Date: 01/01/12 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
This was so sweet, and sad, and poor Bill, and with the whole "I appreciate your honesty" thing, it was like when my ex broke up with me...except we were actually together, not just friends with benefits...but still, the honesty thing really tore me up.
Author's Response: aw, i'm sorry! *hands you a tissue*
Author's Response: aw, i'm sorry! *hands you a tissue*
Date: 01/01/12 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
I loved this story, but the sad ending kind of broke my heart.. :)
Author's Response: *helps you pick up pieces* i'm sorry for the heartbreak, but thanks for reading just the same!
Date: 01/01/12 03:47 am Title: Chapter 9
Even though it was a sad ending, it was still good :) not everything in life has a happy ending! I do love your stories though, even the ones that end with me wanting to cry haha
Author's Response: thanks for loving me...well, my stories...in spite of the crying
Date: 01/01/12 03:18 am Title: Chapter 9
Sorry it's me agani!, I had to go and read all the reviews you got, I knew some people were gonna cry over the ending right...just wanted to said if there were to read Anne Franks's diary, you think they´ll commite suicide? 'cause I doubt they'll get a sequel of THAT (lame joke) DON't make a sequel, continue to write whatever u want and be true to yourself! happy new year!
Author's Response: yeah, a sequel is unlikely. i was thinking about it last night (yes, that's how i spent my new year's) and i thought if i do a sequel with a happy ending, then what was the point of the first story? and if i do a sequel with a sad ending, i basically just re-wrote the first story. and breaking bill's heart two stories in a row would just be mean! lol oh well, on to other things.
Date: 01/01/12 03:10 am Title: Chapter 9
I absolutely loved the whole story, yeah! the end was a little sad but realistic if we think about it, tom was leaving for college and bill was still too young, if tom would've said they could work something out long distance, it would have felt too "ideal" and forced,ya know, those long distance romance never last in real life, I'm glad u kept it real even though many girls are gonna be displeased with the ending. BTW this is one of the first stories in 3 years of so where Bill isn't a virgin!LOL thanks god you didn't pull that card! ...realistic, well writen...you should totally be a published writer honey! ;)
Author's Response: that's me. always keepin' it real. lol i do enjoy a happy ending, don't get me wrong. but sometimes, i just wanna write someone's heart getting broken. makes life more interesting, in my opinion. as for me being published, from your lips to god's ears. that's sorta been a dream of mine since i was 15. looooong time ago. lol thanks for reading!
Date: 01/01/12 02:20 am Title: Chapter 9
that was really great written and pleasure to read, just this last chapter.... oh God, first this sad ending, then info about plans for next story with Torg... looks like I have bad luck recently. seems for some time I can only hope for another story with twins from you. happy new year!
Author's Response: well the twins will be in my torg story, but they're just twins. i do have a couple sappy twinly moments, but nothing slashy. but you can always go back and re-read all my yummy twc stories! lol
Date: 01/01/12 12:20 am Title: Chapter 9
aww that was sad its an ending yet dosent seem like an ending :D Well it leaves us lovable readers to dream out what happens maybe 4-5 years later :D Loved the story!
Author's Response: sort of an ending? an ending for this chapter of their lives? whatever, thanks for reading! lol
Date: 12/31/11 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
crushed....devastated...stupid tom, kick his ass okay out of my system, LOve it
Author's Response: wow. excellent emotional response. thanks for reading!
Date: 12/31/11 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
I would possibly like to see a follow up story to this. Tom at college, Bill back at school and becoming even better at becoming a musician. They run into each other over break or something and Tom realizes feelings? That would be pretty awesome. But also I feel like this story ended really well. I enjoyed reading it and I look forward to your next story.
Author's Response: i'm considering it. best i can offer at the moment though.
Date: 12/31/11 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
That broke my heart!!! :(
Author's Response: i'm just breaking hearts left and right tonight! thanks for reading anyway!
Date: 12/31/11 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
lol my mom is about to burn down the house with her first attempt to make a puff pastry XD! That's the only thing that kept me from crying for Bill. But I think that this was actually really realistic. It was super cute, still, even though he got let down. I just want to hug him *pout*. Anyway, happy new year darling
Author's Response: wow. thanks mom for the assist! lol and feel free to hug bill. bill likes hugs. thanks for reading!
Date: 12/31/11 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh my god, this totally broke my heart too..
Author's Response: aaww!
Date: 12/31/11 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
I loved all the chapters except the last one =( I wanted a happy ending! Amazing story tho!
Author's Response: just can't always have a happy ending. thanks for reading though!
Date: 12/31/11 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
I just noticed this has ended. Guess I should have paid attention when I read it lol. But a sequel would be awesome :)
Author's Response: caught ya off guard there, didn't i? thanks for reading!
Date: 12/31/11 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 9
Gosh darnit! XD I was hoping the "completed" thing wouldn't be checked. Sooooo extremely sad, but like a couple others here, I love the realism.
Hmm, I agree with Fyredancer in that it felt abrupt... but oh wellz. *shrug*
Author's Response: life's gotta be a little sad sometimes. thanks for reading!
Date: 12/31/11 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
And, people, please stop saying that this is a realistic ending, im almost crying here, hey...!
Date: 12/31/11 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
Too too short! I kinda figured this was gonna happen. Now I'm even more excited to see what will happen next.
Author's Response: next? nothing. lol
Date: 12/31/11 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
Well. He broke Bills heart in a very civilised manner, so...
I cant be mad. (after all, I can tell myself that it is just a story, but keep that a secret)
Author's Response: he's not a total jerk, he's just not looking for a relationship. thanks for reading!
Date: 12/31/11 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
Aw, damn it. Ptttttttttttttthhhhh! (Is that how you spell it - lol).
Like the fluffhead that I am, I hoped the ending could be different. Since it couldn't, what I NOW want is for George to start dating Bill, and for THEM to really get attached, and for Tom to be pining away in California, unable to forget Bill, no matter how he tries, and when he comes back, he finds that he has no chance with Bill anymore.
Meh!
Author's Response: that would be interesting, seeing how georg is straight. i know bill is freakin' gorgeous, but is he THAT freakin' gorgeous?
Author's Response: that would be interesting, seeing how georg is straight. i know bill is freakin' gorgeous, but is he THAT freakin' gorgeous?
Date: 12/31/11 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
Damn you *is sad* I hoped things would work out better. But I suppose this is more realistic.
It was a nice ending though. Its sad to see it over...maybe you have a sequel in store? Maaybe in a few years they run back in to eachother and hit it off again? *hinthintnudgenudge* keep up the wonderful workM
Author's Response: i have thoughts for a sequel...but don't hold your breath waiting for it.