Date: 12/22/11 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey this is a good story, I can't wait to read more its a bit hard to comet/review on the first chapter but I'm looking forward to reading/stalking your story!
Author's Response: Thanks. It's good to know you want to stalk my story. ^_^
Date: 12/22/11 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't know what should I say... Just... I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: It's ok. Knowing that you want to read more is enough.
Date: 12/22/11 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god! Scary and sad but the twins are sweet. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I wasn't sure how people would react if I put Bill in a situation like this. I don't think a story about a convulsive Bill exists on this site. Of course, whenever someone writes something different or something that's never been seen before, it's a big risk. Thank you for taking the time to review. And the twins are sweet, yes. ^_^ I'm surprised they haven't invented a "Tom rescues/protects/avenges Bill" genre yet because it seems to be a common theme.
Date: 12/21/11 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am really curious to find out what happens next! I hope you continue this :)
Author's Response: Of course I'm going to continue it. Thank you so much for expressing your enthusiasm. When I know someone is reading and they're liking what they read, it's so motivating. Thank you!
Date: 12/21/11 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far. Especially the tone and emotion you add to your writing, very well written.
Author's Response: *Blush* What a compliment. I always think my writing is rather mediocre and I'm never completely satisfied with what I write. I've been writing for a long, long time but I'm quite a beginner with fanfiction. Sometimes I write pages upon pages and then I get frustrated or the story isn't turning out how I want it to and I destroy them and start over again. It's the artist's curse, I guess. Anyway, thank you so much! I really appreciate it.
Date: 12/21/11 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing! Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: I can't tell you how happy it made me to come home from work and see that I had a review. I couldn't wait to get on here and see if anyone had even read my story yet, and I wasn't expecting any reviews. It really made my day. Thank you so, so much!