Date: 03/26/12 06:24 am Title: Is This Okay?
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 03/25/12 11:37 pm Title: Is This Okay?
Awww... it's cute :) Bill's like Tomi's little vampire pet or something lol. I don't know if I should be scared of Bill or fall in love with him just like Tom.
Author's Response: Don't be scared of Bill! He wouldn't hurt a fly...if he know's what they are :3
Date: 03/25/12 04:36 pm Title: Is This Okay?
I could just imagine the part with the yawn. Tom's face would be hilarious
Date: 03/06/12 11:58 pm Title: New Emotions
The chapters are super short and i feel like i'm just getting into it and it's done. I like the idea though. I just want to know more about Bill and why he was sent to Tom.
Author's Response: Don't worry. You'll find out more about Bill's reason of being sent to Tom. They're short only because it's just starting. Please stay, we promise not to disappoint you if you do~
Date: 02/23/12 04:28 pm Title: Thirsty?
UPDATE!!!!
Author's Response: We will! We're writing it right now! <3
Date: 01/02/12 05:36 am Title: Thirsty?
nice chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 01/02/12 01:08 am Title: Thirsty?
waiting for more as it is interesting so far
Date: 01/02/12 12:13 am Title: Who's There?
But I must note, you might want to change catagorey to Slash instead of Het, seeing as you have referred to Bill as male....also, if Bill is going to be drinking blood, you might want to add vampire to the warnings, even if he is technically a Demon. Its something people might like to know.
Author's Response: Thank you...we have changed the things you have noted.
Date: 01/02/12 12:11 am Title: Thirsty?
Mmm Yes Tom, it is very normal to feel light headed when losing blood.
Hmm...this is kinda interesting. I think I will Track you.
Date: 12/31/11 08:09 pm Title: With A Hint Of Blood
*squeal*
Lillith likes very much. ;)
Author's Response: Glad you like it!
Date: 12/30/11 10:30 am Title: With A Hint Of Blood
this sounds like a really good story!!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Why thank you! We should be posting another chapter soon!
Date: 12/07/11 11:09 pm Title: Who's There?
Whoa...um, I was interested in reading this, but then BAM-wall of text.
I can't read it.
Maybe consider splitting it into smaller paragraphs or something?
Author's Response: I understand what you mean. I think I fixed the problem. Check the chapter, is it any better?
Date: 12/07/11 10:27 am Title: Who's There?
Loooooooove!!!! :D