Date: 01/02/12 05:51 pm Title: The Cure : Part I
I find Tom's anger very interesting and trustworthy. He must react with some kind of emotion, it would be strange otherwise. I love how it turned out. You're doing it right, Bill, just go on. :)
Author's Response:
I was thinking he should be more pissed with Bill for keeping him in the dark than anything else. I mean, Bill was supposed to tell him EVERYTHING and he's been hiding something so huge!
Glad you liked what happened ;) In the next chapter they will...well, you'll see.. :p
Date: 01/02/12 05:40 pm Title: The Cause
It's so painful to see Bill's pain. You make it very vivid. Gustav decided to tell Tom... what's up next?!
Happy new year to you too.
Author's Response:
He's hurting a lot, but mostly because he's all alone to handle it. It's not like he can tell Tom...
I'm so glad you think I make it vivid. It's supposed to be.
Happy New year! :)
Date: 01/02/12 05:33 pm Title: Diagnosed
That's so sad for Bill. A big thing to realize.
Author's Response: Yeah, he wasn't exactly prepared for that one..
Date: 12/31/11 05:34 am Title: The Cause
this was a nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 12/31/11 01:01 am Title: The Cause
well, what a cliffy! Can't wait until the next update! Have a safe and fun New Year!
Author's Response: I love cliffhangers - they're deliciously mean ;) Thank you, I did have a safe and fun New Year :) I hope you did too!
Date: 12/30/11 11:35 pm Title: The Cause
Im enjoying this fic a lot! Love the idea. Cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm really glad to hear that! :) Next chapter will be up soon..
Date: 12/30/11 11:26 pm Title: Diagnosed
Haha Gustav is awesome! Very interesting first chapter, Im intrigued to read more!
Author's Response: I <3 smart-ass Gustav! :) I'm glad you think so, thank you!
Date: 12/30/11 11:04 pm Title: The Cause
Poor twinnies. How will Tom deal with this revelation? Man, things are gonna get weird now. I shudder at the awkwardness that's in store for them.
Author's Response: That's the question, isn't it? ;) Yep, things are definitly going to get awkward and uncomfortable and...you know, all that stuff that comes with realising you're in love with your own twin brother. So, I'm guessing a lot of stuff? :p
Date: 12/30/11 05:31 am Title: Diagnosed
this sounds like a really good story!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you think so :) It ain't too long, but things will get..well, spoilers.. ;)
Date: 12/30/11 03:44 am Title: Diagnosed
Great start! I like how Gustav plays doctor.
Author's Response: Aaah, I do love me some Dr. Schäfer XD He's alway at his best when playing all smart and shit. And thank you! :)
Date: 12/30/11 01:20 am Title: Diagnosed
More, more, more!
Author's Response: Your wish is my command, I guess.. More to come soon :)
Date: 12/29/11 11:38 pm Title: Diagnosed
Please do continue, Loved the DR G., maybe georg could give the sex ed LOL
Author's Response: Ahahaha! Now there's a brilliant idea! *ponders* Might have to write another story about that, though, since this one's sort of all finished and stuff.. ;)
Date: 12/29/11 06:11 pm Title: Diagnosed
Awww. *Wibbles alongside of Bill*
Author's Response: Yeah... *Hands over handkerchief*
Date: 12/29/11 05:01 pm Title: Diagnosed
I feel so sorry for Bill, poor Bill, great chapter
Author's Response: Yeah, just imagining finding out that way... I mean, if he'd just been clever enough he could've figured it out months ago. Months, I tell you! Oh well, it's good he's got Gustav there to figure it out for him ;) Thank you!
Date: 12/29/11 03:43 pm Title: Diagnosed
Yeowch! I don't know what would have hurt more, the burned tongue or the heartache. I adored smarty-pants Gustav here! This was super, and I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Hmm, I think I'm gonna go with the burnt tongue here. I mean, you can always fix a broken heart. Sure it takes time, or a cure of sorts, but it's doable. A burn tongue, though, that's really painful and all you can do is wait for it to pass... Uhm, much like with a broken heart. Confused now! ANYWAY, I'm gonna agree with you on Gustav. I like him when he's being all smarty-pants. I think it suits him :) Glad to hear you're enjoying the story so far!
Date: 12/29/11 03:15 pm Title: Diagnosed
I really liked beta-reading this story. It was funny and cute and... well, spoilers. ;)
Author's Response: I'm always happy to hear you like to beta my stories! (Makes me feel less guilty about giving you more work *coughs* You know, a holiday for me means more work for you - it's the only time I feel I have the time to write..) Hehe, yeah, we don't wanna go spoil it for everyone else now, do we? ;) And again, thank you so much, sweetie! :D
Date: 12/29/11 03:01 pm Title: Diagnosed
Please update soon. This is a lovely chapter and a slightly new angle for the Bill/Tom love story.Plus you write very well.
Author's Response: I'll see what I can do about that ;) Thank you so much, I'm so glad you think so!