm Title: ( five )

Ohhh TOMI! Yes, do end up in the crook of Bill's arm, you'd enjoy it so much :):)

They work so well together even if Tomi is still unsure about things. I love this, and I'm hoping for a christmassy, coupley ending (n_n)

Author's Response: Hee! Oh yes, Tomi would like to be there a fair bit more than she'd like to admit, I believe. ;D

Let's hope Tomi can see what we can! I hope you enjoy the ending. :D

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/12 02:44 pm Title: ( five )

I can't tell you enough how much I love this story. It's rare to see gender-swap like this, and so well-written! (not that I expect any less from you, darling!)

Can't wait to read more, as always!

XD

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so pleased you're loving it, and I really appreciate the compliment. :) More to cme, tonight!

Reviewer: Liss92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/12 11:10 pm Title: ( five )

didn't think I could love this story anymore but I do :) amazing chapter

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad! :D Thank you.

Reviewer: Twinsational Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/12 10:54 pm Title: ( five )

omg... I'm completely in love with this story... Thank you so much for writing this :-) girl!Tom are a secret favorite of mine :D if you did more that'd be even more wonderful. keep up the beautiful story!!!!



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really pleased you are in love with it! One more part to go. :)

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/12 08:30 pm Title: ( four )

Ah, wah! I wasn't expecting to reach the end when BOOM, I ran out of words. You know how to keep me hooked :):) I'm hoping hoping hoping Tomi can see how good Bill is for ger soon! She's got Mr Perfect RIGHT THERE.

Oh I'm excited for more of this!

Author's Response: Hee! Two more parts to go. ;) I have to dole them out! Ohh, you underestimate how stubborn Tomi is, of course! It's awesome you think that. :) :) :) He certainly does seem to be Mr. Perfect!

Thank you thank you! ♥

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/12 06:37 am Title: ( four )

Hahaha, great ending!

Author's Response: It's not over yet >_>

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/12 01:03 am Title: ( four )

Wow is all I can say about this chapter XD Although I think that Tomi has a sweet mother, Mona does seem pushy and a bit annoying to me. My mother I must say is nothing like Mona so perhaps thats why I feel like that toward her ^^ I also agree about what Tomi says about having childern, if you don't want them, you don't want them. Why is that so hard for others to understand?! I look forward to the end of the story to see how everything plays out!

Author's Response: You're lucky if you don't have a mom like that! >_> My mom is also very pushy, though Mona wasn't exactly modeled on her. But my mom definitely shares Mona's views on kids! I don't get why it's hard for people to understand either. -_- Stick with it, and I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/12 11:35 pm Title: ( one )

I swear you must! This is just plain tortuous

Reviewer: Jane Buz-Jane Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/12 11:31 pm Title: ( one )

I never thought that I'd fall in love with this couple as much as I have. :D I can't wait to see what's next in store for them!

Jane

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/12 11:00 pm Title: ( four )

Why must you end it like that -.-

Author's Response: I try to calculate my chapter breaks for maximum sadism. ;D

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/12 09:10 pm Title: ( three )

ohhh just marry me with your words :):)

Bill's quite hard to read, but at the same time he's blindingly obvious. I adore his character so so so so much. I just wish Tomi would let her walls down a little and let Bill sneak in. They're good for each other, and with each other and aw, they're sweet together too. I adore this and can't wait to find out where it's all going to end :D

Author's Response: Awww, what a lovely thing to say!

Bill is a bit of an enigma, but he's a very focused enigma! ;) I love that everyone can see how good Bill is for her, and Tomi's the one who's so oblivious! Hope you continue to enjoy it ♥

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/12 08:12 pm Title: ( three )

Haha, Bill's adorable! :D

Author's Response: He does his best ;D

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/12 08:03 pm Title: ( two )

I love this :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D

Reviewer: jackhallin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/12 12:37 pm Title: ( three )

I just read all three chapters. I really like they way you've put the characters together and the tension that's in the story. This one's on my tracking list. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so much! I worried a bit that something focused so much on relationships wouldn't get much love, but I'm really pleased to see everyone liking. Thanks!

Reviewer: Ghostie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/12 10:41 pm Title: ( three )

I love your Bill, the way you write him in this is so refreshing. I also always love genderswap and the premise of this is brilliant. I've already read ahead on LJ because I couldn't wait for more and would like you to know that I'd love to read more from this universe. I'd really like to see how their relationship alters in the longterm.

Author's Response: I'm really glad to hear that! I picture Bill being just that intense, unable to settle for someone from his age group because he wants commitment, and Tomi's not necessarily looking for that but she's definitely charmed by Bill. Hmm...I had wanted for this to be a one-shot, but I can see there may be some interesting milestones to visit! We'll see how it goes.

Reviewer: Fighter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/12 05:58 am Title: ( three )

Hah, I adore this fic! Can't wait for next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm so glad, thank you! Next chapter is up with more to come! :)

Reviewer: KnockturnAlley Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/12 12:57 am Title: ( two )

I'm fascinated!! This is awesome ;D

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you think so. :D

Reviewer: mimiblass Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 11:35 pm Title: ( three )

I swear I always love your stories! And I love these characters also. I agree with Liss92 the last scene was great haha I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, that's fantastic to hear! I'm glad you love them. Ohh, we're going great places, stay tuned...

Reviewer: Liss92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 10:52 pm Title: ( three )

haha that last scene in the kitchen was hilarious...I absolutely love these characters! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D Good to hear it was that funny.

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 08:02 pm Title: ( two )

Aw this is so sweet! I really adore Bill's character, oh I love them all tbqh. But Bill in this chapter really takes the cake, what a gentleman, and he's amusing and kind of mysterious atm :):) I'm really enjoying this! You always write such amazing works.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying them! Bill is definitely a gentleman, and very focused on Tomi. Thank you so much! Awww, I really appreciate it.

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