Date: 08/25/15 11:55 pm Title: Chapter one
I think you could draw out that week. at times it reads like a one-shot and others you're setting up a good fanfic. It ends like it was a one-shot. MAKE UP YO MIND WOMAN. But i like it. i want to know what is up with Tom and David. Also, Tobi, just totally chill? hm...some people need better character development imo. wow, i really did just type imo - look at me! getting all hip and down with this new age internet lingo shit.
Date: 12/29/11 12:55 pm Title: Chapter one
Sam, this was awesome! Your writing is getting so much better and I loved the concept of this story. I can soooo imagine this really happening to some young fan and the thrill they would get. I'm so happy you're back writing. I've missed it. :)
Author's Response: Lol I'm glad you like it:) I'm going to turn it in for an English assignment, and I hope she likes it too:)
Date: 12/28/11 04:44 pm Title: Chapter one
This is really good! You should continue this, like no joke.
Author's Response: Thanks:) I miss writing a lot, so I probably will.:)
Date: 12/28/11 12:18 pm Title: Chapter one
I am IN LOVE with this story already! Please update again soon!! It's such an off-the-wall way for them to meet, and yet something about it is just so.. plausible. Added to my tracked stories!
Author's Response: Thanks:). The really cool thing about this to me is I wrote this On April 1-3 of this year, and a few months later, those pictures came out of Bill with blonde hair and a lot less makeup. I just about died when I saw those. Lol if I get a few more good reviews, I'll post more. Even if I don't get anymore, I might. I dunno yet:)