Date: 04/09/14 05:03 am Title: Chapter 1
"God! It’s like he’s your fucking wife or something!"... Hahahaha... little does she know.. Lol. This was a cute fic. I like that Tom bought Bill flowers, and then the end- "Sure thing, Tom-fucking-Kaulitz... You can make dinner."... Haha, awesome. :)
Date: 10/05/12 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol that was cute xD
Date: 12/17/11 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, I liked the cute story, and I can tell you that my heart broke together with Bill's - my poor baby :/ What I didn't like about the story is how odd you write sometimes. Sometimes you don't write a new paragraph, you just hit shift once and it makes the stody look weird.. But that's my only complain.
Author's Response: I definitely always appreciate any input from readers and take what they have to say into consideration. Im looking into what youve said about the paragraphs, since Im not quite sure if thats a wrong form or writing or not. Im curious now haha. If so, Ill make sure to fix it up. :) Thanks for the help and for reading.
Date: 12/17/11 09:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey, what's a great explanation of the Ria incident.
Date: 12/17/11 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1
I wasn't sure how this was going to go, but it was cute! And I've totally had kisses like that. Um, no thanks. lol
I love how much thought Tom put into the flowers, and then the image of him following Bill like a lost puppy. So cute.
Date: 12/17/11 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Hahahaha Too lovely. I loved it and, if I wouldn't be this little freak, I wouldn't think that could actually happen in real life :O I loved the whole feel it had to it; it sounded pretty real to me, but that's just me lol
Author's Response: No worries. Im 'a little freak' too. I wrote it how I see it. ;)
Date: 12/17/11 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1
This was incredibly adorable. I loved the way you wrote it, with the humor and the twin's relationship. It's a winner!
Author's Response: Many thanks. :) Glad you liked.
Date: 12/16/11 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
awwwww. Bill/Tom forever! (^^)/
Date: 12/16/11 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was awesome. I loved the 'mouth-rape'. Poor Tom. :)
Date: 12/16/11 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this fanfic. Even more now that fandon is in chaos. Kkkkkkkkk
Sweet and beautiful. And to think that many gay celebrities actually do this. Bill! Don't cry! (I loved the part of flowers)
Date: 12/16/11 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Mouth rape!" Oh Tom, you're friggin' adorable! Great job!
Date: 12/16/11 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL !! I needed that xD