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Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/24/11 01:58 am Title: Sprang from my bed

Great chapter!

Reviewer: JoshRamseyRox Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 08:40 pm Title: Sprang from my bed

oh snap that's something different while going to eat with someone :D

Reviewer: jeanisfunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 08:39 pm Title: Sprang from my bed

I didn't think I could love a Christmas fic as much as I loved the Christmas Cynic, and then you went and did this.

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 12:08 pm Title: Sprang from my bed

Hee! It's a joy to see Bill slowly crumbling to Bill's advances. ;D

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 11:27 am Title: Sprang from my bed

it's a daaaaate! and tell me tom isn't sitting in ihop not realizing he has a beard suddenly stuck to his face.

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 09:03 am Title: Sprang from my bed

now they're starting to pick him out...that's hysterical...but it's adorable...and a date with bill...that's great...i love the playful banter between them...can't wait to see what happens next...

 

and have a Merry Christmas...

 

Reviewer: mairasm Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 08:17 am Title: Visions of sugarplums

hahahahahahah lovely chapter, sooo sweet!!!
Thanks again for updating!!!

Reviewer: Magical Girl Kiki Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 06:27 am Title: Sprang from my bed

I had their first kiss...even if the real first is just a peck for expressing Tom's joy.
But hey I don't complain. They really are closer in this chapter and Tom's duty as a Santa improves....
Everything seems to go very well... So why do I have the impression something will soon go bad????

Please feel free to prove me wrong in the following chapters!!!
Lots of kisses just for you.
Kiki

Reviewer: Magical Girl Kiki Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 06:13 am Title: Visions of sugarplums

Hi.
The more chapters you gie us, the more Tom takes his duty seriously.
A Santa fund for helping parents who can't buy something for their kids.... So cute!!!
And I'm not even surprised that Bill found it to be a good idea and was ready to help.

And Bill talked about Tom, huh? Tom slowly creeps his way into Bill's heart. I can't wait to show their first kiss (without the beard!- it would be creepy for Bill to kiss Tom with it) and so much more!

I'm going to read the next chapter. I'm a bit late in my reading, but I still love this story.

Kiki

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 05:51 am Title: What to my wondering eyes

I wish I had powers like that! I'd love to be able to help people like that. =)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 05:06 am Title: And then in a twinkling

ooh, i love a good mystery. how weird for them though. =)

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 04:42 am Title: Sprang from my bed

dang, really?? i wonder what their parents will say xD giving their kids ideas that santa is beardless and homosexual

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 02:42 am Title: Sprang from my bed

I don't think their parents would be too pleased to see their twins sitting on some gangsta lookin 20-some year old guys lap next to an 'obviously gay' guy on top of it. I am quite interested in seeing how he handles this situation.

Bill's exe's boss was so hmophobic that the ex got fired for having a gay friend? There has to be a lawsuit in there somewhere, at least in the US. Ex was an ass, blaming Bill for getting him fired. With that homophobic a boss, there is no way he could;ve hid it forever, something would;ve slipped eventually.

I'm glad Tom found Ian's mom so easily. And that Ian now knows who to look for if he ever gets lost again.

Wonderful chapter. I'm fo sho excited for tomorrows update!

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/11 01:23 am Title: Sprang from my bed

Whoa say wha just happened? xD Post soon I can't wait to see what the hell is goin' on xD

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/11 06:18 pm Title: Visions of sugarplums

That little boy. Omg just awwwh!

Reviewer: Syllie1992 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/11 04:44 pm Title: Visions of sugarplums

Awh, Tom is so sweet with kids, I like it, great chapter

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/11 12:46 pm Title: Visions of sugarplums

aw, tom's so sweet with little ian!

Reviewer: JoshRamseyRox Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/11 10:39 am Title: Visions of sugarplums

Wow that was interesting I wonder when Bill will finally allow Tom to cord him :D

Reviewer: Leela89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/11 09:19 am Title: Arose such a clatter

I'm keeping this fic to read on Christmas eve while waiting for Santa (celebrating on 24th ;) so an daily update until 25th would make my christmas!
thank you :)

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/11 07:05 am Title: Visions of sugarplums

i know how hard it is to see people who are less fortunate than others...all you want to do is help...and in his case, he's at least trying...it's cute that bill talks about him...and they held hands...it's progress...helping the kid is a sweet thing to do...but at least he's better prepared to help...

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