Date: 10/29/12 05:48 pm Title: The Solution.
Mpreg is always so difficult to handle. I think there are two ways to do it: either make it exceptional or make it normal. I prefer the latter way, but I think you're doing well with the first one. I appriciate the explanation and look really forward of how this pregnancy will go on and what else there will happen.
Tom is so gentle and protective. I like that. :)
Date: 10/29/12 04:46 pm Title: The Problem
Awww, that is so sweet... and sad! I fully understand Bill's longing, me being a woman at that age, but without children. The longing is so strong, but still so disatant when you know you can't. I think it's really sweet when you will make them have the baby out of love and not exactly accidentally (?).
Maybe it's something Tom's fortune cokie foresaw? :)
I think this wiull be a very interesting fic and I'm all for mpreg, too! :)
Date: 10/28/12 08:41 am Title: The Solution.
Just so you know (not a critic, don't worry xD) portuguese and spanish people tend to have fair skin, as for eyes and hair color it varies a lot, of course brown eyes and hair is the more usual for genetic probabilities but that's what happens in USA too. Not even in france you notice a different skin color, that happens mostly in italy, where as you must know people have what we call "olive" skin.
Date: 10/28/12 08:16 am Title: The Problem
hey, you just got a new fan!
Date: 12/17/11 07:26 pm Title: The Problem
D'aww, look at Tom trying to give Bill the moon. So sweet. ^_^ Tracking this one. :)
Date: 12/11/11 05:36 pm Title: The Problem
I'm interested and e4xcited to see where you are taking this, because the way you approach mpreg is both natural and kind of fragile in a beautiful way. I hope you'll continue this, because so far I see this promising and definitely want to read more. I could really use some nice mpreg now. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like this- I'm glad the approach of Bill's desires for a baby seemed natural. I thought I'd maybe rushed it a little. And I will definitely continue this, though I am worried that I won't do the storyline I have all planned out justice so my perfectionist nature with my writings (which I never think good enough) may mean updates take a little while. But I'd rather be slower and do mpreg justice since I find there are only a few fics that approach this topic in a realistic way- I just hope this story will be one of them. Thank you for reading and reviewing as well, darling. xo
Date: 12/09/11 11:54 am Title: The Problem
I would love to see that loving family, it would be a grat thing to happen
Author's Response: The twins would make such wonderful, loving parents, right? Thank you for reading and reviewing. xo
Date: 12/05/11 05:01 pm Title: The Problem
I thought it was sooo cute! If they have a baby I really hope it's a boy, I don't like reading about girls :c But Bill and Tom are adorable together, Tom treats Bill so sweetly :3
Author's Response: Bill and Tom are extremely adorable. And yes, our Tomi treats Bill as though he's made of precious materials. Thank you for reading and reviewing. xo
Date: 12/04/11 10:20 pm Title: The Problem
Yeah, I like the sound of this. Would be interesting to see how the twins make it work. Keep going? :)
Author's Response: Glad you like it so far. Yes, I'm keeping going. I'm already working on the next chapter right now. xo
Date: 12/04/11 08:15 pm Title: The Problem
This seems like it's going to be a very interesting story, so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was so worried that people wouldn't like it. I'll try and update soon, love. xo