Date: 05/01/23 01:42 am Title: He is a bad boy with a tainted heart...
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 07/27/13 06:55 am Title: But mama, I'm in love with a criminal.
The amount of times I've reread this story is insane. But it just gets better every time! ;-;
Author's Response: oh wow that means a lot to me! thanks so much [hugs you] :)
Date: 02/28/13 08:29 am Title: But mama, I'm in love with a criminal.
this was a god story!
u should do a sequel to this!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll think about it...:P
Date: 03/03/12 08:22 am Title: But mama, I'm in love with a criminal.
this was a really good story!
Author's Response: Aw thanks :)
Date: 01/25/12 08:04 pm Title: He is a bad boy with a tainted heart...
Please excuse me while I go sequel and scream over the prospect that you're tempted to do a squeal. And you're very welcome :D
Author's Response: Hahah XD Well at least now I know someone will read it if I ever do it XD Thanks again ^_^
Date: 01/25/12 01:19 pm Title: But mama, I'm in love with a criminal.
Holy shit o.o I just saw the music video for the song, damn you did a great job at sticking with the video plot. But now that I've seen it and also that you didn't put a character death warning up, I have to really wonder if you're going to write more for this. I'm seriously hoping you will, this was just unbelievably amazing and I love their characters!
I'm seriously trying not to fan girl to much over this story and song right now xD It's not working out to well for me xD
Author's Response: Whoa I'm so humbled by this! Firstly, thanks, I tried to stick with the plot as much as I could :) Yeah, I didn't put the death warning up because I wanted it to be kind of a mystery ;) But a sequel...sounds tempting, I'm not sure what it would be about though XD I dunno, maybe if I think it over a bit I might come up with something :)rnrnAhah, carry on fangirling, it lets me know I've succeeded XD Thanks for the awesome review! :D
Date: 01/22/12 02:52 pm Title: But mama, I'm in love with a criminal.
Good and sad story :-)(
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 01/14/12 04:10 pm Title: But mama, I'm in love with a criminal.
*wipes away tear* i love it!! :'D
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :3
Date: 01/14/12 10:56 am Title: And even I know this ain't smart...
sweet Jesus... so. fucking. sexy. o~o
Author's Response: ^_^ thank you, glad you liked it X3
Date: 01/13/12 08:07 pm Title: But mama, I'm in love with a criminal.
That drawing is not crappy. I would give anything to be able to draw. Your writing is awesome too! :)
Author's Response: Aw thank you, but I think I could have done better :/ Thanks for your kind words! :D
Date: 01/13/12 04:43 pm Title: But mama, I'm in love with a criminal.
aweee!!!!!! I love love love this story you did an amazing job and have you seen the movie In Time? if not you should soo do because it would be so amazing if you did a fic about it :) just a thought but I think the story would be amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for this amazing review! :D I haven't seen that movie yet, I've seen the trailer and I really want to watch it! I could totally imagine writing a fic based on it...hmm :3 Hehe thanks for the idea! Maybe I'll try and drag someone out with me to the cinema to watch it XD
Date: 01/13/12 11:48 am Title: But mama, I'm in love with a criminal.
Aww, Hello there favorite author! I love it, i love how Bill turned into a criminal and Tom was reluctant to let him do so, so sweet:) also It's kinda sad how they got found in the end but, I guess they couldn't be criminals forever and not get caught! the ending actually made me cry 'cause it was so sweet, Your drawing is amazing by the way, Really cute :3 Hope too see more from you soon :) :3
Author's Response: Oh hey there favourite reviewer! XD I always end up making Tom the good guy in some way, even when he's supposed to be a criminal! Lol I don't even. Awwwh, you're sweet :3 Thank you so mucchh! I'm trying to get the next chapter of Renegade written up, and I've got a billion other ideas for fics I don't even know where to start! So you will definitely be seeing more from me :D Love ya!
Date: 01/13/12 06:18 am Title: But mama, I'm in love with a criminal.
Wow...well Bill certainly fell into that kinda of lifestyle awfully quickly.
It was very fast, and unbelieveable, but I still really enjoyed it I can't wait to see what you write next!
Author's Response: Heh, I guess he just had an inner criminal waiting to get out? Lol, I know how totally unrealistic it was but I just did it for fun :P I'm glad you still enjoyed it, though! I'll try and update Renegade soon :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/13/12 05:25 am Title: But mama, I'm in love with a criminal.
N'aww fuck they died :( Oh well at least they were together in the end! I love this story so much, I really do
Author's Response: Well, we don't know if they die or not so it's a mystery really :P Thank you so much! I love you for reviewing :)
Date: 01/07/12 07:49 pm Title: And even I know this ain't smart...
N'aww damn! mI just found this and now have to deal with it nearly being over lol It's really good, I can't wait till you post the next chapter
Author's Response: Aw I'm sorry it's so short but it had to be :P I'll try and post the next chapter within the next few days :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/04/12 02:51 pm Title: He is a bad boy with a tainted heart...
Not Yugioh. I don't know if it's good or not, but from what i've heard it's pretty stupid. No, you should watch Yugioh Abridged. If you search it it should come up ^-^ It's by Little Caribo XD
Author's Response: Lol oh yeah I meant Yugioh Abridged :P Teehee :3
Date: 01/03/12 11:56 pm Title: And even I know this ain't smart...
Trust me, you do NOT suck at writing smut XD The only part in this that was awkward was when Bill was remembering how Bushido had fucked him, and even that wasn't too bad, because it was over so quickly. Lols XD I loved the last line, by the way XD "Screw the world; he was in love with a criminal" XD It reminded me of Yugioh Abridged "Screw the rules, I have money!" XD (Seto Kaiba, the youngest billionaire in anime XD) If you haven't seen Yugioh Abridged, you should watch it. Even if you don't know Yugioh (I've never read the manga or watched the anime) you should still watch the Abridged series. It's effing hilarious XD
Author's Response: Aw thanks! Sometimes I just feel awkward writing smut and I feel like it turns out crappy XD Urg, I hated writing the Bushido part, I know how you feel. I hate Bushido with a passion *shivers* Lol, that sounds funny XD I have heard of Yugioh, but I've never watched it :P Maybe I'll give it a go XD Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/25/11 06:38 pm Title: And even I know this ain't smart...
That wasn't such a sucky sex scene. I liked it well enough. Very nice chapter. I can't. Wait to see how you wrap this little ficlet up!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks, I know I could have done much better though, I was just in such a rush to update :P I'll try and get the last chapter up tomorrow if I can :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/24/11 06:00 pm Title: And even I know this ain't smart...
They had sex already, I like :) Great chapter
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, and there's more to come ;) Thanks!
Date: 12/24/11 12:44 pm Title: And even I know this ain't smart...
awe! I seriously love this fic! :) sad it's only a short fic, great job and it's really great while listening to the song at the same time as reading
Author's Response: Thanks, that means a lot! I'm so happy you like it :) I'd make it longer but I don't really have enough time to :/ Haha, the only thing I listen to when I'm writing it is the song on repeat :P Thanks for reviewing! I'll try and get the last chapter up as soon as I can :)