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Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/11 02:31 am Title: What to my wondering eyes

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Mimaia Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/11 08:45 am Title: What to my wondering eyes

Just so you know, you write the best Christmas stories. I loved The Cynic last year and i'm loving this one as well. :) 

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/11 08:02 am Title: What to my wondering eyes

this sounds like a really good story!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/11 07:59 pm Title: What to my wondering eyes

Ohhhh Tom, you do-gooder you. I'm with Tom, he should talk to Bill about this, I like the sound of a late night chat :) This is the most fabulous christmas fic! So so fab (n_n)

Reviewer: jackhallin Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/11 07:03 pm Title: What to my wondering eyes

I should sooooo be studying instead of reading. >.>; I get excited every time I see that you've posted something, and this story's no exception. I really like the way you weave the characters into the story. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: JoshRamseyRox Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/11 06:48 pm Title: What to my wondering eyes

wow this story seems interesting.. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/11 06:04 pm Title: What to my wondering eyes

wow...it has to be alot to take in...but that was sweet of him to help that guy out...and i hope bill's awake too...

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/11 05:10 pm Title: What to my wondering eyes

Aha I love reading this, made me laugh and smile :D Tom putting on the santa hat like a helmet, getting ready to go to battle. And all those kids, some named after vampires xD That poor child ;_;

Reviewer: Magical Girl Kiki Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/11 03:15 pm Title: What to my wondering eyes

Hi.

Tom and Bill get - with difficulty - a few explanations. Gustav is définitively not a talker....But it's what makes his charm.
So Tom is not the real Santa, just A santa, here to help the real one during the holidays.
Tom doesn't seem to take it badly, but he will need time to trully grasp what his duty is.
But he has already begun to do it - with the kids of course- but with Alexander.
Even if he lost money ( satsifaction greatest reward, huh!) I think he will be rewarded at the end by getting Bill. They're closer and it won't end here.

I like this story, please don't stop writing, it always makes my day to read those Christmas-inspired chapters!!!
Love and kiss
Kiki

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/11 01:12 pm Title: What to my wondering eyes

Awww! I can't get over how cute Bill and Tom are together =P Awesome chapter as usual, keep them coming! =D

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/11 12:46 pm Title: What to my wondering eyes

Awwww, poor Tom, this would be more than enough to have anyone needing to talk to someone who understands what he's going through. *huggles him* Hopefully being a Santa Claus is going to have more perks than turning a bit psychic for Tom, but for the time being I'm pretty sure he's going to love that it's brought him closer to Bill than he already was. (Or at least I hope so, lol) Loving this!

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/11 10:21 am Title: What to my wondering eyes

and talking leads to smut. right? sorry, i'm in a mood. excellent chapter as usual!

Reviewer: ophelia_seven Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/11 07:32 am Title: What to my wondering eyes

Oh, so it's going to be like that. I wonder what Geo has going on...? Hmmm.

And I like the way this family/spouse importance of Bill is going. ;) But poor Tom, jeez. That has to be a lot to take in all at once.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/11 02:16 am Title: What to my wondering eyes

Ahhh hes ein Santa, not der Santa. Got it.

Aww, Bill's 'family/spouse' important. I loved GUstav's 'tude in this. I kinda hope we will be hearing a bit more from him.

This was just an all around lovly chapter. I loved every bit of it. I can't wait to see more!

Reviewer: ophelia_seven Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/11 10:52 pm Title: To see what was the matter

Yes, yes! I can't wait to see what Gustav has to say. I'm picturing him just like Bernard (That was his name from the movie, wasn't it? It's been a while. lol), but with all of the Gustav mannerisms. It's kind of awesome. lol

I can't wait to see where you're taking this.

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/11 05:24 pm Title: To see what was the matter

Glad to know Tom is gonna hangs onto his good looks! I really like the characters and how Bill and Tom act around each other, so cute! Thanks for the regular updates!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/11 05:23 pm Title: And then in a twinkling

This is such a fun fic! I'm really enjoying it so far =D

Reviewer: eley Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/11 09:55 am Title: To see what was the matter

Gah >.< I am so excited!!! BEST XMAS FIC EVER!!! ^.^

Reviewer: lena163 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/11 02:11 pm Title: Arose such a clatter

Best christmas fic so far :D Great story, great characters, great great writing AND fast updates, la crème de la crème quoi.

I'm looking forward to more and I would really be delighted to translate it into french if you allow me to :) We would credit you of course and we would post it here (if you want to see): http://traductions-th-ea.skyrock.com/.

If you want to join me, you can send me a mail at applecrumble@live.fr

Wathever your answer is, thanks again for this story, I can't wait for more :D

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/11 09:12 am Title: To see what was the matter

Aaahhh, this is so cute!!! You write the best Christmas stories, I swear. :)

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