Date: 12/16/11 08:28 pm Title: Loveless.
Awwww Sarah, this was so bittersweet and I absolutely loved it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much Maril :)
Date: 12/08/11 10:50 am Title: Loveless.
Oh my gosh I loved it so much!!! I dot see any signs of struggle that you said while writing this. It was absolutely flawless I love every bit, even though it was sad. Marie I root for her as she sorted out her priorities and knew what she had was the best thing to have, as well as bill to accept it is a bitter pill to swallow.
AMAZING!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much, you really are too kind.
Date: 12/08/11 10:33 am Title: Loveless.
I actually like this, the plot is interesting though it could have been taken further, of course I don't necessarily blame you at all, is very characteristic of Tokio Hotel Official to limit their writers to the cliche, rated G love plots,although I think yours is not exactly as cliche, is just safe. You are a good writer and I personally think you should write in a site where restrictions are more tolerant, or reasonable.Where you can explore more unconventional, "risky" themes because as a writer is important yo have that freedom, otherwise it feels like your creativity and potential are being sabotaged.
Author's Response: I couldn't agree more! There's not doubt that I could have taken it so much further; like more about how Bill and Marie's relationship grew, but I was just so sick of this I didn't really care (I was given a lengthy paragraph and I had to stick almost exactly to that.) I'm a bit of a maverick, so I try to write about something different, so this was sorta like a chore, and I think that's really depressing. That's why I like THF, because people appreciate different things. rn
Though, I do have a soft spot for THO as it was what caused me to begin writing, and I got a lot of encouragement when I first started. rn
Ok, sorry for the rant!! Thank you very much for your view - I really appreciate people like you who are able to give their honest opinion!!