Date: 02/02/12 07:57 pm Title: ...And we are the ones that want to choose, Always want to play, But you never want to lose.
Great chapter!
Was it posted as part of this story intentionally or was it meant to be posted in the sequel?
Author's Response: the other story. I'm so sorry
Date: 01/09/12 01:03 pm Title: "..My baby is a 10 We dressing to the 9 He pick me up we 8 Make me feel so lucky 7 He kiss me in his 6 We be making love in 5 Still the one I do this 4 I'm trying to make a 3 From that 2 Still the 1."
great story!!! I cant wait for the sequel!
Date: 01/08/12 05:15 pm Title: "..My baby is a 10 We dressing to the 9 He pick me up we 8 Make me feel so lucky 7 He kiss me in his 6 We be making love in 5 Still the one I do this 4 I'm trying to make a 3 From that 2 Still the 1."
good story
Date: 01/08/12 02:43 pm Title: "..My baby is a 10 We dressing to the 9 He pick me up we 8 Make me feel so lucky 7 He kiss me in his 6 We be making love in 5 Still the one I do this 4 I'm trying to make a 3 From that 2 Still the 1."
So Bill actually died giving birth to Zaphyr. How sad. But a cute baby sister for Zephyr and Tom and Andrej so in love. A wonderful happy ending. looking forward to the sequel.
Date: 01/08/12 01:15 am Title: "... all i want from christmas is you..."
lol @ Tom
Date: 01/07/12 01:06 pm Title: "... all i want from christmas is you..."
aweeeee!!!! that's is soo cuteeee! :) can't wait for the up dateeee!
Date: 01/07/12 01:02 pm Title: "... all i want from christmas is you..."
Lovely, lovely. I'm so excited for Tom and Andrej. What a lovely Christmas present. And the promise ring was so sweet. There's more to come though, right? Because we haven't found out what happened to Bill yet. This is a great story. Please update soon.
Date: 01/06/12 10:44 pm Title: "...Take your time putting on your clothes clothes clothes Look into the mirror and you pose pose pose Learn to live with everything you chose chose chose No one knows a red red rose ..."
nice..more
Date: 01/06/12 12:39 pm Title: "...Take your time putting on your clothes clothes clothes Look into the mirror and you pose pose pose Learn to live with everything you chose chose chose No one knows a red red rose ..."
Andrej is so amusing. I love how Tom is so much more relaxed and happy with him around, and that he gets on so well with Zephyr. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 01/05/12 10:33 am Title: "...it's a new dawn, it's a new day, it's a new life for me..."
That kid is just the cutest thing. I loved the interactions between Zeph and Andrej and that line about models not eating and Tom choking on his waffles was so funny. Tom and Andrej are so good together I hope they can work it out. And I so want to know what really happened to Bill. Please update again soon.
Date: 01/04/12 09:29 pm Title: "...it's a new dawn, it's a new day, it's a new life for me..."
zephyr is so cute.... love their communication they need more of that...Good job
Date: 01/04/12 01:53 pm Title: "... So in love I'll give it all away Just don't tell nobody tomorrow So tonight I'll do it every way Speakers knockin' till the morning light..."
well i didn't see that coming lol :) good job! more please! hahaa
Date: 01/04/12 11:37 am Title: "... So in love I'll give it all away Just don't tell nobody tomorrow So tonight I'll do it every way Speakers knockin' till the morning light..."
I am soooo addicted to this story!! The twists just keep coming. It's amazing!!!
Date: 01/04/12 11:25 am Title: "... So in love I'll give it all away Just don't tell nobody tomorrow So tonight I'll do it every way Speakers knockin' till the morning light..."
omg..tought the baby died with bill but that can only mean bill died during child birth .... longer chapter plzz and more
Date: 01/04/12 10:42 am Title: "... So in love I'll give it all away Just don't tell nobody tomorrow So tonight I'll do it every way Speakers knockin' till the morning light..."
I'm loving this story. Andrej is yummy and I love that he is bringing Tom out of his shell even though Tom is still heartbroken and insecure. Dying to meet Zephyr in the next chapter.
Date: 01/03/12 08:08 pm Title: "...One more shot for us (Another round) Please fill up my cup (Don't mess around) We just wanna see (You shake it now) Now you wanna be (You're naked now)..."
hahahahahhaah gahh where is the rest >.< I am really hooked on this one ^.^
Date: 01/02/12 02:43 am Title: "...One more shot for us (Another round) Please fill up my cup (Don't mess around) We just wanna see (You shake it now) Now you wanna be (You're naked now)..."
loving it... more
Date: 01/01/12 06:08 pm Title: "...Losing my control Here it is the day I have to go Just sit beside me I cant let this show How sick I feel to leave you so alone God I'm terrified..."
I do see them together... more,and gud job
Date: 12/31/11 09:18 pm Title: ...And we are the ones that want to choose, Always want to play, But you never want to lose.
I love ... poor Tom hope Andrej can mend his broken heart.. unto he next chapter
Date: 12/31/11 05:31 am Title: "...Losing my control Here it is the day I have to go Just sit beside me I cant let this show How sick I feel to leave you so alone God I'm terrified..."
Loved this chapter, my favorite by far. Tom and Andrej are getting closer and I'm happy. Oh and lovely trailer, I'm starting to get really excited about this story!