Date: 12/13/11 01:40 am Title: Fine Line
Whoa damn, I was not expecting that last line. Good god, Tom's a douche in this, and I don't feel bad saying that at all. Bill puts up with too much, though I do understand his motivation. It's humiliating, really, that he puts himself though that. There's got to be someone else out there for him. It may not be immediate, but even the wait has got to be better than what he's going through now.
And btw, this was NOT boring. *hugs*
Author's Response: That last line is exactly why I knew I needed to write this. Painfully humiliating, isn't it? Tom is such a douche, but Bill is the one that keeps going back to him time after time, so it's kind of a two-way street there. And true, there are lots of other fish in the sea for him, but Bill really only wants this one.
And thank you. I'm very happy that you didn't think it was boring, because at times, I couldn't tell the difference. ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 12/13/11 12:26 am Title: Fine Line
This is such an emotional story. My heart breaks for both of them. I can't wait for another installment in this series.
Author's Response: My heart breaks, too. We can only hope it gets better as time goes on, but that is not always a possibility, you know? Sometimes too much has been done and said to fix things. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though, and that it's stuck with you (even if that's not necessarily a happy thing). Thank you for reading. ♥
Date: 12/13/11 12:08 am Title: Fine Line
well you're just rainbows and butterflies aren't you? Seriously, you gonna keep breaking my heart w/ these or is this ever going to work out.
Author's Response: I'm a ray of fucking sunshine! xD
But no, seriously, I'm probably just going to keep breaking your heart with them, and I'm sorry for that. =(
Date: 12/12/11 10:56 pm Title: Fine Line
Heartwrenching, frustratingly, rejected unloved situation my gosh this is sooooo intense, you really let me feel the way when a person rejects you and only uses you for personal satisfaction. Wow I'm overwhelmed about the situation. Can you write a come back for Bill? You know I'm not a one shot series fan reader you know but you catch my attention really, is this a personal experience of yours? very nasty but I'm hoping for the best come back, can you?....^_^GOODLUCK!
Author's Response: I'm really hoping to write a third story after this one because I have a scene that is still very vivid in my mind, and yes, just as heartwrenching and frustrating. And yes, this story (all of the stories, actually) stems from a personal experience, unfortunately. I will definitely try to get that third story written! Thank you so much for reading. ♥
Date: 12/12/11 10:19 pm Title: Fine Line
Heartbreaking, even more than its prequel. How do you manage to write something that's so beautiful yet so painful, ugh. My favourite kind of angst. Thank you for this.
Author's Response: Personal experience? Except the experience hasn't been beautiful. It's just been...gut-wrenchingly frustrating. But I'm glad you can enjoy the story. Thank YOU for reading. ♥
Date: 12/12/11 10:01 pm Title: Fine Line
.~. You're breaking my heart, here.
Author's Response: I'm sorry. =*(
Date: 12/12/11 09:33 pm Title: Fine Line
Oh my god, this made me want to cry. The sense of rejection and want and pain is so real. Beautifully written and oh, so painful.
Author's Response: Thankyou and I'msorry and whatever else you need to hear. ♥
Date: 12/12/11 09:32 pm Title: Fine Line
why is everyone making me cry tonight??? * looks for tissues* okay, enough reading sad stuff. i need to go read happy stuff.
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I had to get out some angst, and it came out like this. Go read something fluffy; I won't hold it against you at all. ♥
Date: 12/12/11 09:17 pm Title: Fine Line
What an asshole
Stoopid Bill and mean Tom
Author's Response: =P I hope that means you liked it? <3
Date: 12/12/11 09:01 pm Title: Fine Line
Oh, my heart ;_; I'm so glad you've written more of this, and I hope your 'possible' third part becomes a certainty!
I am at least feeling optimistic that Tom invited him over when he was obviously not in the best place for this either, literally and emotionally. It definitely didn't feel like he was only inviting Bill over because he was horny.
I feel terrible hoping for a happy ending for them, because I truly don't believe all stories require one and sometimes it's more realistic to go another way (as both parts of this have demonstrated), but Bill's hope and disappointment are just so infectious. I think one of the most amazing things about their story is that it makes me feel just as masochistic as Bill, heh.
Thank you for sharing more!
Author's Response: It would be nice if all stories had happy endings, but not all of them do. And as far as realism goes, this one will be about as realistic as they come. (Not saying it won't end up having a happy ending, but from this standpoint, can you see it?) I'm so sorry it's making you feel masochistic, but what a fantastic compliment. I'm strange, I know, but thank you very much. ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 12/12/11 08:43 pm Title: Fine Line
Awwww, this was so heartbreaking. Poor Bill, I feel so bad for him. I'm sure Tom maybe felt bad that he couldn't get it up, but the way he behaved with Bill is definitely not helping matters, especially since he was the one to initiate contact this time. I'l be looking forward to more whenever you have time to write it.
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom's kind of...well, he's kind of a jackass, I'm afraid. At least, in Bill's mind he is. But I don't know that I'd feel TOO bad for Bill, as he's the one that keeps coming back time after time. I'm looking forward to writing the next one, if I can find the time (I currently have an over-abundance of inspiration for it). Thank you. <333
Date: 12/12/11 08:42 pm Title: Fine Line
My heart. It hurts ._.
Author's Response: Mine too, doll, mine too. =(
Date: 12/12/11 08:39 pm Title: Fine Line
That's it...I'm done with these characters. I don't think I can take another story of Bill being walked all over and actually letting Tom do it. I want to hate Tom and smack Bill upside the head. A wonderful sequel sweetie. You know I'll read the next one as well because I can't get enough of your writing. :)
Author's Response: I wish I could be done with them as well, but as it is, I can't. I know what you mean about wanting to hate Tom and smack Bill upside the head. (Why DOES he continue to do this to himself?!) I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you'll enjoy the next one, if it ever comes. ♥