Date: 12/09/11 02:41 pm Title: Arose such a clatter
Oh my God, I know what this story is based on and I hope that Tom doesn't get all fat and old, please keep him as he is XD And I'm guessing that Gustav is the head elf like that other guy in the Santa Clause movie? It would be epic if he was!
Date: 12/09/11 01:24 pm Title: And then in a twinkling
Dun dun dun... I'm guessing Gustav was an elf then huh?
Date: 12/09/11 01:11 pm Title: And then in a twinkling
Bill's soft, even, soothing voice! ♥
"Bill always threw the wall back up just when he seemed about to relent" -- poor Tom, but that's just so sweet! To read about, I mean. Maybe I like seeing them suffer a bit. *g*
I have no idea what movie this is based on, so it's all very mysterious and intriguing for me! And ha, I knew it had to be Gustav. :) Looking forward to reading more of this!
Date: 12/09/11 12:48 pm Title: And then in a twinkling
DUN DUN DUUUNNNN!!!
Date: 12/09/11 12:10 pm Title: And then in a twinkling
Intriguing! I can't wait to find out how it's going to play out from now, what with Tom's new suit and Gustav making an appearance to disappear all evidence of the crash. I'm so loving this! Thanks for the update!
Date: 12/09/11 11:07 am Title: And then in a twinkling
oh I don't want Tom to end up being fat and looking like santa... XD PLEASE KEEP HIM SMEXY.
otherwise, good job. :3
Date: 12/09/11 10:13 am Title: And then in a twinkling
HEHEHHEHEHE OMG!! This is soo interesting it has me giggly ^.^
Date: 12/09/11 10:09 am Title: And then in a twinkling
THE PLOT THICKENS. *props chin on hands to wait for more*
Date: 12/09/11 08:07 am Title: And then in a twinkling
to me it sounds a bit like the santa clause...with tim allen...and now no one knows what happened...tom's becoming santa...that's what...
Date: 12/09/11 07:37 am Title: And then in a twinkling
Hi.
Bill and Tom handled this situation how they could....Not too bad considering said situation.
But....when Tom touched the hat, he somehow accpeted to BE SAnta for this Christmas, didn't he?
Otherwise, how did the reindeer accept to be touched by him? And how was this suit hanged in Tom's closet? And how did nobody know about what happened and about Gustav????
the only thing positive is the small step in the right direction about Tom and Bill's relation. They're becoming a tad closer than before thanks to the strangness they were put in.
Just...I totally don't know the movie this strory is inspired from. Since I'm french, maybe it's a typical American movie I never saw....
How will all this turn? Let's wait and see it in the next chapter....But I feel it will be more fun and mystery...A very good mix.
See you soon!
Kiki
Date: 12/09/11 06:57 am Title: And then in a twinkling
Oooohhh snap. I could just head the dramatic music at the end there xD This is fantastic.
Date: 12/09/11 05:27 am Title: And then in a twinkling
o_o Getting creepy, yet insanely interesting...*fidgets anxiously, waiting for the next chapter*
Date: 12/09/11 02:50 am Title: And then in a twinkling
.............;3 this is getting good. but please, please don't make Tom get fat and old xD
Date: 12/09/11 01:41 am Title: And then in a twinkling
Uh Oh...Thats...odd, to say the least.
Another wonderful chapter Kish, can't wait to see more!
Date: 12/09/11 01:37 am Title: And then in a twinkling
I heard that magical Christmas happening bring people closer together. Whooo~ I like this story! It makes me feel a little giddy, and I'm not sure why.
Date: 12/09/11 01:33 am Title: Arose such a clatter
I was not expecting the chapter to end like that!
Date: 12/08/11 11:49 pm Title: Arose such a clatter
o.o woah cant wait for more
Date: 12/08/11 12:40 am Title: Arose such a clatter
You are totally re-inventing The Santa Clause, aren't you? With Tim Allen? This is gonna be awesome! Except...you aren't gonna make Tom get all old and fat and stuff right?
This was a really siffy beginning! I can't wait to see more soon! Keep up the fantastic work!
Date: 12/07/11 01:47 pm Title: Arose such a clatter
ooh, what a great way to start the story!!!! you've always been the best at holiday fanfic, so this is going into my favorites.
Date: 12/07/11 01:05 pm Title: Arose such a clatter
Hi.
This first chapter seems very promising.
I like the relation between Bill and Tom... because Tom is persistant in a cute way and Bill pushes him back in the same way....
But hey....A flying sleigh??? Don't tell me Tom almost hit the sleigh of Stana?????
Wow.... Tom will become an real help for Santa and then- one way or another- this will help Tom to win Bill? I hope so.
Count on me for next chapter, I'm sure I will like it too.
Big Kisses
Kiki