Date: 02/17/12 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yay! New chapter! I was so happy to read this :) Thank you sooo much for updating. Glad that Bill's not gay ;P I can't wait to learn who the "bad guy" is. I also cannot wait something to happen between Emma and Bill. I can't wait to read the next chapter :)
Date: 02/13/12 12:22 am Title: Chapter 2
“They are fairly lazy…” LOL! This made me laugh!
Enjoying your story so far. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Awe, I'm glad you're enjoying it!! :DrnNext chapter is tomorrow :D
Date: 02/12/12 01:05 am Title: Prologue
Is Gustav the bad guy? I think he's short, and he was the one to go with Jost to tell the fans about the cancellation, so maybe both of em if there are two. I like this story so far, added to watch list ... or read list, which ever.
Author's Response: Awe, thank you <3!! And, all I can say about the bad guy is this: I tell you somewhere within the first three chapters, but you wont figure it out unless you pay super duper uber close attention :)
Date: 02/11/12 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
I loved this chapter! I was excited to start reading it.
Okay, time to make comments on the chapter itself.
1)I actually like Emma; she's a good character. It doesn't seem like she's a "betty sue" like you said or whatever it is, but that's my opinion, some people might say otherwise.
2)No Bill, I'm sorry, Jon/Tom and Emma interaction?!?! Gahhh! No :( I was actually waiting for some more cute conversations between the too :)
3)I'm pretty sure that Devon likes Emma.
4)And about my second guess that I never got to tell you... I think that... it is... either... Gustav or Georg o.O
I don't know. I'm not sure.
I can't wait for more! Are you going to update again on Monday? Or is the next one going to be updated on Saturday?
Author's Response: Awe, Im glad you liked it! :D I'm glad you dont think she's a betty sue, I try not to make my female characters the stereotypical, well, to put it bluntly, bella swan characters who have no personality or anything :D And, I knew there'd be sadness about them not interacting, but it was kinda necessary, I hafta show that Emma's life doesnt revolve around "jon" cause that's a weird plot o.o Hm...Does he? Maybe ;) As for your bad guy guess....Maybeeeeee. Maybe not ;) And of course I'm updating on Monday! I'm obsessed with this fic...the problem is i hafta update my torg/gom fic and my other story that went on hiatus for a year o.o I'm a bad updater :(
Date: 02/07/12 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh my God! I have another guess about the bad guy... Although I'm pretty sure that I'm wrong. I'm just gonna wait until the day you reveal him to us :D
Author's Response: What's your guess? :) rn
Date: 02/07/12 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
:O
Holy shizzles! Another update?!? Hallelujah! Yes! Lol, please excuse my extreme excitement (I'm running off of caffeine currently).
So, I really loved this chapter, especially the part where "Jon" said that he would let Emma call him Voldy :D I'm really liking the conversations that there having; first Winnie the Pooh and now Harry Potter? Yay! I wonder what's in the store in the next chapter.
So, "Jon" wants to be called "Tom," eh? I have a feeling that that's somehow gonna lead him to Tom Kaulitz. And the last sentence of the chapter O.o Tell me that's he actually wasn't gay! Pleaseee.
I like how you're going with the story; not too fast, not too slow. Just right. And Emma and Bill's characters seem very good
And PLEASE don't give up on this! I beg you. Or I will probably go crawl in my bed and cry for a long time :P No seriously, don't give up on this story. People drive me crazy when they do that; they'll start a very good story and decide to abandon it, leaving us all hanging and begging for them to continue.
Finally: I think that the bad guy is Andreas, or it could be Jost too; I dont like that guy for some reason, so I'm gonna blame him :P
Author's Response: Aweeee thank you <3 First thing, being called Tom isn't what leads him to TH :) it'll be a surprise! The Tom thing is just to show that he and Tom still share the psychological link that twins share. I'm sad nobody went awwwwe about it, but oh well! And you'll find out next chapter what he is. It's just a comic relief from the angst, really. You'll understand on Saturday! And, as far as your last comment, all I can say is what I've told anyone who asked about the culprit: his identity has already been revealed. Just not in a way that's obvious. rn
Date: 02/07/12 08:06 am Title: Chapter 3
hmmm...i have no clue who the culprit is...at least he's remembering even if it's not all unicorns and glitter...emma is a very dedicated daughter but she has to realize that she does have to take care of herself or she could make a life altering mistake to a patient...
Author's Response: She puts everybody before herself, it may lead to something else...;) But, in the very near future a certain somebody is going to put her in her place! And, also; hint: the culprit was already revealed, just in a clever way ;)
Date: 02/07/12 06:37 am Title: Chapter 3
Love this!!! Can't wait for more
Lol voldy awesome!!!
Author's Response: Hello! And thank you <3 Expect more odd conversations between those two, lol
Date: 02/07/12 03:18 am Title: Prologue
OMG your an amazing writer i cant wait for more :) please update soom in itching to read YA :D
Author's Response: First, hello! And welcome to Level 18! :D Second; thank you <3 Update'll be up on saturday!
Date: 02/06/12 07:39 am Title: Chapter 2
i'm not understanding why if he's her sister's idol she doesn't know what he looks like...if my sister's interested in something, i look it up to see what the hype's all about...just sayin...although i'm sure there's a reason for it...but i do like it and will definitely keep my eyes peeled for the next chapter...
Author's Response: It'll make sense soon!
Date: 02/05/12 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh :) I loved it; I love how they're getting along so well. I actually thought that you gave up on this story since you didn't update for some time, but I'm happy to hear that you're going to update weekly from now on :) Thank you about that information.
The chapter was great. I loved the Winnie the Pooh conversation that they had ^.^
I can't wait to see what's up with Emma and her mom being away from Christina and her dad...
I can't wait for the next chapter; I'm so excited :D
Author's Response: Give up on a story? Impossible! Sometimes I'll take ages, but I'll never give up :D And, I figure the weekly updates is the best way to make sure I actually update in a timely manner :) Winnie the Pooh was just stuck in my head while I was writing it, they're so adorable...I think I like these characters the most! Honestly, there's not much story behind Emma's family situation, it'll just help lead to something thats going to happen to her sometime in the future...Thank you for the lovely review <3 rnrnps. The next chapter will have triple the "awwwwe" moments because of something our favourite Jon Doe says! That's all I'm saying o.o
Date: 12/19/11 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1
hopefully it'll be a little easier now that bill's awake...i'm really curious as to what exactly happened...i'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter...
Author's Response: As soon as I find my notebook, I'll type the next chapter up and post it!rnrn
Date: 12/18/11 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is absolutely amazing. I honestly nearly shed a tear at the end when Tom started crying, I could just feel all the emotions. The pacing in this is wonderful, you're moving it at a very good pace. I'm so excited for when Bill remembers his name and everything else and the day him and Tom are reunited. I'm thinking well ahead already haha. Anyhow this was another amazing chapter, I'm so excited for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you <3
Date: 12/17/11 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. this is really good. i'd like to read more of this. please update again soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! <3 I'm working on chapter two as we speak :)
Date: 12/16/11 06:49 pm Title: Prologue
I absolutely adore this story already, it sounds so interesting. I'm very excited to see where this is going to go. You've done a fantastic job already. Definitely being put into my tracked stories, hope you updated soon. I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter should be up by sunday!!
Date: 12/12/11 05:32 pm Title: Prologue
OMG!!! that's horrible...but why aren't they searching for him? unless they don't think to look in the states...i'm hooked and i'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter...
Author's Response: I can't spoil the secret o.o rnBut the next chapter should be out by sunday! And thank you <3