Date: 02/02/12 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMFG
I wanna know more, are though's creepy dudes really causing Bill's seizures or what
Tell me plz 0.o
Author's Response: Sorry, can't tell you at the moment. But hopefully the answers you seek lie in the next chapter.
Date: 02/02/12 02:49 am Title: Chapter 5
More...more...more
Author's Response: Working on it!
Date: 02/01/12 10:59 am Title: Chapter 5
Your story is so sad, but its also lovely the way Tom cares so deeply for Bill and is so protective. Herr Sauer is a nasty arsehole. Unfortunately there are real teachers like that who get off on the power they have over kids and use it to bully them, rather than helping them learn. I hate to think what will happen when Tom finds out his fears about abuse are true. And I really want to know why Bill is having the seizures as they started before the abuse, but the stress of it seems to have made them worse. You write very well and I'm really looking forward to updates.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, heleng. Many of my math teachers in school were like Herr Sauer. I can really empathize with Bill in that respect, and in other ways as well.
Date: 02/01/12 01:02 am Title: Chapter 5
oh!!! all is fault del teacher!!! poor bill tener q aguantar todo de sus abusadores y encima el profesor ... ojala la siguiente visita con el medico sea algo mas de ayuda :( me alegra que hayas actualizado y me encantaria que lo hagas mas seguido ;D me gusta tu historia y como la escribes asi que continuala por favor ;D
Author's Response: Muchos gracias! :)
Date: 02/01/12 12:47 am Title: Chapter 5
i feel so sad for bill!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm on it!
Date: 01/31/12 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lemme tell you, I know we all have a real life here, but this, this story right here, is really effn good and refreshingly different from a lot of the other fics that are similar to it. I feel so bad for Tom right now because he has to bear the weight of the possibilities without actually knowing. Really well-written. Update asap, please!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really, really appreciate it! Sorry it took so long to update - been working a lot. Hopefully I'll have more time to write soon.
Date: 01/03/12 03:59 am Title: Chapter 4
i fell so bad for bill!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/03/12 12:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Aw, poor twins.
I think having to participate in your abuse can 'hurt' you more than your abuser causing you worse physical pain.
Tom is starting to catch on and hopefully Bill will be able to trust in his support before it escalates horribly.
Author's Response: It certainly can. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/03/12 12:10 am Title: Chapter 4
more more more...I can hardly wait for another update! Thanks :)
Author's Response: Working on it!
Date: 01/02/12 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really like this chapter. I feel so bad for Bill, wanting to protect Tom, but I'm also scared for what may happen to him next at school. Great writing and such detail just like your last chapters. Good work!!!! Can't wait to read more of this.
Author's Response: Thank you! Aw, it always makes me so happy when someone reviews! ^_^
Date: 12/27/11 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bill. I totally could 'feel' what he wrote in his diary. I feel bad for Tom's situation too. Being hurt sucks. And being around someone who's hurt sucks. :(
Author's Response: I'm so happy you're able to empathize with Bill and Tom in my story. It means I'm getting the emotional content of my writing across. :)
Date: 12/26/11 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
poor bill
please update soon
Author's Response: Danke schön! I'm working on it!
Date: 12/26/11 12:42 am Title: Chapter 3
This fic is quite sad. :C poor Billy, first seizures, and then sexual assault. It must be difficult to hide both from his twin now that he feels something could happen to Tom.
LOOKING FORWARD TO MOOOOOORE! :D
And happy late christmas!
Author's Response: Woah! Haha, I'm working on it.rnrnYeah, it is quite sad, and I have a bit of a guilty conscience because it doesn't exactly show Bill in a positive light. You know, like I'm a little paranoid that when he's bored he looks at the stories on here and thinks "Wow, these people are fucking sick." Then again, I'm sure he has much better things to do...rnrnHappy Holidays!
Date: 12/26/11 12:35 am Title: Chapter 3
continua please... me esta gustando....
y no entiendo muy bien porque tuvo los ataques antes del asalto? o ya le habia pasado antes?
;D
Author's Response: Hola, Ninel,rnrnPor favor, disculpe mi español, yo no lo hablan del todo bien. Me alegro de que están disfrutando de mi historia. No puedo decir nada sobre la relación entre los ataques de Bill y el asalto, ya que es una especie de gran parte de la historia que vendrá después. Sé que es un derecho poco confuso ahora. Gracias por leer! ¡Feliz Navidad!
Date: 12/25/11 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
I am a little confused, although I really enjoyed this chapter. What's the reason for Bill's seizures? Did they start because of the assault? In any case, keep up the great work!! I'm still enjoying this, but if you get a chance, please answer my question if you don't mind.
Author's Response: "What's the reason for Bill's seizures?"rnrnSSSSSHHHHHHHHH!!! Shush! You're not supposed to know yet! All in good time, my friend. :)rnrnI'm glad you're enjoying the story. Merry Christmas!rnrn
Date: 12/25/11 08:00 am Title: Chapter 2
this sounds like a good story!
an i fell so sad about what happend to bill in this chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/24/11 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really like this story. Very well-written and I can't wait to see what happens next. I feel so bad for Tom. You write them well, the twins. Can't wait to read more of this!!!
Author's Response: I write the twins well?! *Squee!!!* Thank you so much for your comments. I'm working on the next chapter.
Date: 12/24/11 01:58 am Title: Chapter 2
Nein, nein, nein....dont leave us hanging like that O____O I will be on the edge of my seat waiting for an update!!! Thank you for this update!
Author's Response: Sorry! Thanks for your enthusiasm!
Date: 12/23/11 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
please update soon
I really like this fic
and happy holidays
Author's Response: Thanks, Sieren! I'm working on it. Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/23/11 02:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my, I cannot wait for more!!
Author's Response: Chapter 2 is on it's way, I promise! It's just waiting to be validated!