Date: 12/05/13 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jackson Pollock, great. Any one from a family of teen agers will identify with this although our boys obviously did not have to face outraged parents. The brothers attacking each other only to stand as one is also well understood. I smiled while reading it not only because it was visually friendly but because I once had been there myself.
Date: 09/11/13 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aha, I don't really like Spaghetti but I'd like to eat it like that once. We should do that. And I can see them doing this. I mean, there's like the pizza thing in World behind my wall. They would really do something like this, children. It made me smile. And hungry.
Author's Response: Oh my, I forgot about that pizza fight, haha. Spaghetti is yummy! Even if you don't like it I'm glad reading about it made you hungry; food is good. And thank you for your review! :-)
Date: 05/01/12 12:20 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL! I can just see this happening :) Nice!
Date: 12/08/11 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked the length and the whimsical situation. I'll bet Jutta never made spaghetti again, after seeing it all over the boys and the walls. I adored Bill's role as the leader of the dissented party. He was their voice. He was their representative. He fought for their rights till the end, when the spaghetti fight began. Highly entertaining read! Thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: Hey, I'm sorry for the delayed response (I blame my mailbox for letting things get lost)... Jutta probably never did, and it would have been a twist of irony if the boys decided after than pasta *wasn't* so bad - it *is* the twin's favourite food. I'm so glad that you enjoyed Bill's role in this story and enjoyed reading it. Thanks very much for taking the time to leave your lovely review.