Date: 01/18/12 01:17 pm Title: ~one~
Awesome reinterpretation of the story, I loved how you twisted it just so that the twins could get into characters.
Indeed umetnica is very talented, she never ceases to amaze me, I was drawn into the story first by her splendid banner, but then I saw your name too, and there I was, in for a treat.
You never dissapoint.
I wonder why everybody calls Bill innocent. He is everything but, so eager to get his mouth on Tom...
I would of asked for a longer and more detailed ending :), but it was very beautiful anyway.
Thank you.
Im gonna check for a sequel, just in case you decide to go for it.
Date: 01/18/12 11:22 am Title: ~six~
oh....!!
this is simply beautiful. i have tears in my eyes. i love the climax, and i thought someone was going to die!!! but what a lovely ending you've written. just, oh so magical!!! *dances happily*
Date: 01/18/12 11:18 am Title: ~six~
i'm glad he didn't kill her...and that everything is going to be alright...
Date: 01/18/12 10:27 am Title: ~six~
That's beautiful.
Actually I just had a shitty day. this really lift up my spirit.
Date: 01/18/12 05:27 am Title: ~six~
Awww! Such a sweet story!!! *_*
And I know that fairytales don't have sequels but couldn't you think about that? I'd love to read how Prince Tom& Prince Bill managed to rule their kingdom together!!! However, great work, it was a pleasure to read! ;) (ps: sorry for the bad English...)
Date: 01/18/12 03:48 am Title: ~six~
*tears flowing down cheeks* Absolutely loved it!!! You did a fine job of incorporating Bill and Tom into Tangled. I love "Happily Ever Afters" and beautifully-written endings. Thank you for writing this. Much love!!
Date: 01/17/12 10:25 am Title: ~five~
This chapter was pure brilliance. I loved everything, Bill's wonder at the world around him and Tom's wonder at Bill. They made wonderful minstrels and I had a good giggle at Bill's second wedding night comment. I snorted, loudly, at the turgid manhood and still have the huge grin on my face. Wonderful sweetie *snuggles*
Date: 01/17/12 02:16 am Title: ~five~
nice...i like the thought of disguises...i love this story...
Date: 01/16/12 10:28 pm Title: ~four~
wow...i love this little adventure...and it's good to have some protection on a dangerous journey...
Date: 01/16/12 06:29 pm Title: ~five~
lol bill and his romance stories. i rather feel that's how I'll be...
Date: 01/16/12 03:47 pm Title: ~five~
Turgid manhood - *squawk* that's awesome!
I'm loving this story so much. so, so, so much. xoxoxo
Date: 01/16/12 12:53 am Title: ~five~
This fic is officially my new crack!! *_* I loved Tangled and you put this together so perfectly! And Bill giving head at the end....DAMN!!! lol
Date: 01/15/12 08:21 am Title: ~five~
Teehee this is so amazing! I just love their magnetic pendants too.
I hope that wasn't Natalie scowling at them!
Lmfao @ Bill calling Tom's junk "turgid manhood"
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Date: 01/15/12 08:21 am Title: ~five~
Teehee this is so amazing! I just love their magnetic pendants too.
I hope that wasn't Natalie scowling at them!
Lmfao @ Bill calling Tom's junk "turgid manhood"
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Date: 01/14/12 11:21 pm Title: ~five~
*cramps up from laughing so hard* Oh Bill...*shakes head* You aren't supposed to say things like that! Its fine for in books but...
Seriously, I laughed for like 3 and a half minutes when that turgid member thing came up... It was also a good chuckle when Bill consideres hismelf somewha of an expert on those matters of kissing and romance and such.
Wonderful chapter. It was very sweet, and funny, and adorable, and hot right toward the end. You really can't argue wityh Bill's logic of 'forbidden romances'...or at least you can't when you are inebriated...hopefully Tom can't when he's sober either.
Date: 01/14/12 08:13 pm Title: ~five~
turgid manhood!!!! omg!!!!
i love the steaminess of this chapter, it was like, perfect. i wonder if Tom will regret any of this later...
Date: 01/14/12 07:48 am Title: ~five~
'throbbing man meat' and 'turgid manhood' LOL xD lol weally nais chapter
Date: 01/14/12 07:47 am Title: ~five~
Oh, you had a fangirl so happy.
Would be even happier is the update is sooner.
I love Bill in this story, all innocent but yet craving for affection.
Date: 01/14/12 01:28 am Title: ~five~
Bill's a romance smut novel junkie! I love it! Oh his view of the world and sex is hilarious!
Date: 01/13/12 11:29 pm Title: ~five~
♥ ♥ ♥ So much love with these two.